I like very much your ideas, skye. It's very far from the norm, and yet it scratches some particular needs for this. It has some moral-dilemmas and potentially comes with a bookend for the story. My take, speaking for myself, on the clones being souless was another attempt at building in an "expiration date" for the cloning idea so that it could be done away with prior to the OT starting up.
The telepathy thing comes from them sharing the same "brainwaves" or "mind" as their fellow mold-brothers? What story(ies) is that from? Interesting that new, smarter clones could then start to control the whole bunch and start a revolution.
But this other thing you said:
you said:
I thought part of the problem with the PT was that you had these huge battles of "fake" beings fighting with no real emotional attachment to any of them.
I don't know if I posted similar thoughts here earlier... but I totally agree. It seems that most of the universe sits back and watches either a robot army or a clone army (or both) duke it out for the fate of the... separatists. So... no one really cares much about the Clone Wars, you would think. It's certainly not personal to anyone back home. It might as well be happening 3 galaxies away for as much as the standard person cares. A moisture farmer on Tatooine probably would never hear of these clone wars, let alone use them as a benchmark for adventure!
I also think that the galaxy at large could welcome a freedom-less Empire in place of a chaotic and violent Republic as long as
1. Peace was assured by the Empire.
2. The cost of human/alien life in the recent war was so high that anything seemed better than war.
In short- I think you have to keep Star Wars prequels primarily about ACTION and less about moral dilemmas... Though they should be there to a point... But the main con I see about your take on clones is that it places the emphasis on the clones themselves. I can't get my head around that, because I think the clones, while necessary to explain the war, should not be too much the focus of the movies. I'm too tired to explain that better, but perhaps you know what I mean.