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I’m not sure if Grasp for Greed is a good refocused episode to have since you got to know what it actually defines. As I know what both of these terms mean.

I will be offline in the thread since that I have upcoming assessments for the time being.

EddieDean said:

I’m struggling a little on Scipio. It’s an easy episode from one perspective, because it’s a simple linear story. The only real issue is that it’s long, and loses a bit of momentum with some of the political stuff - I just don’t know if it’s good enough to deserve 70 minutes (my longest by far).

It does have good action, good Padmé/Anakin/Dooku content, and a a good focus on the state of the war for this point in the series. It’s just a bit dry for its length, despite a lot of it being relevant.

I’ve got three minor trims to make: (1) Making Anakin and Obi-Wan’s chat lightly reference Ahsoka, (2) a minor line about Padmé’s security, and (3) Removing a hint at the Sidious-Palpatine connection. But I might see if there are some earlier scenes I can cut outright and just cover via the opening text.

Thoughts?

A few ideas that can be implemented is the bank transfer and raise of interest for the republic can play a great role into the banking clan refocused arc since it has a few accountable principles involved in this.

I was wanting to have a new link for both the radical edit revenge of the Sith 720p HD with order 66 flashbacks from Kenobi live action show and the Jedi no more attack of the clones edition since it didn’t work for me.

Hello There, Your ideas have brought hope for people that have none and I would like a link for it. Thank you so much Kraus.

If you want to add an order 66 Kenobi flashback into the rise of the empire ultimate edition then it’s okay. If it’s before the jedi being slaughtered by the clones they once served upon and he may come to injure reva

When I watched the retouched edition of a new Hope it was great with the Color grading of the tie fighters and the devastator.
Something that needs improvement:

1. De-aged Owen’s Lars face to the actor who acted that character in the live action show Kenobi.
2. Cut the line he died about the same time as your father as we knew that he’s been in exile for years.

SpenceEdit said:
What is the change you are suggesting?

I’m suggesting that we can have the lab scene short where Ben enters the lab and after the chemicals explode he exits the lab on daily I and encounters bounty hunters who are wanting to squeeze on him.

I mean the lab scene brings a bit of chemistry.

I watched the expanded edition of the phantom menace as its looks great when I first previewed it with the extended duel of Darth maul vs obi-wan and qui-gon.

I watched the edit and I would say that this a V2 improved edition we were looking for but the one thing that I would keep is obi-wan dressed in a lab coat while he’s inside the lab on faith since it’s brings a bit of chemistry into this when he adds two or more reactants the bottle with the soluble water and the reactant starts to fizz up and cause a chemical reaction. This is in a scientific point of view.

When I watched obi-wan Kenobi faraday cut it looked alright for some of its perspective of the story of how he was. Something that didn’t feel right for me is that there was jarring in the scenes which needs improvement.

When I watched the second of the Godzilla trilogy it looks great with the action that has put into it at the end.

I watched the IC edit of Kenobi as it looks great with the character lines that have been cut and been replaced and soundtracks bring more of Vader’s perspective into this aswell so it’s the one we would look for.

I would like a link aswell since I would like to go deep into Star Wars universe.

When I watched your fanedit of Kenobi a star wars story with non-spoilers,as it brought more depth to the climatic scenes of the inquisitors, fortress inquistorious.

Things I liked from the show
I like how you cut Reva fending of Owen’s Lars Family/Chasing Luke Scenes
Shortened mercenary chase for Leia Organa scene
Ending of where Ben meets Luke at the end

Some things that can be improved a bit better
Cut Haja saying maybe a 1000 credits and I will show you some new tricks what do you of the force my friend( since he’s not the person there looking for).
Shorten out the devastator chasing the path insurgents.
Improve the scene soundtrack where Kenobi is served by his butcher lord.

Everything else looks alright to it, so great job Anjohan.

When I watched the mature Revenge of the Sith V2 it looks great how you have rescored Order 66/Operation Knightfall into its first few days of the darker time as it brought more depth.

I watched the edit that you actually made as it looks great with obi-wan’s braid on the other side rather than in front and there’s has been improvement with the behind the scenes footage that has been remastered by the setting.

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And if your like planning on doing a refocused episode on ringo vinda/order 66

I recommend this as an inspiration as it’s really interesting
https://youtube.com/watch?v=eJOwveozhio&feature=share

What about v2 of the second battle of Geonosis refocused arc.