- Post
- #236901
- Topic
- Episode II: Shroud of the Dark Side (the TM edit) (Released)
- Link
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/236901/action/topic#236901
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At least the word "probably" should go. But that's just me. It just doesn't sound...right.
I'm not attached to the following, but have a look anyway:
"Not only have you killed many Jedi today, you've just killed Padme!"
or
"You've just taken Padme's life!"
or
"Lifeless she is!" -hey, maybe Yoda rubbed off on him!
The idea you're going for, Trooperman is great! And using other Chris Lee dialoge is a great idea! Any thought to using other dialoge for other characters (like Padme?)
Anyway, THIS scene is what I'm really looking foward to seeing! ...and of course the rest of the movie!
Again, if you need to take your time...take it! It'll be worth it!