First clip I ever posted of this edit (Updated) (Anakin’s Theme Rescore)
Oh…that music, think I got a little emotional there.
Tone down some laughter/banter/extra lines. Although, it would be nice to have some specificity on which instances are too much.
Oops my bad, So here’s the specific instances that I felt were a little too much, unnecessary, distracting or breaking flow.
-Obi Wan’s laugh when R2 hits the buzz droid.
-Anakin’s “you’re flying safe”
-Anakin’s “that’s why we’re here”.
-Anakin’s “I agree” after the elevator comment. Obi-wan’s “never an elevator…” line could use a raise in the volume.
-Very hard to understand what Anakin says after palpatines “I hope you know what you’re doing”
-Anakin’s calm “ready for this?” while they fall at 300 m/h
-“Wowowo” before the ray shields.
-The laughter when R2 arrives, undercuts the comedic punch of “see, no problem”.
-Anakin’s “go ahead buddy” to R2, It takes away from his surprise attack which is supposed to mirror the scene on Jabba’s place.
-Whatever Obi-wan says when catching his lightsaber from Grievous’ cloak.
One last nitpick, I agree about the colour correction looking a little like an instegram filter, I’d rather a more conservative approach.
Otherwise, I’m all in.
From there, but a Parisian for the moment.
Nawh bud I just saw it on reddit.
PS: Irish;)
It’s May 4th in New Zealand, Rise of Skywalker is out and the only extras are… Guess what?
The trailer.
Jedit: looks like it’s been updated, still no deleted scenes.
https://www.reddit.com/r/StarWarsLeaks/comments/gcskt6/comment/fpd7co5?context=3
Personally I would prefer an ending with Rey igniting her saber and then watching the sunset with her saber at hand.
The behind the scenes drama at lucasfilm would make for an interesting film.
We seem to be made to suffer, it’s our lot in life.
Ooh nice, if only there was someone on the thread that could pull it off 👀
Digging most of the changes, I think some of the laughing and giggling between shots might be a little bit over-kill, so I think toning it down a bit would make it flow better, I also think some of the extra lines for Anakin feel a little out of place and kinda brake the flow of the scene, like when Anakin calmly says “I won’t lose you” just after choking his wife.
Other-wise great job.
100%
NeverarGreat said:
something drastic needs to be done with the end of this movie.
This ending is shallow, depressing, anti-climactic, clumsy and another thousand adjectives.
Her story went nowhere, ending exactly where it started, alone, sliding down the sand.
Ben Solo is the key.
I think the ending of shot of Rey and BB-8 facing the sun could be played with in various ways, since Rey is mostly a silhouette I had the the idea, although radical, to somehow mirror the end shot of Attack of the clones with Anakin and Padme, What if we shot the silhouettes of a Rey and Kylo cos-player in a similar fashion against the sunrise 😉
Cut all old woman/ Rey Skywalker nonsense.
Have Rey watch Ben solo Walk up to her in the distance, replacing the shot of the ghosts.
Cut to Rey walking to the sunset with BB-8.
Cut to wide shot.
Silhouettes of Cos-players walk up to eachother.
Embrace/etc .
Fin
This is where Sideways seems to have gotten the rumours about duel of the fates.
https://youtu.be/eIEcP7dJuy0?t=516
She lays in bed afterwards so I’m sure the idea of force projection won’t get lost.
The blade runner-esque score really gave the scenes an eary feeling and sense of dread. Really well done.
It’s from Samuel Kim’s rendition of the trailer music.
https://youtu.be/V-O7HXXHcBs
Excellent changes, really loved the new theme for Leia calling Ben.
The use of the drums throughout the fight is also subtle yet very effective.
What do you think of cutting some of Mazes exposition?
Keeping “to reach her son will take all the strength she has left” while axing “Leia knows what must be done”.
Regardless, I think it would be nice to have the sanscrit chants from DOTF play in that scene,
Exactly.
It would also kinda show that she hasn’t reached the levels of Luke’s power, but barely.
Love it .
I think it might be better if she was a mere fade, you can get away with more that way.
Good luck Snooker!
Rejoice for the stench of this heresy shall soon transform into aromatic delight 😉
That’s sounds great! I did a test with that here https://vimeo.com/411776713 but I’m not satisfied with the sound, could you send me the vocals without the music?
Hmm yeah I guess he could be cropped out.
Anyone know of a good empty shot of the council chambers? I want to use the shot of kylo from the deleted TLJ shot and have him staring out one of the windows, Anakin style.