Grand Admiral Thrawn said:
Grand Admiral Thrawn said:
Just thinking…
- Redo Poe’s Illum line
- Maybe cleanup/redo Finn’s: “It’s the First Order, they’ve found us line.”
- An angry line for Poe about making the First Order pay after the destruction of the Hosnian System (helping to explain why they are continuing the assault)
- Potential line for Lor San Tekka (or Kylo) clarifying that it isn’t a map that Luke left to find him, but a map that leads to an ancient Jedi Temple where Luke may be, clearing up the confusion on why Luke would leave a map if he didn’t want to be found.
- Maybe some kind of line before Rey leaves to find Luke about starting an evacuation soon because the First Order is coming to D’Qar to counterattack.
- Any Leia exposition lines that could be on comms during the Starkiller X-Wing battle?
- A Maz Kanata line about having to leave soon to go settle a union dispute (TLJ connection)
- Over the loudspeaker at the Resistance base in the background “Rose Tico, please report to maintenance.”
Hey @JarJar, I posted this before. Not sure if any of these are feasble.
I actually think Finn’s “they’ve found us” line sounds quite good.
Kylo would probably be the best person to replace lines for regarding the map. Changing from:
“The map to Skywalker. We know you found it…” to “The map to the first Jedi temple. Skywalker must be there. And now you’re going to give it to the First Order.”
I understand why they dumped in the part about San Tekka finding it to explain why both Kylo and Poe are only now going after it, but that’s just such a clunky explanation when it could be as simple as San Tekka keeping it a secret until he feels it’s the right moment.
