RogueLeader said:
The new additions blend in really nicely, Faraday.
Thanks!
Just thinking about the story itself. If 3PO can’t vocally translate it, I wonder why they couldn’t have 3PO write/type it out, or have 3PO pull up the planet on the nav computer.
I kinda wish 3PO didn’t know what it said at all. Maybe he couldn’t read it because Sith was a banned language in general. Then, they all go to Babu to download the illegal language program. But to install it, they have to do a complete system wipe.
I personally like C-3PO knowing exactly what it says but being unable to tell them. I find it funny in the right way - it brings them tantalisingly close to their goal, which still remains maddeningly just out of reach. I really feel their frustration in that moment, but it’s tempered with the dash of humour which keeps it enjoyable. I do think it might be worth specifying 3PO can’t provide any kind of translation from Sith, though, not just that he can’t speak it aloud.
Also, instead of the blade telling them the exact coordinates, I think it would’ve made more sense if the runes explained that if the wielder embraces/taps into the dark side, the blade will point them in the right direction. This would’ve allowed the blade to be ancient, but still lead them to the more modern Death Star ruins, since it would always lead the wielder to the wayfinder regardless of where it was.
Or, she has to let that vision of pain and anguish she first got a glimpse of continue, until she finally gets a glimpse of the Death Star ruins. Once she mentions seeing it, Poe would know where the ruins are. I like the line about sharing the secrets with only the blades victims, so it would be interesting if Rey had to prick her skin with the blade or something in order to have that secret revealed to her through a vision.
Then once they get to the planet, the whispers she hears grow louder as she gets closer to the wayfinder. Sort of how Hal has it right now in Ascendant. Then you don’t need the blade to line up with the Death Star ruins, which would’ve arguably changed in the years following the blade’s creation, as the metal structure kept degrading in the ocean water. But, hey, it’s Star Wars I guess.
But I like the idea of Rey having to tap into the dark side in order to find the wayfinder.
I really like the idea of having to tap into the Dark Side to use the Dagger - it’s a really neat way to keep turning the screw on Rey’s fears about the Dark Side. I also like your expansion on my idea that only the Dagger’s victims see its secrets! I originally only intended it as 3PO speaking poetically. I’d definitely like to figure out where both ideas could go.
As for the Goonies stuff with the Dagger lining up with the Death Star - for mer personally, it feels just like the kind of weirdly slightly-self-contradicting idea that the OT, in particular ANH, threw out all the time, but always just fuelled my curiosity about exactly how this strange Star Wars Universe works. It does stretch beyond my suspension of disbelief that she just stands in any old location on the shore and it works, though. My plan was to add some kind of Sith marker on the ground for her to stand on, like the amulet scene in Indiana Jones. But I think that’s a complementary idea to the Dark Side Whispers leading her there, rather than an incompatible idea.
It’s like Sith designed it so only dark siders could find it. And if they weren’t dark side users before, they could be well along their way by the time they find it.
I am so taken with this part of your idea specifically. It works so well.
I could imagine a scene where a holographic star field is projected in a room, and Rey reluctantly taps into the dark side, letting in all that pain and anguish she got a taste of when she first touched it. Then, with the blade extended in front of her, she points to the correct planet. Like a water diviner finding ground water.
There’s actually a scene in the DOTF screenplay that’s extremely similar to what you’re describing! I don’t know if there’s a good spot to try and work it into TROS, but it’s definitely worth thinking about, because it would recontextualise into what you’re describing really neatly.