TheoOdo said:
A lot of attention has been given in this thread to the second Death Star of Return of the Jedi. I have to say, I agree with Gary Kurtz when he says it was basically a remake of the first film.
I think this is wrong on two levels. Firstly, it's unoriginal. Secondly, it makes the conclusion of the saga less dynamic.
How to correct this?
Allow me to suggest a radical alteration.
Rather than the Death Star II, the entire final battle could instead take place on or in the space above the Imperial home planet. For now, let's call it "Had Abaddon" as in the original Star Wars outlines.
The Rebel plan, therefore, would be to knock out the planetary shield generator which is in place to allow the Imperial officials to decide who enters and who exits the planet. Essentially, Had Abaddon is a near prison planet with all movement in and out tightly controlled.
The Rebels need to gain access to the planet so as to launch an assault on the Imperial Palace. They can do this by flying down into the lower city, through a service channel and destroying the palace's main reactor. Once the reactor is destroyed, it will explode massively and take the palace - and the vast majority of the Imperial government - with it. It would, in essence, be an intergalactic gunpowder plot.
Why would this work thematically?
Most of the series takes place on the frontiers of the galaxy. By bringing it into the belly of the beast, the tension would rise dramatically - unlike in the current version where (I feel) the Death Star's reappearance feels stale. Yet another conflict on the frontier.
How to do this?
There are, of course, certain problems. Namely, to design the setting for the city would be a very difficult technical task on the scale of the Blade Runner cityscapes. Secondly, there's the fact that most of the plot appears to revolve around the much maligned Ewoks.
One way of solving this would be to get your hands on the footage of Han Solo, Leia and the Rebels battling in the Imperial bunker. This, rather than the ground battle with the Imperial troops, could be the delay which causes the entire space battle to take place. Leia's seperation from the group would be removed and the speeder-bike section could take place along one of the speeder-lanes which we see in this Ralph McQuarrie illustration below.
The troops, after their encounter with the Stormtroopers, make their camp in one of the vast undercity pipe and electricty networks. On one of the unmanned passages, Leia confronts Luke about his unresponsive behaviour and he tells her that he's going to turn himself in to Vader. Vader's encounter with Luke on the forest walkway could be easily tranformed into a scene on a city walkway by changing the background into model shots of an oppressive, imperial cityscape as in the image below.
At which point, Luke is taken to the massive hive-like Imperial Palace and brought to the Emperor's quarters in topmost tower. The battle continues as normal. The Millenium Falcon, rather than flying over the surface of the Death Star, would now fly over a section of the city and down into the service channel toward the Palace's reactor.
The Palace is destroyed, the rebels celebrate and all seems well.
What's tragic, though, is it seems like this pretty obvious conclusion was in fact planned. All of the McQuarrie illustrations for these sequences already exist, such as...
Vader's arrival at the Imperial Planet
The exterior of the Imperial Palace
Vader's arrival at the Imperial Palace
Various scenes of the Imperial city
And Luke's arrival at the Imperial Palace
Great suggestion! I would love to be able to do something like this but it is not possible.
It cannot be done convincingly without filming new scenes with the main characters with new dialogue. It would seem wierd because Luke/Leia/Lando/Han wouldn't talk about the plan, make references to specific places like Had Abaddon, etc.... Perhaps when CGI progresses to a point that you could CGI a 31 year old Mark Hamill convincingly.
You are correct in regards to the paintings. This was essentially planned. George had this idea in draft 4 of ROTJ. (Which you can download and read...and there is some wierd Harry Potterish stuff that happens in it). Unfortunately it would have cost way more than he was willing to pay. Also I think he had no idea how to do it technically.
Go here for the draft http://starwarz.com/starkiller/wp-content/uploads/revenge_revised_rough_draft.zip
ROTJ falls up short because it is a rehash of ANH. It is not even a good rehash. The sets are boring. The dialogue is boring. It is to cute. Essentially the ending is not epic enough for an epic story. Which is why the story should have been on Had Abaddon (or Coruscant). Lucas just wanted the whole Star Wars thing over with and wrapped it up way to quick.
So to end off my rant... as with the prequels we are stuck with ROTJ as it is. We just have to try and tell that story a bit better.
Matticon