Jar Jar Bricks said:
Hmmm good idea.
I can’t go back through the lines again right now to see if this is possible but I’m pretty sure this might be.
Cool, hopefully we can find something.
I think there are two or three other places that could work well with extra bits of Leia dialogue.
When Rey says she’s gonna run the training course, as Leia hands her the saber, Leia could say, “Good”, “Alright”, “Here”. I think a funny line would work nicely here, since Leia gives her a little smirk, but I’m not sure what could fit.
I think another place that could use a Leia line would be when Rey is back at the base, and she just starts talking to Leia, who we don’t realize is off-screen until it cuts to her. In that first shot of Rey rummaging through her bag, you could have Leia say, “What happened?”, “What’s wrong?”, or even “Tell me”, which he says twice in that conversation, later on during their Exegol conversation, and again in TFA, when C-3PO tells her R2 has good news.
I was going to suggest having Leia say something like, “Here”, “It’s yours” when Leia gives Rey the saber before she leaves, but I think in this scene at least, the less that is said, the better it is.