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#278605
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Two-Face (A Batman: The Animated Series Movie) (* unfinished project *)
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Cool, I'll look into that.

Yeah, I definitely want to do at least the Batman:TAS two-parters. The others will be tougher because they did away with the wonderful title cards, instead leaving us with text over the opening shots. I've heard it's possible to believably paint out credits, but I don't know how to do it. I'm very interested in your ideas, also! I'm curious as to what you can do with Photoshop.

Now, you should beware, this will probably be a bit rough at first. This is a learning experience for me, and the video quality might not be up to par, and there might be some things I would do differently as far as DVD authoring if I had more experience. There is a good probability I will redo this at some point down the road, but I don't know when. I think this will turn out watchable at the worst, though. It'll be pretty cool.

Now, I don't have Volume 3 or 4 yet, so refresh my memory: is Grace in "Second Chance"? I looked around, and sadly, she wasn't listed. If she was in it, I may have put this off, or in my redo I might have worked in Second Chance, but if she's not there, then it would be really distracting. "Two-Face, Part Two" has a great ending, though. Very suitable for the movie-style I'm going for. I've thought about the possibility of working in elements of or entire episodes into these projects, given the interrelated elements of the series and recurring characters--Stromwell's appearances in both "Robin's Reckoning" and "It's Never Too Late," for instance. Another thought I had was perhaps instead of putting just both parts of "The Cat and the Claw" together, also having "Cat Scratch Fever" in the edit, since it's a direct sequel to it. However, it could be kind of anticlimactic after the events of "The Cat and the Claw," unless I could work something out with other Catwoman footage. Those are just some examples. Interesting things to think about.

One last thing: does anyone know if it's possible to blend titles in Womble? As in, having one title fade out as another fades in? I've been trying, but haven't been able to get it to work.

Thanks!
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#278574
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Two-Face (A Batman: The Animated Series Movie) (* unfinished project *)
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Thanks guys. I found Gotham Nights. I'm pretty sure I'll use it for the end credits. I'll post a screencap as soon as I can for the Two-Face font for reference, klokwerk and Killbot. Cover art would be fantastic! I don't have any specs like running time yet or anything, but hopefully all should be finished within the next few days. In the meantime, if you want to work on the design, that would be awesome.

A big thanks to calisto! I'm loving the set, man!

If anyone already has an image or copy of the text-free "Two-Face" title card, or if you've erased the titles out for a frame or can do so easily, please let me know. If not I'll do it myself, but if someone else has it, it would be a big help. Beyond that, all I'll need to do is get my Mask of the Phantasm DVD back from my cousin for the opening logo, and I should have everything I'll need.

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#278368
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Two-Face (A Batman: The Animated Series Movie) (* unfinished project *)
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Okay, cool.

I'm getting close to finalizing everything. I know what I want to do for the opening credits for sure now. I just need one more thing besides the soundtracks: Does anyone have any idea what some of the Batman Animated fonts are? I'm thinking particularly of the style used in the Mask of the Phantasm opening credits, as well as the original "Two-Face" opening credits. I will search, but if anyone knows or has any leads, that would be a great timesaver. Thanks!
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#277890
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***The ADigitalMan non-Star Wars DVD Info and Feedback Thread***
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Well, I received my copy of Superman Redeemed today (thanks a million, Faustus!) and watched it. It was very impressive! It's amazing how you were able to make the two movies work together. Great work!

The issues I have have already been addressed: the use of Otis and Ms. Tessmacher in the escape instead of the QFP footage (only because they disappear after that scene), and the possible use of the sick Clark footage to show the initial effects of the scratch, as well as the oil tanker footage. Also, some spots seem kind of quick, like nuclear crisis right after the Paris scene, and the cut straight from the Planet scene to the press scene at the end. Unfortunately, the kind of footage necessary to give that kind of breathing room isn't really there, so you did a great job with what you had to work with. It's a shame there isn't any footage to give the Clark/Lana/Lois issue some resolution. I hope in the sequel to Returns, Lana is somewhere. It would be less than the best, but...oh, well. I suppose when they made III they were trying to set up a triangle for the sequel, but instead we got Lacy Warfield. *sigh*

Overall, you did a great job of making the pieces fit together reasonably well. It's really amazing! Awesome job!
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#277883
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Another bloody edit of TPM (* unfinished project *)
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Well, yeah, I can see that, but I was trying to pick an example off the top of my head. ADM's version is a possible solution, though. Someone mentioned cutting some of the adventure type stuff, and basically what I was trying to say is that's part of the point of Star Wars. Has it become something bigger than that? Sure, but it still needs to be a part of it, and so those elements should stay.

And the music I'm talking about is the music in Watto's shop when Anakin meets Padme for the first time.

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#277849
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Another bloody edit of TPM (* unfinished project *)
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Wow, I can't believe I haven't hit this thread yet. First off, I do still have that music for the Anakin/Padme meeting if anyone wants it.

There's definitely some great material here. The idea of moving the brunt of the Gungan battle to the beginning, and thus, being the droid invasion, is definitely cool. There's a lot more to be said, but there are some great ideas here.

However, I think you should be wary of getting too serious in tone. Sure, it shouldn't have poop jokes and "Yippee!" and all of that, but remember, the original thing of Star Wars was a throwback to the fun adventure serials of Lucas's youth. My biggest issue is ending on the funeral scene. If you do that, then there won't be one truly upbeat ending in the whole prequel trilogy. Also, musically the transition to the end credits would be really rough. Even ROTS ended on the hope of the Force Theme to give it some life and a workable transition to the end credits (something I had been concerned about before the film released). I'm definitely in agreement with darthpreston's words a few pages back: the obvious conflict is resolved by the end of the film, and with the Gungans freed, there is certainly cause for celebration. I suppose I could rant about this, but I guess you see what I'm saying.

And overall, I wouldn't ditch some of the adventure elements (underwater chase, for instance). I think it would work in your favor to try to tweak some of the side stuff so it's more effective, as opposed to ditching it, if you see what I'm saying.

Another thing to consider is that TPM very much mirrors ANH in its having one character lead to another. We first meet Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan, who get threatened by the Neimoidians. From there we meet Jar Jar and go to rescue the Queen. Now the group goes to Tatooine and meets Anakin. In ANH, we first meet the droids, on a ship that gets attacked by Vader, who takes the princess, who sends R2 with information for the Death Star. The droids escape to Tatooine, where they meet Luke, with whom they find Obi-Wan, who takes them to Mos Eisley to meet Han and Chewie. So there are merits to taking a little time and enjoying the ride. You don't have to rush to Anakin necessarily. Should he be the focus? Sure, but we don't have to find that out right away.

Please don't take this harshly; there are really great ideas here. And if I'd followed the thread from the start, I could've addressed issues as they came along. I'm just concerned that in focusing on the story and the thrust of the film too much, we can run the risk of not enjoying the ride as much as we could. I hope this makes sense. Keep up the good work!
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#277829
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The legendary "Starkiller Ranch" Thread
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Awesome!!

As far as the subtitles, I think it was planned to use some kind of really obscure language--at one point, there were tests done for using Aramaic from "The Passion of the Christ," which turned out pretty nicely. Then there was talk of someone actually recording new dubbing, but I don't recall if the language was going to be made up, adapted from another language, or adapted from a Star Wars language. There was quite a bit of discussion on it a while back. I know we've come to the conclusion that Jar Jar will be dubbed in English, and I think a few others will be as well. It's been a while, though, and I'm not sure where we were headed with that. But it will be either dubbed in English (adding some effects is a good idea, there), or subtitled, so either way, we can call Maul/Grievous what we want to in the first one, thanks to Nute.
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#277790
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The legendary "Starkiller Ranch" Thread
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Originally posted by: Erikstormtrooper

marvolo:
The reason I didn't include anything of the birth of Vader is because I had keeping the "I am your father" revelation as best as possible in mind. I kind of like the first Darth Vader scene to be the part in Episode 4 where he bursts into the Tantive IV. I think that is a fantastic introduction scene.
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I think it is kind of cool not to know what happens or even how he survives. In the next movie a new villian is introduced, and as time goes on we slowly learn it is actually Anakin.

I guess I just take it for granted that the big secret can't be preserved. Luke's last name kinda gives it away in my opinion.

Hmm...it wouldn't if you omit the references to "Lord Vader" in ROTS, but even then the statements of the Imperial March in the PT don't help, although they could be construed as representative of the dark times that are coming, and Anakin's conflict as a result of the circumstances leading to that. But you do still find yourself thinking, "Wait, where'd this Vader guy come from?" after Palpatine made such a big deal about Anakin in the PT.


marvolo:
The birth of Vader felt like a rushed CG fest to me. It is like Palps had an instant Vader maker lying around for just such an occasion. Throw in the half dead, charred body of a fallen comrade and presto! Out pops your very own Sith Lord! I just didn't like how he spends a few minutes on the table as a bunch of droids throw artificial appendages on him, and slip a leather suit right onto his freshly burnt and still melty skin. Then he stands up and everything is fine. I would have imagined months of rebuilding with some of the republics finest physicians.

Ha! This made me laugh. Yeah, it is kinda implausible, and the scene is probably meant to represent the passage of a LOT of time. Unfortunately, George got to the last half of Episode III and suddenly realized he still had to set up a whole bunch of stuff for the OT.

Yeah. He should've shot everything so we could have the huge four-hour deluxe edition DVD. Man, now that would provide some good fan editing material.


Musicman:
Thanks, to everybody! So are you thinking we should change the start of the "I Am the Senate" cue? That section from ESB does a rising string thing that would show that something's going down, but I don't know about the beginning of the IATS cue.

I really haven't started thinking about the music yet. I've been thinking that the video editing needs to come first, with the sound next, and the music last. Is that the wrong way to look at this?

Not necessarily, although there are definitely advantages to getting music set up early, as Trooperman pointed out. Also, the more of the music we have figured out earlier on, the easier it will be to sort out when finding cues for scenes that need to be "re-scored." Particularly, I'm going to need to know what scenes or segments will be totally omitted so that I can put the cues originally recorded for those scenes in the list of usable cues.


Musicman:
I think all the Rebellion scenes should be reinserted like in ADM's cut.

Going from memory, I thought some of the Rebellion's scenes were weak, especially the one in Padme's apartment. They tend to be boring and uneventful.

Well, the biggest thing going for them (aside from the setting up of the jealousy in the meeting with Palpatine) is that it makes Bail's involvement in the final third of the movie make a ton more sense than it does in the theatrical cut. I know when I first saw ROTS and Bail came on the scene after Order 66, I was thinking, "Wait, it's been a while since I've seen AOTC. Did I miss something?" Not so in ADM's extended cut with the Rebellion scenes. Also, we might be able to use some kind of cues with the Rebel Fanfare spice it up a bit--there are gentle flute statements of it in the Leia's theme section of the ANH end credits, and I think they might be in the Princess Leia's Theme concert suite as well, just for starters. I think they're worth working with.


Musicman:
Now I'm wondering what we want to do about the whole bank dialogue. I've heard other people talk about how it was rough to see Anakin burning up and having Obi-Wan yell at him at the same time. So we need to figure out what's going on with Obi-Wan. What's his thought process--does he have a thought process at this point, or is he just kind of snapping? He hasn't been able to get Anakin to stop, and he's just breaking under the strain. I don't know. I'm really not sure about it.

To me, Obi Wan is having a difficult moment where he has to come to terms with what he's been forced to do. He told Yoda this would be hard for him, and it is. He's probably still torn about whether he should help Anakin or finish him off. But then the lava makes his decision for him. That's really the reason I think he should wait to pick up the saber. If he's in the middle of this really emotional decision, is he gonna stop and say, "Oh, wait, let me pick up this saber".


Ha! Yeah, I see that. As I thought about it, that moment was really rough for me (and it doesn't make much sense to just pick up the saber like that. It should definitely be at the end, when he walks away.), but I think it'll really help it in our cut when up to that point, he's been really reaching out to Anakin, and Anakin keeps pushing back. As it is, Obi-Wan almost seems kind of cocky most of the time. It's weird.

As a sidenote: I think another thing we should do in Obi-Wan's arc here, is when he goes to see Padme, when she asks him, "You're going to kill him, aren't you?", cut out Obi-Wan's line, "He has become a great threat." There's enough there to make a nice juicy pause. She asks him the question, and there's no answer. He doesn't know yet, really. Just another part of that eliminating his decisiveness.


Adywan:
I think the Maul/ Grievous idea could be pulled off by adding a couple of small scenes at the end of EP1. after the scene where Palpatine arrives there could be a small shot of a droid hovering over the pit where Maul fell and you see it go down or better still you see it emerging from the pit with the body of Maul, then cut to the obi-wan/yoda scene.

If this scene is in TPM, would we go a whole movie - AOTC - without hearing of Maul/Grievous again? That seems like a bit of a disconnect.


Yeah, that's the whole point, really. Because you've got that gap. If I recall, that was part of the point of having a whole new scene--so we have something in Episode II that bridges the Maul/Grievous issue from TPM to ROTS. But adywan has a good point--if we've got some kind of establishment at the Episode I that we may not have seen the last of Maul, then it would give a lot more weight to just a snippet of dialogue at the end of SOTDS. Because as it is, if Palpatine just says something like Trooperman was thinking, then you've got something, but if there's that stuff at the end of TPM, then the attentive viewer could get the gears working and thinking, "Wait a minute--holy crap! He's talking about Maul!"

So, yes, any new scenes should be at the end of the TPM, but you should still have some kind of dialogue in the Coruscant conversation. Now, adywan: in suggesting these scenes, are you implying that this may actually be possible? shanep mentioned the recovery droids from the extended pod race, and that's a good possibility. I personally don't want that bit in the pod race, so they would be, in our cut, previously unseen droids. Any other ideas for execution of these scenes?



lth:
there's no reason, really, why Maul can't be called Maul in Ep1 and Grievous in Ep3.

This is another way to go. Some people were expecting it would happen like this in ROTS anyway. This way it's more of a surprise to the viewer and we have another "reveal" moment. Grievous can drop a few hints to Obi Wan - and to us - at the beginning of the movie. Then the truch comes out during the big fight, like Adywan suggests.


If we don't have Palpatine in Episode I, though, then I don't think we would even have to deal with using the name, Maul, though--I think he's the only one who uses it. However, we can add it in the subtitles for Nute, and that would be fine. BTW, I'm really looking forward to tackling some music for the remainder of the Obi-Wan/Grievous duel (which got tracked with the music for the Invisible Hand bridge scene).
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#277560
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Two-Face (A Batman: The Animated Series Movie) (* unfinished project *)
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Hey, that's cool man. I hope I didn't sound impatient there. Thanks.

I'm now actually considering taking the Two-Face title card, and then from there copying frames that don't have text on them, and making new titles over it. Does that sound like a good idea? Does anyone have experience with efficiently copying a few frames and looping them into a given amount of time? Is there a program that does that? Are you guys getting tired of questions? Tune in next week: same Bat-time, same Bat-channel!
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#277559
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The legendary "Starkiller Ranch" Thread
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Originally posted by: Erikstormtrooper
OK. Lots of good stuff to reply to.

About Anakin's turn: I've also been thinking that Anakin's turn should happen in the Council chamber, with the aid of echo-y voiceovers to let us know what he's thinking about (heavy on the Palpatine dialog). Using some better "disturbed" music is a great idea too. Although Anakin's turn has been gradual, I think we still need a moment when it actually happens, DELIBERATELY. The music should really let the viewer know that, when he walks out of the room, he's made up his mind. Are there any long shots of Anakin in the chamber where we can add some Trooperman voice work, like "I can't let this happen"?

Thanks, to everybody! So are you thinking we should change the start of the "I Am the Senate" cue? That section from ESB does a rising string thing that would show that something's going down, but I don't know about the beginning of the IATS cue.

(As an aside, we should play up Anakin's jealousy of Obi Wan and suspicion that he and Padme have a thing going on. The birth of the rebellion deleted scene where they meet with Palpatine is good for this).

Yeah, I think so. That becomes a big issue when Obi-Wan appears the top of the ramp. I think all the Rebellion scenes should be reinserted like in ADM's cut.

OK. So when Anakin walks in on the Palpatine fight, he's already made up his mind about what he has to do. I'll use the "Jedi Confront Palpatine" clip (which I discovered was made by OT.com member Darkhelmet) as the basis of this:
Anakin walks in - long shot.
Mace: (to Palpatine) You have lost.
Anakin steps close.
Mace: I am going to end this once and for all.
Mace rears saber back.
Palpatine (voiceover): Anakin!
Anakin says "NO" and cuts off Mace's arm.
Palpatine fries Mace (and himself) and throws mace out the window.
After this, Anakin does not express any remorse or question himself.
(BTW, the whole Palpatine transformation thing is a mess. I think Darkhelmet handles it pretty well. It's not perfect, but it sorta works.)

Sounds good.

Some more thoughts on the lava scene: After watching Marvolo and C3PX's clips, I thought they were both pretty good. However, something about the fades in C3PX's version felt a little weird. (Do we have any other fades in Star Wars?) In C3PX's clip, I did like the idea that we don't see the Emperor come and get Anakin. That always felt a little too mundane. Maybe after the shot of the hand grabbing the ground, we can see the shadow of the shuttle passing over.

That sounds pretty good.

I was struck by the lack of the Vader reconstruction. I think this is a very powerful moment that needs to stay in some form. (And let's keep the awesome "Lord Vader, RISE" from the trailer.)


I definitely think it should be somewhere. C3PX does have a valid point, but if nothing else, it should be in as a flashback. And, yes, it was a disappointment when the "RISE" moment wasn't in the movie.

I had another small edit idea for the lava scene. Obi Wan should stay "closer" the whole time he is talking and watching Anakin "die". Only after he thinks Anakin is dead (whether he is or not) does he starts walking up, PICKS UP THE SABER, and pauses at a higher level to look for a moment. A rotoscoped shot of a stationary "dead" Anakin can go here as Obi Wan looks on, and then he walks off as we get the wide shot that pulls away (obviously mute the Anakin wails).


Now I'm wondering what we want to do about the whole bank dialogue. I've heard other people talk about how it was rough to see Anakin burning up and having Obi-Wan yell at him at the same time. So we need to figure out what's going on with Obi-Wan. What's his thought process--does he have a thought process at this point, or is he just kind of snapping? He hasn't been able to get Anakin to stop, and he's just breaking under the strain. I don't know. I'm really not sure about it.

Thoughts on Grievous/Maul: I think this is a good idea, IF it can be pulled off. If nothing else, it helps to give Episode I a little more meaning, and it reinforces Palpatine's obsession with keeping his apprentices alive in a mehcanical suit. The trick is to come up with some kind of scene in Episode II where Palpatine talks about or shows this. Maybe at the end on Coruscant when Palpatine is talking to Dooku and they are walking off, we can just cobble together some lines where Palpatine says something like "I have promising news of Darth Grievous. The Dark Side of the Force has restored him". Trooperman?


Yep. It seems like the end is the place for it.

If we do this, should we have Dooku remain "Count Dooku" and not be Darth Tyranus? Sort of like he's working for Sidious, but not an "official" apprentice.


That's not so much of an issue for me. I wouldn't really mind it either way.

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#277504
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The legendary "Starkiller Ranch" Thread
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Originally posted by: Trooperman
Aargh! I just lost everything I just typed...

I definitely think we should go with Ep. III next. As someone said, Ep. I is pretty far removed from the actual meat of the story. The OT is already great, in my opinion. The logical next step after Ep. II is to continue and tackle the cringeworthy badness that is Ep. III. As I finish up Ep. II over the next couple months, I think it'd be good to discuss some basic plot points.

Big ones:

-How do we make Anakin's turn (and subsequent stay through Ep. III-VI) to the Dark Side believable and logical?
-Does Darth Maul=General Grievous? If so, how? If not, how do we salvage that whole section of Ep. III (without filming new footage- I don't have a Panavision handy)

With Adywan onboard, he has the SPFX tools and knowledge to make more radical changes possible.

Also, cinematography-wise, Ep. III is a huge improvement over Ep. II, especially for the Anakin/Palpatine scenes (which I wish there were more of). Less work there.

Also, GoodMusician's complete Ep. III score will make music much easier than it was with Ep. II. I wound up replacing the majority of the music for SOTDS, simply because the tracks were hacked up and mixed far too low in the soundtrack. And as GoodMusician said, very little music has been released otherwise. So that'll be a lot easier.

And I'll be back for Anakin, along with all of the other actors in SOTDS, as far as I know. So it looks like things would be set to go after SOTDS. I'm kind of tired of doing this right now, but I'm sure I'll help edit part of the movie. I relish the idea of redoing the scenes involving Anakin. Thinking about fixing the Grievous scenes, lightsaber-fighting Yoda, and etc. just gives me a headache at this point.

But that's stuff to be worked out later. Now if those two basic points can be hammered out, we'll have a starting spot


As far as Maul/Grievous goes, if we're going to do it, then...I hate to say it, but I think we would need a scene in SOTDS with Dooku. Perhaps we can splice together some Christopher Lee dialogue and stick it in the meeting with Palpatine at the end? But however it gets done, I think it would be necessary to have it in there. Either that, or you'll have to stick something in Episode I or Episode III to acknowledge that this has been happening. From there, I'm not sure what to do other than what has been said in the most recent discussion of this, with some dialogue over the close-ups in Utapau. We are, of course, freed up quite a bit with what Grievous can say because there is no mouth to be dictated by.


Now, as far as the turn...hmm. It seems like the best course of action is what C3PX said--have the turn happen in the chamber. However, I'm about to go into a little more thought-process detail here and stuff. It seems like if we're going to execute something, we need to get figured out why stuff is happening. This is just my two cents on the issue, so take it or leave it--I'm the music editor. If I wax incoherent, bear with me.

As I think about it, Anakin was just saying he would've liked to kill Palpatine. Then he goes and tells Mace. Doesn't sound like he's planning to turn anytime soon. But, I think one thing that would push him over at least partially is Mace's "If what you say is true, you'll have earned my trust" line. What, I haven't earned it already?! What the crap?! And then he puts on a good face, and goes into the chamber like Mace said, and stews over all this. He's taking it all in. He goes over everything. He hates the situation. He doesn't want this to have to happen (and his dissatisfaction becomes clear in his talk with Padme, talking of overthrowing Palpatine). Finally he gets to "They don't trust me anyway...I might as well save Padme." Of course, we don't know all this is happening, but that's part of the whole thing.

But as a help to elevate it, I think music can help in these kinds of scenes. I'm thinking we can put an altered form of the section from 7:13-8:11 of "Rescue From Cloud City/Hyperspace" from the ESB score to underscore the ruminations scene. Listen particularly to the statement of the Imperial March that starts at 7:47 to see what I mean. It's a churning, disturbed segment of music, and it really could underline the turmoil inside Anakin is he tries to figure out what he's going to do--it kind of gives us a peek inside him as the Dark Side pulls on him. The end of the section would segue into the "I Am the Senate" cue which begins when Anakin starts to leave the Jedi Temple.

So, all that struggling he does in front of Mace and Palpatine in the original ROTS is done in the chamber now, like C3PX said. I think adding that ESB music will really make that scene in our cut. Somehow we handle the arrest attempt (the clip on Erik's site was pretty good, although we may want to do some tweaking), and then Anakin arrives. Like C3PX said, Anakin basically charges in there. I think it would be nice though if before that happens, we have a brief shot of Anakin taking in the scene, maybe bracing himself in a "here goes nothing" kind of way, and then charging in. Now, whether he should kill Mace directly or not, I personally am undecided. It would definitely be a powerful moment, but then there's the lightning all over Mace. If nothing else, I suppose it would be an improvement just for Anakin not to talk about it, but...hmm. It's a pickle.

I'm glad you'll be back, Trooperman! Yes, it's amazing the amount of music that we've gotten. I actually have an edit of the score myself. It's got a couple rough spots, though. And GoodMusician is bound to have found some useful alternate takes and such that make my job easier...

We still definitely need to soften the picture on ROTS, but yeah, the Mustafar duel, for instance is actually pretty okay looking. Sometimes it gets out there, but it's pretty good. It's just a matter of making it look more like film.

Sadly, I haven't gotten to view the clips yet. I look forward to checking them out.

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#277043
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The legendary "Starkiller Ranch" Thread
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I'm the music editor. Erik, you're still in story and running the site, correct? CC is project leader. He was on recently, but hasn't been in the most recent discussion, but I did talk to him last week. He has some ideas, and he was working on some stuff for the Ranch--he wanted to get that clip of a rough edit of the duel finished and post it, so between that and real life it may be eating into his board time. I don't think we're doing any Starkiller approved edits, just the same old group stuff. It is true, adywan's ANH is pretty much what we would do--but we would have to make sure all the story stuff would be right...remember all that discussion on Ben's Hut?

Originally posted by: Erikstormtrooper
Originally posted by: musicman

The only thing is, if Palps really is able to bring someone to life, then if Anakin knows that this is what happened, then he's going to say that they have to go bring Padme back.


Quite true. But there's nothing in ROTS that stops Anakin/Vader from turning to Palpatine after his big "NO" and asking "Now about that stopping people from dying stuff". This is a big plot hole. You would think it might come up at some point, and that Vader would find out about Palpatine's bluff. So having Vader die doesn't really change much, in my opinion.

Well, if the Dark Side is keeping him alive, then that's a step in the right direction. But then, why live? Well, he was already talking to Padme about overthrowing Palpatine, so that could be sort of his mission--only at this point it's coming out of revenge and anger, and he doesn't care who he has to kill to make his submission really convincing. Along the way, he's going to end up getting even more peeved to find out that Padme was still alive when he left her. (And, by the way, have we totally discarded the idea of making it seem like Padme's still alive at the end?) So he's plotting and scheming the whole time--in the Sith fashion. Now, Vader doesn't know when she's going to be buried, but in the film, Palpatine basically said, "Weeeell, I don't exactly know how to bring people to life, but if you and I put our heads together, we'll figure it out!" So in the film, I guess Vader just loses hope in the whole thing. But if Palps brings him back to life, and Anakin knows about it, then he'll know that it's still possible to bring her back if they hurry, which would make it so we would need more dialogue with Palpatine B.S.ing his way out of it. Either way, you're kind of pushing it, but at least there's kind of an explanation in there if he doesn't die. So, it seems the easiest way to solve this is to go with C3PX's variation where Anakin is alive, but he seems dead to Obi-Wan and the audience. However, if we can find a way to do your version, I'm all for it.


C3PX, as far as filling out the end, we can at least have the Dagobah arrival. It's not much, but it's more there. On the other hand, I'm wondering what the effect would be, after seeing that scene in the movie, once you get to ESB.


I'm neutral to the Dagobah scene. It's not bad, but it just doesn't do that much for me. Yoda's identity in ESB won't be a secret to the viewer, so the arrival scene doesn't break anything.

True. Really, the Qui-Gon dialogue would be the biggest part of the scene.


And that brings me to another thought--do we want to have the Qui-Gon speaking to Yoda stuff, a la ADM? I thought that was pretty cool, and the dialogue during the spinning shot addresses Yoda's guilt over the situation effectively.


I think the Qui Gon dialog is a must have, but IMHO I haven't seen an edit that pulled it off right yet.


In dialogue selection, audio quality/mixing, or both? I thought ADM's dialogue was pretty good, but the voice could've been a bit quieter. It stood out just a bit.


So, basically the flow would be birth/masking sequence, Obi-Wan and Yoda talk about Qui-Gon, Yoda goes to Dagobah, funeral, Tatooine, and credits?


Pretty much. Except I might move Padme's funeral before Yoda's arrival.


Okay, cool.

And I vote (again) for episode III. I think it will be more satisfying than Episode I. Episode I is a tough one, and I'd prefer to check out lth's Episode I edit before thinking more about it.

ROTJ has a lot of room for improvement. But I think we should handle the prequels first.

I wonder if we can get Adywan to insert the Starkiller Ranch logo at the beginning of his Episode IV.


As I read the reasonings, as well as getting in the ROTS discussions, I'm thinking that, yeah, it would be a good idea to start there. And, yes, the prequels should definitely be finished first.

And, I think the dubbings will really help Episode I. As I watched ADM's edit of Episode I recently, I was surprised at how, although certainly not on the same level as the OT or anything like that, I was actually enjoying it. There's some charm there, definitely. Part of it may have been my enjoyment in seeing a PT movie shot on film, but...

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#276912
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Two-Face (A Batman: The Animated Series Movie) (* unfinished project *)
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I'm still waiting on the credits music, but I had a new thought. Should I cut the Batman theme opening? I'm thinking of taking the WB logo from the fullscreen side of the Mask of the Phantasm DVD and placing that at the beginning. A second or two of silence, and then fade into the title card. I'm thinking, while it would be better to have a true, full main titles, this would still be more movie-like than having the series intro on every one that I make. What do you guys think?
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#276905
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The legendary "Starkiller Ranch" Thread
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Originally posted by: Erikstormtrooper
C3PX, I'm not sure if you've read it in this thread, but I've had a similar idea about Episode III and the lava scene. Except I take it one step further, and have Anakin actually die, and Obi Wan sees it happen. Then the Emperor retrieves his body and brings him back to life as Vader (with heavy modification of the construction of Vader scenes so that Anakin's body is motionless). This goes along with my "Power of the Dark Side" idea: it's Vader's loyalty to the Dark Side that keeps him alive. If he betrays his master, he ceases to live. If you think about how Obi Wan talks about Anakin in the OT, and how Vader says he must obey his master, this starts to make a lot of sense.

About the birth scenes in Episode III, I think the entire scene should stand as it is, with the exception of Padme naming both the twins. It makes no sense to have her name Luke but not Leia. The scene aboard Tantive IV is weak anyway ("Yeah, let's hide him with his family and let him keep his last name. Great plan!), so the entire discussion of the twins' fate should go, including "My wife and I have always wanted a daughter." (Maybe the tail end of this scene can be saved, where Yoda tells Obi Wan about his training on Tatooine.) Luke can be dropped off (it is a beautiful scene, and a good one to close on), but not Leia.

Musicman, I'm not positive, but I don't think Leia is referred to as Organa in ANH.

I would love it if Leia could not be Luke's sister (sorry to step on your EU, people). But I think it will be very hard to pull off. I don't see how Leia and Han can have any kind of reolution without it. Han should have died, but he didn't. We have to deal with that and work with what we have. So Han needs some kind of resolution.


Hmm...the Anakin dying thing is interesting, and gets rid of Obi-Wan leaving Anakin to die--it's more like he just kind of freezes, unable to come to a decision, only able to stand and watch in horror. The only thing is, if Palps really is able to bring someone to life, then if Anakin knows that this is what happened, then he's going to say that they have to go bring Padme back. So the only way you can work that is that it's at least fairly clearly that Anakin wasn't cognizent of his death--that he doesn't realize that's what happened. Otherwise we'll have to do some serious dubbing. I like the idea, but we do need to make sure we can execute it well.

Yeah, if you can save the end of the Tantive IV discussion, then that would be good. C3PX, as far as filling out the end, we can at least have the Dagobah arrival. It's not much, but it's more there. On the other hand, I'm wondering what the effect would be, after seeing that scene in the movie, once you get to ESB. And that brings me to another thought--do we want to have the Qui-Gon speaking to Yoda stuff, a la ADM? I thought that was pretty cool, and the dialogue during the spinning shot addresses Yoda's guilt over the situation effectively.

If the name Organa isn't mentioned, then you're safe. And, yes, it's true, I can't think of a way to resolve the triangle without the brother-sister thing... *sigh* maybe in twenty years when they've got perfect CG and voice duplication, we can do this thing right!

So, basically the flow would be birth/masking sequence, Obi-Wan and Yoda talk about Qui-Gon, Yoda goes to Dagobah, funeral, Tatooine, and credits?


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#276781
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The legendary "Starkiller Ranch" Thread
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Well, you still have the issue of Leia appearing in the OT as an Organa--it is explicitly referred to as Bail as her father in ANH, right, not just one of the people Obi-Wan worked with? I could've sworn she said Organa. That would take some editing to not have people putting two and two together pretty quick. Because in ROTS, the other baby gets taken with Bail--but, hmm...perhaps you could cut out Bail's line of "My wife and I have always wanted a daughter." If you leave out the naming of Leia, then it's very ambiguous.

I do think it would be cool for Leia not to turn out to be Luke's sister, and then we don't have to cut out that hilarious shot with Threepio walking up to see Leia giving Luke a kiss in ESB. And, for the record, I was one who always rooted for Luke to end up with Leia. It does seem more in the spirit of the original, you know? That whole, old-school, serial thing. The main protagonist gets the girl. And it is also in keeping with Kurtz and Ford's wishes--that Han dies. I think it would have been cool if Han died saving the team on the sail barge, and then Luke goes nuts on the criminals. It's a shame there isn't the kind of footage to accomplish that...or is there? I don't suppose there would be. Han's pretty integral to the rest of the story. Oh, well. There's my little mini-rant about how things turned out.

But at least if we can make it so Luke and Leia aren't related, then that's a help.

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#276531
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The legendary "Starkiller Ranch" Thread
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Some interesting ideas, there. I think there was talk of integrating footage from the Ewok movies to the Battle of Endor.

However, I am totally against any form of having Hayden as the Anakin ghost. Say what you will about "looking how you want to," it doesn't make any sense, because Luke wouldn't--shouldn't--recognize Hayden. Shaw is the only form of Anakin he saw, and if only for that reason, Anakin would appear as he did just before he died. I say go with Shaw as the ghost.

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#275209
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'Raiders of the Lost Ark: The Adaptation' (Released)
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A group of preteens/teens, upon seeing Raiders when it came out, decided to make a shot-for-shot remake of Raiders. It spanned several years, but they finished it. I understand it's rather impressive considering the budget and technology that was available. I haven't gotten the opportunity to see it and I agree that it would be wonderful to have on DVD for those who can't make it to the screenings.
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#275048
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Episode II: Shroud of the Dark Side (the TM edit) (Released)
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It does seem rather frightening. However, I really don't think it's an issue for you, Trooperman. I'm pretty sure this has been discussed on the Reborn thread, but I think the major concern was that this was being done on MySpace, which has millions of people who could be getting free (although edited) versions of Star Wars, as opposed to a small but dedicated fan community who is active in using their creativity in not-for-profit ways. Nothing at all has come against anyone who has done anything here. MagnoliaFan hasn't gotten any issues, nor has ADM, adywan, or anyone else. They all kept it here. It's pretty clear that nothing's being sold here, also. I really think it was because of the publicity that is on MySpace, especially since official movie studios have begun using it for advertising.

Yes, definitely keep safe. But I don't think it's really necessary to go extra-underground, if you see what I'm saying. If you keep it on the level that you've had it, I don't see any reason why there would be any problems.

You must do what you feel is right, of course...

In the meantime, it's great that you've gotten that help. I'm glad the Analysis Droid scene is fixed up!
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#274977
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Two-Face (A Batman: The Animated Series Movie) (* unfinished project *)
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And replied to. Thanks!

I'm re-encoding Two-Face at top quality (which I hadn't before) and I'm going to re-edit them, and then hopefully around the time I've finished the edit I'll have the music in and I'll be able to finish it.

Now, the DVDs will just be straight-up, stick the DVD in the player, watch it, and you're done; I don't have DVD Lab Pro or anything. Does anyone have any recommendations for what kind of DVD-Rs to use? My Dad has a bunch of Memorex DVD-Rs that he's using for church and let me try to burn the first version on, but when I tried to play it in the player, it said something about "Disc Error--Playback function may not be set" or something like that. He said that Memorex DVD-Rs don't always work the best on a lot of non-PC players. I'll probably give it another shot, but if it's not working, are there any other brands anyone is successfully using?
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#274731
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Two-Face (A Batman: The Animated Series Movie) (* unfinished project *)
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Originally posted by: calisto
Originally posted by: musicman
Yeah, MOTP and Subzero are definitely worth just listening--and I am incredibly excited to find out that there is indeed a Subzero soundtrack!


If you want these m8, I am just grabbing them now.


Yes, that would be excellent!! Thanks so much! Send me a PM with the details, and we'll work it out.


And, no, Number20, I haven't heard them (unfortunately). I only know that a guy saw them. That would definitely be a burn. I'll see what's in the set that calisto's getting. MOTP and Subzero alone should be a big help, but if there's more TAS material--all the better!

Interestingly enough, I was working on a score set where I would do my best to edit around the dialogue and minimize sound effects. I finished a rough version for disc one of Volume One, but now I can't find it. I'll redo it sometime in the near future.