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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released) — Page 543

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whoa sherlockpotter, this is really well done

the dark side of the force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural

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Master Lawdog said:

If anyone is still interested in my attempt, I’m not the best editor in terms of manipulation to audio, but I took Luke’s line, “I’m going to burn it all down,” took “burn” and cut off the last part to mix it in with the “th” part in “death of her son.”

I just updated my editing software, and it will take some getting used to. Sorry about that late reply.

This is ingenious. Please share.

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heil palpatine.

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I like sherlockpotter’s attempt, if we go that route, but I also have no problem with keeping the theatrical line as-is. It was never really a problem for me, even if foreshadowing Ben’s death so obviously isn’t really necessary.

Also interested in Master Lawdog’s version. That sounds like a promising idea, but it’ll depend on Luke’s tone when he says “burn.”

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Yeah. ‘Sensing the end’ is a kind of ‘will of the force’ thing, so it’s very easy to roll with it.

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Seamless. Sounds great.

“Always in motion is the future”

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I wonder if a slight pause could help a little. Either “Leia told me that she had sense the end-- of her Jedi path” or “Leia told me that she had sensed-- the end of her Jedi path.”
It sounds like Luke is ramping up to emphasize part of the sentence and never does, with his tone changing in a way that doesn’t seem intuitive.

Well done. I will disengage self-destruct initiative.

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“Leia told me that she had sensed… PAUSE… she had sensed the end of her Jedi path”

Kinda makes Luke seem a little upset she didn’t finish her training. Whatever works!

The Skywalker Saga:
I / II / III / IV / V / VI / VII / VIII / IX
This is the way.

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“Leia told me… that she had sensed the end of her Jedi path.”

Reading/thinking about the text alone, I think a quick pause in this spot would be most natural.

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I’ll try getting my attempt out as soon as possible.

The name’s Lawson. Noah Lawson.

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sherlockpotter said:

Hal 9000 said:

Sentence mixing it in my head, it doesn’t seem like it’d sound natural. There ought to be emphasis somewhere in the sentence, like “Leia told me she sensed the end of her Jedi path.”

This was my go at it:

sherlockpotter said:

https://streamable.com/ehphfh

Oh I like the direction of that. A lot. I do agree with others, maybe adding a pause at some point would help “sell” this since it feels like a build up without a pay off, but having a pause, even a moment, would help it.

“Because you are a PalpaWalker?”

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Does anyone here still have the link to that guy who tried doing an impression of Luke saying that line?

The name’s Lawson. Noah Lawson.

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Have to agree, changing the line really seems like a small thing, but it really gives a lot to the overall feel of the scene and it just seems to fit Leia’s character more.

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Here is a compilation I made for the Rey Nobody version. I’ll also post this to that thread. Let me know if it works.

https://vimeo.com/580074316
PASSWORD: fanedit

The name’s Lawson. Noah Lawson.

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It seems a little weird that there is a long quiet pause and then Rey says “Stop talking!”
Also, The “Tell me where you are” feels a little weirdly placed.
There’s some audio clipping around 3:00 mark onward through that whole scene.

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Movies Remastered said:

It seems a little weird that there is a long quiet pause and then Rey says “Stop talking!”
Also, The “Tell me where you are” feels a little weirdly placed.
There’s some audio clipping around 3:00 mark onward through that whole scene.

Yeah, I know about the clipping. I took audio from a sample a user in the Rey Nobody thread used as a pitch and tried mixing it in 5.1. This is just a pitch as well.

Also, Hal said he removed “They sold you to protect you.”

The name’s Lawson. Noah Lawson.

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A year ago, I posted a video to showcase a better way of restructuring the aftermath of Leia’s death. I decided to update it since many of the elements done in the original video are slightly primitive. I know this may not too much since this is your edit, Hal, and you can do whatever you’d like, but I’d still like to at least show it off for everyone to see.

https://vimeo.com/583158626
PASSWORD: fanedit

The name’s Lawson. Noah Lawson.

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Nice editing work, really. However, it might just be me, but that feels like it’s really jumping all over the place in this clip. Like to the point where things revealed and told to me are harder to keep track of. But maybe the original movie is worse, it’s really been a while at this point.

Save the Sebastian Shaw Ghost! Save the dream…!

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Icecream2448 said:

Nice editing work, really. However, it might just be me, but that feels like its really jumping all over the place in this clip. Like to the point where things revealed and told to me are harder to keep track of. But maybe the original movie is worse, it’s really been a while at this point.

It originally played out this way:

Poe, Finn and Chewie Receive the News
Kylo Ren’s Redemption
Palpatine Informs Pryde
Destruction of Kijimi
The Resistance Receives the News
Poe Talks to Leia & Lando
Finn Talks to D-O
Finn & Poe Talk About Occhi
Rey & Luke’s Scene
Threepio & Artoo Reunite
Artoo Restores Threepio’s Memory
Resistance Track Rey

Hal removed the destruction of Kijimi from his edit. I also split Threepio and Artoo’s scenes apart and replaced Threepio’s line, “Under no circumstances” with “Full of surprises, aren’t you” (taken from the Lego game). I also added in ariel stock footage of jungle/forest scenery for Ajan Kloss as Chewie cries out.

The name’s Lawson. Noah Lawson.

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May I propose a different order that seems to be a little more focused and hopefully allows less jumping around to other planets and topics:

Focus on Leia:

  • Poe, Finn and Chewie Receive the News
  • Poe Talks to Leia & Lando
  • Kylo Ren’s Redemption
  • Palpatine Informs Pryde

Droids:

  • Finn Talks to D-O
  • Reunite & Artoo Restores Threepio’s Memory

Rey:

  • Finn & Poe Talk About Occhi
  • Rey & Luke’s Scene
  • Resistance Track Rey

The Skywalker Saga:
I / II / III / IV / V / VI / VII / VIII / IX
This is the way.