Okay, here-a-goes,
I watched the first 10 minutes with my wife... who then decided she had better things to do.
Chalk this up to: She was very distracted by some scrapbooking she had started. Also, she has no love of Star Wars in the first place. She especially dislikes the prequels. She's only seen TPM once, maybe. She doesn't like spoofs. And Frink didn't like her cooking, so she' still sort of mad at him. Okay, I made that last part up, but the rest is all true. She did ask me to show her the highlates later, and then she took off.
However I do think the length of the crawl (that's the only comment I will make on the crawl publicly) was a bit of a bad first foot to put forward. (Second foot, rather, she loved the flutey opening). I've forgotten a lot of the crawl, but I didn't forget that it was too long. If the joke is that "it's long" more than the actual content... then try this: after it's gone on long enough, "VHS fast forward" it to the end. You still get the effect that it's long, but the audience isn't sitting uncomfotably anymore. And by "VHS fast forward" I mean with the chipmunk music and the bad scan lines in the middle of the frame.
My next "too long" complaint is actually part of my "highest praise" segment. The "Where's Ani" and the musical segment that follows caught me completely off guard and was probably the hardest/longest I laughed while watching it. But then it kept going. I think it would be funnier if it was either shorter, or if you could cut away from it and then cut back to it later. I think after Quigonn drops off the parts and then heads back for Mos Espa whould be a good place to maybe play some more of it. It would probably make me laugh again, as opposed to just feeling like it had overstayed its welcome.
Also the "Do a little dance for me", "<Ani's response>" line was very funny. Good job on that one. It almost made me like Stupid Kid Anakin a little more.
My wife, who loves GOB's chicken dance for some reason, thought that was very funny. But maybe you can animate 3PO a little more (more reverse footage) to get a little more "chicken" out of him?
Also, I agree with the 005 and [REDACTED] that the senate (un/)recognize scene was played too many times.
I was really hoping that the "NTATOT!" line would appear after Yoda and Sam Jackson talk. It was even better than I'd hoped.
The battle droids didn't sound overly loud to me. (I was listening in 7.1) But the soundtrack was nice and loud. I was able to listen to it at a nice volume without having to crank my amp.
Which brings me to my next topic- the rear surrounds. I only noticed the rear surrounds a couple of times, and it was always pleasant. Animal/forest noises, explosions, etc.. However, during Obiwan's epic slo-no... There was a repeating "whumping" sound that I think was coming from the surrounds. It might be there in stereo as well. Nothing too noticeable or dealbreaking... but if there's anyway you can get rid of it, I'd say do it.
Let's see... what's next.
I really like the "walking on sunshine" gag, and I'm wondering if it would spoil it if Darth Darth was listening to music more of the time- like when he's approaching Tatooine in the first place. Maybe it would still work if he was listening to something hardcore then, only to have the poppy music later on.
I was amazed at how well the Bender worked.
What's the policy on all of the non-TPM sources? Frink, I think I recall that you think YOU had to own the music or movies you sourced... are you thinking that the viewers have to own them all as well in addition to TPM? Or just TPM? Depending on your answer, I still think the Ewan MacDonald line from The Ghost Writer "This is getting ridiculous!" could be used to great effect-
Next random thought: I'm amazed that it's this done! I kind of thought this would never actually be done. Either an abandoned project, a joke that didn't work in execution as well as in design, or some kind of endless project that you just tweak and tweak for years but never release.
Another random thought: I appreciate that people will want to see their names in the credits... but the fan credits are too long. Either put people in larger groups than three, scroll them, or just reduce the screen time. You're giving everybody the same font/time as George Lucas. Also, I don't think you really properly credited yourself. It says it's a TV's Frink edit, but I don't think I saw another credit for yourself. Not that you should have 50 credits, like some fan films/edits I've seen. But perhaps a "Based on the Humor of TV's Frink" would be appropriate in addition to whatever other credits you have truly earned.
And finally- when the DTS logo rolls at the end... something along the lines of "Suck it, JT 34!" would be appropriate. ;)
I probably have more... I just need them to come to me.