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- #1582716
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- Star Wars: A New Hope DEVASTATOR EDITION (V.2 a WIP)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1582716/action/topic#1582716
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Ooo! Me likey! š
Ooo! Me likey! š
Very cool! Thanks for sharing!
I bet in the not-so-distant future, there will be a way to use ai technology to ārecoverā that lost detailā¦
Wow! Simply the best restoration Iāve seen yet!
After these scenes, were you planning on looking at cleaning up any others (ESB or ROTJ)?
Damn, thatās the best Iāve seen yet! You did that in a day? Whatās your software and process?
I wouldāve thought it would be easiest to roto Luke and the droid, make clean background plates, track them in, slap some grain on topā¦but Iāve never tried, so what do I know? š
Adywan, or anybody making an edit of ROTJ, is free to use these:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1zlE34aGJd-yL0S_f52YbJwPko4fPAUQb?usp=sharing
If for whatever reason these two particular takes of the line arenāt up to snuff Iāll add more.
Sounds pretty damn good!
I hope you donāt mind this one other request. I know these are once again examples of āEarly Installment Weirdness,ā since they couldnāt decide what terms to use yet, but since you were able to make Luke say āSteady, Rogue 3ā instead of āRogue 2ā in TESB:R, do you think you could also make it so that Luke doesnāt call the R5 Astromech droid that blew up an āR2 Unit,ā or use the term ārobotsā later on?
I personally like the idea of āfixingā those types of things. I even tried the ārobotsā one you mentioned using voice cloning:
https://youtube.com/shorts/68REbAcUpBo?si=ExTGJgB0Cy28iWOA
I donāt know if this particular fix is quite up to snuff for Adywan, which I totally understand.
I mean, with my example, the voice is trained on Luke from ESB and ROTJ. Not ANH. So it doesnāt sound right.
I suppose you could do that with ALL his dialogue for consistency š
Hi, SSWR, Iād watched your YT videos and I agree with your thoughts on the narrative for Anakin visiting Tatooine. Iāve some ideas for the Lars homestead scene you might consider.
As Anakin and Padme walk away from the ship, dub in the (from later) line āThese are good people, Padme, youāll be safe.ā
Dub [Not-3PO] saying, āIt is good to see you again Master Skywalker [& other pleasantries].ā (If you want to twist the knife, insert Padmeās line from Naboo, āAnakinās not a Jediā¦heās still a Padawan learner.ā JK) Possibly insert Padmeās line āIām Padme.ā Then Anakin asks to see his mother and Not-3PO directs them to follow.
Not-3PO presents the guests. Not-3PO or dubbed Owen acknowledges the step-brother relationship. I like Padmeās āIām Padmeā line originally in this place but not sure how to keep it especially with the cuts to follow.
Cut to Owen introducing Beru and then to Anakin asking, āis my mother here?ā
Cliegg says, āno, sheās not,ā then Anakin reaction shot, then Cliegg says come inside. Either add transition here or keep the ensuing Anakinās dissapointes/sad reaction shot.
I think the scene needs different music to better serve the mood of Anakinās growing anxiety/despair. Maybe different music would go toward making a brisker pace feel more purposeful as well.
Additionally, Iād want to find a way, in the next scene, to get rid of Padme only taking her cloak off when the camera pans over to her and then awkwardly pulling her chair in. Itās the little things that grate when you starting thinking about the edits.
Thanks for the feedback and ideas, Mrebo!
I actually havenāt come back to playing around with that scene since I originally posted that clip. I like some of the ideas youāve presented here and I think they could easily work in another fan edit!
Even though I began changing my mind on making Anakin and Owen actual siblings, Iām leaning once again in that direction. The viewer could simply put together that since the events of ROTS Owen would simply take the last name āLarsā to hide from anyone coming to look for any of Anakinās relatives.
But using āNot3POā as a possible exposition droid might give me a bit more to work with! Thanks!
And yeah, Iād prefer to have Padme already sitting down with everyone else but I donāt have the abilities to make that happen. š
Since I 'm here, I might as well give a link or twoā¦
Here Iāve re-edited the scene with R2 receiving Obi-Wanās message:
https://youtu.be/cF_8TtsRcHc
And here Iāve attempted using Pika Labs to generate a new shot of Padme:
https://youtu.be/dNIhMnbPtdE
I donāt have anything worth adding to the ideas pool but can I just say:
I love this conversation and how you guys are approaching all of this.
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Adobe firefly sounds like itās a game changer for editing videos. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NPJNPrshhTo
Yeah, Iāve found a few different resources that provide similar effectsā¦some of these are coming in quite handy!
Another aspect of the film that bugged me since watching it is the title. The Clones donāt attack they use military force to rescue the Jedi so itās more a retaliation than an attack.
Well, youāre not wrong lol. That being said, Iāll be keeping the title as is. š
Man, there is a clip Iām wanting to show all of you. It involves a lot of intercutting scenes, new sound fx/music, new voice work, roto workā¦itās got a lot going on and Iām quite please with how itās looking.
But I canāt share it yet.
Just wanted to tease all of you a bit.š
In the meantime, to get all of you in the mood for Christmas:
Yeah what if they cover the prequels and give us some never-before-seen deleted footage? Hereās hoping!
Could I also get a link please?
Hereās the best deepfake Iāve made yet!
Also, Iām quite pleased with how Yoda now looks in this shot:
Good stuff! I look forward to more!
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Make sure youāve typed the URL correctly, or try searching Vimeo. You could also watch one of the videos below instead.ā
Has anyone considered addressing Palpatine by name in the OT? It would spoil the twist of the PT for first time viewers, assuming they watch the movies in production order as they should, but it would help tie the films together more cohesively in a subtle way.
Gotcha covered:
I didnāt think the first version you posted was badā¦but NOWā¦sooo GOOD!
Maybe you could add a sound for the skin morphing, like playing with the pitch of leather getting wrinkled. I looked up the scenes of Indy on youtube and it sounded like something like that was going on.
Iāll look into that! Thanks!
On the subject of changing pitch, I was wondering if you could do it with Yodaās voice. I think his voice seems to sound brighter than in the OT, but that doesnāt make much sense when youāre aging ten times slower than a human being.
Yeah, I donāt know what to do about his voice. Ozās performance changed drastically once he started doing soley voiceover work for the CGI Yoda.
Also, I donāt know if I like having Duel of Fates playing when Anakin uses the speeder bike. I thought that you could maybe insert this version of Anakinās theme starting at 1.37: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WUC7MgkOgKA
Iām with you on removing Dual of the Fates. Itās already gone and replaced with something I quite like! Although, Iām not ready to show it yetā¦
Itās odd to carefully study PT scenes. There was one video from you with the gang in the arena where the original footage had this awful effect on Sam Jackson head. I guess it was the same kind of blending of two shots as youāve shown with Jake Lloyd.
Yeah, I think itās when Sam simply turns his head to screen left and it looks like itās been reverse and also maybe slowed down? Itās oddā¦but it goes by pretty quickly too.
That scene of Palps watching the troops also has strange things going on. The blue senate guy has his mouth open, like heās going āWow!ā like a kid. And behind Bail is a guy of the same species as the one in the cantina who doesnāt like Luke. Knowing George, it must be the same guy. An incredibly succesful politican who ended up with the death sentence in 12 star systems. McCluncky!
š I guess I hadnāt looked too closely at Ole Bluey!
But Iām liking the changes! Iām curious about the new music for Sheev looking at the clones. One thing that Iāve been thinking about regarding Zamās changer-thing. I was thinking that you could perhaps get rid of it all, except for her death, and you recolor her skin grey as she morphs. The idea is that she gets deformed by the dart in way that looks a bit like the Nazis dying in Raiders of the Lost Ark and the Last Crusade.
The music I inserted was temporary (John Williams - Black Sunday OST). I donāt have the ending music figured out yet cuz I havenāt nailed down the edit yetā¦cuz there are a few FX shots I donāt know how to pull off convincingly yet!š
About Zam: Yeah that was what I was going forā¦but maybe doing something additional to the face (like you suggested) would be possible. Hmmmā¦
Thanks for the feedback!
Great to hear from you, Adywan! Your edit is coming along nicely!
How did you pull off the Vader and Kenobi shot? Is that a shot from elsewhere in the film that you scaled down and inserted there (roto-ing around the troopers, of course)?
Hereās my attempt at some genuine color correction:
https://youtu.be/wXKnRe9x3YY?si=NZZTFA03z1JIB8Zp
This is a shot of Anakin Iāve altered and repurposed
https://youtu.be/SPWXv_9rGQg?si=crd3qw9OPTqwVXUj
I just hit 1000 subscribers yesterday! To celebrate, I made the first teaser trailer. Feel free to join me tonight to watch together:
Hereās my edit of the Jedi being surrounded in the area scene:
https://youtu.be/vqsLDL42RPc
Hereās a comparison to the original:
https://youtu.be/8hL_LP9_Gqc
And hereās my original video with me going into some of the āwhyā behind some of the changes:
https://youtu.be/M804B7y8ODU
Iām glad you guys are digging it!
So about that rack focus shotā¦
I very much appreciate what snooker did for me with that shot here:
https://streamable.com/engvb5
Although, itās been a few years since that shot was completed and I wanted to push it closer to what we see in ANHā¦with a bit of a lens distortion and everything:
THEN I realized I should maybe sort of, ya know, LOOK at a rack focus shot from the OT š and I noticed the image stretches verticallyā¦so I did a bit more work on it and got it even CLOSER to what I wanted:
Hello fellow fan editors!
A very basic scene of Obi-Wan trying to contact Anakin but Iāve reworked it quite a bit.
-CLIP:
https://youtu.be/2x40-QWMAfU
deetsā¦
-SIDE BY SIDE COMPARISON:
https://youtu.be/zmXzZvKt-gg
in case youāre curiousā¦
-EARLIER TEST:
https://youtu.be/DZnxu_QrUT4
Shave off a syllable when Han and Luke are found on Hoth so he says, āIce of you guys to drop by!ā
Dew it!