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Holy shit that description of Jannah… like, what? That might be excusable in a children’s book, but this is a book for adults. Nah. Good thing you caught that haha.
I would also remove that ham fisted comparison to Fathiers (mostly because I would also remove that detour from TLJ).
It’s interesting how you combined the whispers with the physical element of the dagger. I like it.