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It could be a 3 part reveal

“I pushed you in the desert because I needed to see it, I needed you to see it, What you did to your parents, so long ago”. Rey’s reactions to Kylo’s dialogue works perfectly as a reaction to the reveal. In the hangar Kylo would tell Rey that Palpatine has been waiting for them all this time, that he sensed their darkness since they were children and declares that Kylo and Rey are a Dyad and that they will inherit the dark throne. (for this to work, Palpatine’s plan from the start would be to bring Rey, not kill her, so instead of “kill the girl” his dialogue to Kylo would change to “find the girl” “you will rule the Galaxy as Emperor and empress”)

Have you considered taking the route of Rey having killed her parents? For me the hangar scene just screams “revelations” like a big reveal in the making, and dialogue wise it might be easier to work with.

Bobson Dugnutt said:
And how it looks on the other shot

Once I have the Blu-Ray, I’ll work on it, for now I’ve only got screenshots

That damn wig.
Unwatchable.

Since you mentioned the blue, is it not wierd that Luke was all blue on Achto but on Tatooine he’s just normal? I think that could be why I feel it looks a little off.

😂😂
That looks great Jonh, I wonder if you could use a shot of Ben without the beard? I’m just so used to him without it.

snooker said:

https://streamable.com/2c6vox

Here’s my take on the Falcon shot. Lots of tweaks I still need to do, but this works as a proof-of-concept, I hope.

That looks fabulous. I agree with the others on the movement, and maybe it could be a bit bigger when it enters the frame, with a few tweaks it will be Perfect!

Octorox said:

It would require changing or extending the music, but I wonder if, for the “Just Rey” version of the ending, you could have Ben appear to Rey alone when she is mulling over how to reply to the old woman, but then have Luke and Leia join him in an additional shot while the Falcon takes off. I feel like that would keep it from feeling like she’s “rejecting” their name while still allowing all of them to have a presence.

Indeed!

Yeah it really was open to interpretation, My problem was that they played it too safe, kinda throwing hints of different explanations at the audience in the hopes that one would stick rather than sticking to their guns with one explanation and fleshing it out.

I think there needs to be a buffer shot in-between Rey walking out of Frame and the falcon shot, maybe the scene could be restructured so that Rey first sees the ghost of Ben alone, then when she walks out of Frame we see the ghosts of Luke and Leia watching her and then we cut to the falcon.

From watching the film and reading the visual guide, you get the impression that Palpatine was rebuilt and stiched together, hence the need for the huge robotic arm for his every move. The cloning was in relation to Snoke, Palpatine being a clone was only added later on in the novelisation. (although in the original script as per Ian himself, Palpatine explicitly said that he was a clone, but that was changed around to a vague reference to the darkside.)

Your right it wasn’t explicit, but it sure was the implication. I think the team at lucasfilm were reluctant to commit to any one explanation, they probably decided to stick to the clone route with the novelisation after backlash from the fans who (rightfully) also got he implication that the Palpatine that was in the film was the same one from ROTJ.

I’ve lost count. With the current version of the film I can barely allow it into my headcanon. But with the fanedits that are being worked on, that could change.

You could have Ben in the foreground with Luke and Leia behind him.

Could use younger versions of Luke and Leia, closer to ROTJ.
Would be quite the homage.

I agree on the luke and leia ghosts, something about them just seems…off.

That’s a really good track.
Ah the nostalgia.

Octorox said:

She only takes the name “Skywalker” because of what it means to us, not what it means to her, and the same can honestly be said about most of the nostalgia-baiting that happens in this movie…

Oh I agree.

Luke: Go awayyyy!

Rey: I think I like your name. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

https://youtu.be/heuveUxnLkA?t=129 Korriban, the home world. I can definitely see this playing when Kylo arrives on Exogol.

https://youtu.be/cXx7UJhz3iM?list=PLuV4AQfyHiJRBBS_W9bKZ4v_gGwDRLr-L&t=120 Occupation of Balmorra, Could play over the Mustafar Rampage.

https://youtu.be/VcDj_CBG68o https://youtu.be/peYlLeTDcIE Could be Rey’s jedi theme.

There’s a wealth of tracks in there.

Since we’re re-scoring the film, what do you guys think of using tracks from games like KOTOR, STOR and Shadows of the Empire (an absolute masterpiece of a soundtrack).

That would work since you’ve renamed your version of the prequels.

Double post.

Do you have a workprint? I’d love to check it out.

I mentioned this on the other thread, but if someone had access to a really good camera and a green screen setup they could get a shot of Rey and Kylo (using cos-players) to use for the tatooine ending, all you would need is a wide, silhouette shot of them walking towards each other, embracing, and then watching the sunset.

“The Rule of Two”
-the dyad
-Palpatine and Kylo’s a-symbiotic relationship.
-Rey and Kylo at the end (especially if he appears on tattoine)

I think using the emperor’s name in the title would kinda give the vibe that he’s hijacked the skywalker saga.(he kinda does anyway)