The new Boyega line works surprisingly well. Not perfect, but close.
I think the music you’ve put in is a big mistake though, as that exact music is used minutes later in that exact scene.
If the new music seems perfect and irreplaceable, we could probably replace it’s later appearance pretty easily.
Once we’ve gotten that clip into shape pretty much how we all like it, I would request an uncompressed output of your work without the TIE sound effects. This WILL address a major sticking point in V1, and I thank you again for the stellar contribution!
I adore that. Gorgeous work!
Well, there’s going to be an entire V2, with the solutions for given problems that seem best out of what we collectively come up with. If there’s something that can go two ways that’s audio only and doesn’t affect sync, an alternate audio track could be a thing.
Nostalgic.
I was hoping some additional brilliant people would come out of the woodwork. I’m really looking forward to a V2 we can be very happy with.
It’d be awesome if there were some way to telegraph that SKB is designed to suck up its local star and just use its energy to target one or more targets. Like maybe it’s a one-shot thing, or one suck up and it can keep using small portions as it goes. That would work well with Finn’s description of it using “the Sun,” and the star that bursts out of it at the end from the remaining energy. This could be background murmuring at the Resistance base or on SKB. I haven’t come up with anything, but it’s another opportunity.
Yeah, that sounds pretty great. I’m looking forward to seeing it, and appreciate you joining the forum and contributing. Welcome!
I won’t be doing anything that radical with this simple, concentrated edit on the SKB restructuring. But, the finished edit could easily be used as source material for one that implements any of these other ideas.
Ditto.
Just checked it out, and it might have context since Leia just came from the site of a FO attack, and no one seems to know the Starkiller’s specific target until it fires.
Can anyone remove the time code, though?
That scene is the Achilles heal of this restructure concept, and I’d love to see it be as flawless as possible. Lay it on me.
I haven’t looked at it yet, but I’m sure the fixed X-Wing approach shot is great. Thanks for noticing it and then doing something about it! I’ve got some other business to wade through before I get back to TFA, but once I do it sounds like we should be in a good place to tackle a kickass V2. Thanks again to you all. Keep up the good work!
You might have an idea there.
When I take up work ok TFA again in the near future I will try that out and see how it plays.
Nah, the movie hasn’t been modified nearly enough to merit that. Not a bad idea, though, with the title motif.
The crawl will merely include a few descriptors for political background, like “…sinister FIRST ORDER has risen in secret from the ashes of the fractured Empire,” and, “Failing to convince the New Republic of this looming threat, General Leia Organa mobilizes a covert RESIATANCE to…”
Well, it’ll still be a very focused edit on this particular issue, but there are a few minuscule things I’ll want to do. Nothing major, just things like removing Kylo Ren identifying FN-2187 by name on the bridge, and a new, albeit very similar, opening crawl.
IMAX scenes?
Also, I’m not going to buy the 3D BR, but would love to take a look at the scene where Leia sends her envoy to the Republic.
There will be an eventual V2, so please do send any FX shots or mock ups you may have! Anyone who can help this be better, please do so.
I never noticed that detail. Thanks for posting. Could you send me a completed shot?
I don’t know, I kind of like “Dr. Orson, or How I Learned To Stop Worrying and Love the Death Star.” 😉
Thanks for the kudos, NeverarGreat!
I’ve used the order of IV, V, I, II, III, VI with a newcomer before and I thought it worked very well.
It’s not machete order, and I called it ‘Obi-Wan Kenobi’ order, because it’s how he would have wanted it. (And learning Luke and Leia’s relationship in Ep3 is more dramatic than in ROTJ.)
You’re right that Q2’s edits are designed to function as precursors to watching the OT without giving away the two big reveals. My edit of Ep1 also happens to remove Jabba’s little cameo, preserving that reveal as well. (I don’t remember whether Q2’s did as well.)
Option B preserves Ben Kenobi’s lies and is a great way to experience the OT and PT from Luke’s POV and frame the PT within the OT. You don’t have to begin or end (if stopping at ROTJ, anyway, which isn’t really a problem now) with a terrible movie. Putting the prequels between V and VI lets VI benefit from the backdrop of the prequels, being the only OT film that arguably does so. And going forward, you get to go from ROTJ into TFA. You do take a swan dive in terms of quality jumping from ESB to Ep1.
+1 for just experiment with making your own custom mix. We indeed all started somewhere.
I always prefer 2D showings; I just want to see the film, not be whizzed by a bunch of flyin’ whatsits!
ANH, ESB, ROTJ: The 2006 GOUT DVDs, color corrected to match the 2011 BluRays
TPM: Pan-n-scan VHS that’s been run over by a car
AOTC: Theatrical bootleg recording on VCD
ROTS: Theater bootleg with Backstroke of the West subtitles
TFA: A flipbook I made depicting the plot highlights in 32 tiny drawings, while humming Rey’s theme out of tune
Chewtobacca, if I may ask, what software did you use to compress the DeEd to a DVD? It looks stellar and relatively alias-free.
Don’t talk shit about the Holiday Special. It’s unironically good.
the plans were beamed up in about four or five chunks simultaneously.
I didn’t put that together, but you’re right. I love that extra detailed effort for continuity. 😃