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- Star Wars: <strong>The Rise Of Skywalker</strong> Redux Ideas thread
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He even resembles Shaw a little.
He even resembles Shaw a little.
Maybe something like this?
https://www.starwarsauthentics.com/iSynApp/productDisplay.action?sid=1102083&productId=1646820&isynsharedsession=cjsxC446429fujtg5Bj3BvM3jezIFrV6zr1ZJwNcK6U
So in this hypothetical version, Palpatine is dying, all this time he has been grooming Kylo and Rey, a prophesiced Dyad, to inherit the throne after his death. Palps gives the rundown to Kylo but he knows that there has to be a catch, he plays along but plans to kill him together with Rey. I think the dynamic between Kylo and Palps has to change, Palps will play the act of a weak, harmless old man, like the good old days with Anakin. Make Kylo less hostile, rather more intrigued. I’m working on a mockup that will go something like this:
- At last! My boy.
- Snoke trained you well.
- I killed Snoke.
- I made Snoke. I have been the voice inside your head.
- The first Order was just the beginning, I will give you so much more.
- I have died before, now I don’t have long, I’m weak - more than a clone, less than a man.
- What could you give me ?
- Everything - a new Empire, the might of the final order will soon be ready, It will be yours if you do what I ask.
- Become what your grand father Vader could not! Find the girl, Turn her and bring her before me. Together you will rule the galaxy as emperor and empress. Two that become one. A dyad of the dark-side of the force.
- Who is she ?
- Our blood. (just my crazy headcanon)
Here’s a proof of concept:
https://vimeo.com/411776713-Added in a hint of the “Palpatine’s teachings” track.
-Axed Snoke’s clone, as well as switching around the shots for better fluidity.
-Cut Snoke’s line “you have ever heard”.
-Cut Kylo’s aggression, he’s almost submissive, which in the context of this story makes his plan to kill Palps all the more pronounced.It be cool if someone could replace the vats of Snoke clones with ones of Palapatine instead.
It’s a good idea, but wouldn’t palps have to be naked? I’m getting queasy just thinking about it.
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like he’s pressing buttons on a Palpatine soundboard.
That might actually make sense story wise 😂
Glad you liked it, unfortunately my audio chops are pretty amateur at the moment so I’m not sure how seamless I can make it, I could however provide time stamped references to the exact moments in the films where I collected the words if anyone wants to take a stab.
Thanks, always thought the original line was a bit of a cop-out.
So in this hypothetical version, Palpatine is dying, all this time he has been grooming Kylo and Rey, a prophesiced Dyad, to inherit the throne after his death. Palps gives the rundown to Kylo but he knows that there has to be a catch, he plays along but plans to kill him together with Rey. I think the dynamic between Kylo and Palps has to change, Palps will play the act of a weak, harmless old man, like the good old days with Anakin. Make Kylo less hostile, rather more intrigued. I’m working on a mockup that will go something like this:
- At last! My boy.
- Snoke trained you well.
- I killed Snoke.
- I made Snoke. I have been the voice inside your head.
- The first Order was just the beginning, I will give you so much more.
- I have died before, now I don’t have long, I’m weak - more than a clone, less than a man.
- What could you give me ?
- Everything - a new Empire, the might of the final order will soon be ready, It will be yours if you do what I ask.
- Become what your grand father Vader could not! Find the girl, Turn her and bring her before me. Together you will rule the galaxy as emperor and empress. Two that become one. A dyad of the dark-side of the force.
- Who is she ?
- Our blood. (just my crazy headcanon)
Here’s a proof of concept:
https://vimeo.com/411776713
-Added in a hint of the “Palpatine’s teachings” track.
-Axed Snoke’s clone, as well as switching around the shots for better fluidity.
-Cut Snoke’s line “you have ever heard”.
-Cut Kylo’s aggression, he’s almost submissive, which in the context of this story makes his plan to kill Palps all the more pronounced.
Very clever use of the documentary footage for Luke, worthy of the silverscreen.
We’ll probably see it in 20 years.
Tony Gilroy, who took over the Rogue One reshoots, is now taking over as the showrunner on StarWars’ Cassian Andor series:
I’m sure when you’re done someone else could recolour Anakins robe.
The second episode managed to top the first!
Maul knew everything.
Spoilers for Siege of Mandalore
The 2nd episode happens concurrently with Obi-wan’s interception of Grievous. So you’re right on the money with the line on the outer rim sieges.
It’s a painting called “Valley of the Dead” by the surrealist Polish painter Zdzisław Beksiński.
Other examples of his work
https://c4.wallpaperflare.com/wallpaper/863/334/362/zdzisław-beksiński-dark-wallpaper-preview.jpg
https://c4.wallpaperflare.com/wallpaper/202/426/400/zdzisław-beksiński-wallpaper-preview.jpg
I think this would be the perfect colour for Exogol.
https://i.redd.it/5j29uw46xeu41.jpg
In the words of Von Sydow
“This will begin to make things right.”
I wonder If you could use shot’s of Anakin, Luke, and Obi-wan with their hand lifted up as if to back up Rey during the lightning clash.
For Luke you could use the shot of him raising the x-wing on Achto, For Anakin you could use the shot of him force choking Padme, and for Obi wan the shot of him force pushing against Anakin.
Promising indeed.
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In all seriousness though, I think having the redemption of Kylo Ren anchored on a hallucination of his father is a little silly. Leia’s presence needs to be felt throughout, not just as an afterthought but as directly involved with Han’s appearance and subsequently her sons redemption, Maybe instead of Luke shadowy silhouette after Han disappears, we see Leia’s. A force projection of sorts.
I really like this. That could be set by having Ben hear Luke and Han’s voices shout his name as he’s about to strike Rey.
I’d prefer not to include Leia with the ghosts. Her body is still sitting on Jungleworld, but I think we can get away with just hearing her voice because that seems to come first, as with Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan. Kinda/sorta. Plus her appearance at the end is that much nicer to see.
Interestingly enough, according to jedipaxis, in an earlier cut the phantoms of Luke and Leia appeared in front of Palpatine and gave the finishing blow. You probably won’t go that route given that in your version Leia’s body stays in the jungle till the end, although a version with Leia’s ghost could be useful for other edits where her body disappears after Kylo’s vision with Han.
You could play with the shot of Leia using the force in TLJ.
Maybe, you could have just the skywalkers behind Rey, Anakin front and centre, Luke on his right and Leia on his left.
The Rise of skywalker.