KEEPERS OF THE PEACE (Attack of the Clones edit - RELEASED!) — Page 2

Kamino Color Correction and comparison.

Here you can see the more grounded tone.
Pay attention to the prime minister’s face. I think it looks quite good.
Plus, I place the walking scene just after the meeting, as you can see.

https://vimeo.com/326639137
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OBI WAN VS JANGO FETT Clip.

https://vimeo.com/326890945
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You can see the color correction and the new cut.

TATOOINE CLIP.

1. Complete color correction.
2. Digitally removed C3PO from two shots.
3. Trimmed dialogue between Anakin and Padmé (to reduce bad acting).
4. Audio still to be perfected.

https://vimeo.com/327057681
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Really enjoying seeing the colour corrected scenes - much more agreeable on the eye and also more in keeping with the OT. The trimmed dialogue for the Tatooine clip works well for me too 😃

Thank you so much for these feedbacks.
One or two moments need a little bit of work for the audio 😉

Senate comparison.

I always hated how the Senate looks different from movie to movie.
In the first it’s blueish, in the second yellow (as everything in this movie), in the third black (or at least pretty dark).
I want it to be consistent. I already changed the color in Shadow of the past (there is a clip in its post page).
Here’s the comparison for KOTP.

http://screenshotcomparison.com/comparison/132975

PS: It won’t be Jar Jar the one who gives powers to Palpatine. We actually don’t see this. Windu enters, and we cut to the Senators cheering for Palpatine.

Creation of the Clone army clip.

Ok, I really need a feedback on this.
You can see the color correction. I think it works quite well.
This scene is placed just after the Dooku/Padmé dialogue scene (from the deleted scenes, used to replace the droid factory action sequence).
Tell me what you think about the music track. Of course it’s from ROTJ.
I know it can sound too joyful, but at this point the Republic and Palpatine are meant to be the good guys. And both Yoda and Windu are listening. We should not, as audience, be afraid of what’s to come. After all, even in ROTJ this music is used even if the characters know they are going into some sort of battle.

Anyway, here it is.
https://vimeo.com/327437747
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^ I think the music fits well - it didn’t take me out of the scene, and as you say - from the viewer’s perspective watching the films I to VI, makes sense that the creation of a Republic army is seen as a good thing…

I agree. The music works quite well. AND I like how the scene starts with the chanting of Palps name.

Thank you both. I will keep it then.
Yeah, I had to add the senators praising Palpy to remove the voice of Jar Jar.
As soon as I update my internet connection I will release Shadow of the past (EpI edit) and then this one 😉

Updated changelist & Yoda/Dooku clip.

As I said before, Yoda doesn’t use a lightsaber.
Here’s my cut of the scene. Yoda arrives when the three are still fighting, and just as he calls Dooku, the Sith uses the Force and runs.

I will try to change Dooku’s lightsaber color. I’d like to keep the revelation of him being a Sith lord at the end. But I don’t know if I can, so this can be the final version.

https://vimeo.com/327932283
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FULL TRAILER.

https://vimeo.com/328125943

It’s almost done. I’ll have to wait my new internet line to upload the two edits, but they are coming.
As a whole, I’m pretty satisfied about how it’s coming out.

As you can see, I decided to change Dooku’s lightsaber color into purple. I’m thinking about not mentioning him as a Sith lord until the very end, by placing the meeting with Palpatine as the final scene.
The purple lightsaber shows that he is not really a Jedi but also not a Sith, at least until the ending.
I don’t know if I’ll change also Windu’s lightsaber…

Problem solved. I can’t change Windu’s lightsaber. I work on the edit with Sony Vegas, and even with a frame-by-frame masking, the color change on his lightsaber looks awful… But I finished Dooku’s saber CC 😉

Final duel clip.

Here you can see:

1. Color Correction.
2. Dooku’s lightsaber turned into purple.
3. Trimmed duel.
4. No Anakin and Dooku playing helicopters.
5. Yoda arrives earlier.
6. No Yoda fighting.

Tell me what you think of it 😉

https://vimeo.com/328810341
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The purple lightsaber doesn’t look very good. You can still see the red in many shots.

Ok, this is what I need. I will work on it.
Is that all or there’s something else?

No other flaws that I noticed, but Dooku’s lightsaber really needs work.

I’m not able to do it with clips, but how cool would it look?
The main problem with PT’s Yoda is the eyes, IMHO. Too different from puppet Yoda.

Edit also uploaded on Google Drive. PM me for link 😉

EDIT: Sorry, wrong post. It’s the other edit, this one is not finished yet.

Wow that looks pretty good. I didn’t realize how different the eyes are. Seriously, has anyone started messing around with deepfakes? Could something like this be done?

Excuse me, what’s deepfakes?