brash_stryker said:
One change I've implemented already is to move the Senate scene of Palpatine getting his emergency powers to immediately after Padme and Anakin leave Coruscant. He doesn't say anything about creating an Army because in my crawl, it will explain the army is common knowledge already. At the end of this scene, Mace doesn't say anything about going to Geonosis to help Obi Wan, and I've tweaked Yoda's line:
Mace: It is done then
Yoda: Hmmmmmm
*pause*
Yoda: Visit, Obi wan will, the cloners on Kamino.......and see this army they have created for the republic.
Obviously the reason being to track down the bounty hunter, under the ruse of 'inspecting' the army.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=49L3xzkZ3Pc
It's still VERY rough. I've done no work yet to smooth it out or add background music to Yoda's tweaked line. It's just in place ready for when I get to the audio stage.
SSWR, how would your idea be accomplished? And what narration do you mean? I'm definitely interested :)
Hmmm...your idea sounds like it'll work well...
I'm not quite sure how my idea would be accomplished! lol...after effects would be a must though! I started working on an idea...I'll let you know if I really get anywhere ;)
And as far as narration...well...I DO know that I like the idea of the clone army being common knowledge. And now that you've explained that Obi wan will still go to Kamino under the ruse of 'inspecting' the army...well I think that should work well.
I'm very excited for your edit! I don't know where I can really help you in this...mostly ideas, I guess! :D