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#1440461
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Chase Adams said:

CaptainFaraday said:

Unfortunately it’s a unique music track and soundscape that I don’t think is available in “clean” audio.

Pretty sure the music during the Jedi voices scene has been released, I’ll have to recheck…

Edit:

Yep
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qZJFjmLhQw4&list=PLWZBlPcT9yJgBixwC3IWLBEZ4_ZqbB4-i&index=29

Oh, what! How did I miss this! I was sure I’d checked every track on the OST, this is fantastic!

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#1440456
Topic
Godzilla Versus Megalon: Less Talking! More Fighting! More Monsters! (Released)
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Synopsis: When the sunken kingdom of Seatopia attacks the surface, two scientists and a young boy must help Godzilla and the robot Jet Jaguar stop the monstrous Megalon and the evil Gigan from destroying the Earth!

My five year old son recently started playing a Godzilla fighting game and decided that he loves Godzilla. But he’d never seen a Godzilla movie, so I showed him the English dub of Godzilla Versus Megalon (1973), the most child-friendly one I could think of.

But when I rewatched it, I realised it’s not quite as child-friendly as I remembered! Additionally, the parts with the human characters drag on; there’s also a lot of filler conversations, and a lot of very long shots of not much happening. I’ve cut the movie down to a lean hour of campy seventies family-friendly fun, keeping intact the excitement and danger of the humans’ story while toning down the violence and filler. It’s gone from a slog that my son patiently sits through to get to the giant monsters, to a fun romp he enjoys watching throughout.

Overall changes:

  • Cut 20 minutes from the overall runtime.
  • Minimised the humans’ screentime to give more time to the monsters fighting, while keeping the plot and entertaining human scenes intact.
  • Removed inappropriate human violence, blood, and smoking.
  • Added Gigan’s theme throughout as a leitmotif.
  • Trimmed lengthy filler shots.

Changelog:

  • Gave myself a vocal cameo in the movie somewhere.
  • Trimmed the lengthy shots surrounding the cracks in the sea opening.
  • Cut down the conversation in the car to avoid mentioning nuclear genocide and mass death.
  • Cut the lengthy shots of the car driving.
  • Removed the subplot about investigating the button and the sand.
  • Removed the car chase sequence that goes nowhere.
  • Simplified the explanation that the sand came from Easter Island.
  • Trimmed the villains’ car driving around.
  • Shortened conversation about Jet Jaguar’s technology.
  • Replaced gunshot sounds when people are hit by the smoke gun with Star Wars stun blaster sounds.
  • Simplified the radio conversation about the villains’ plan.
  • Trimmed the Seatopia cultist dancing and simplified their explanation for going to war with the surface.
  • Trimmed and re-ordered the lengthy shots leading up to Megalon’s reveal, to make the mountain explode more rapidly.
  • Combined some of the scenes of the main characters tied up in the truck and severely truncated them, including removing the filler conversation the villains have in the cab.
  • Trimmed the scene of the villain reprogramming Jet Jaguar so he just presses buttons on the computer bank, since small children don’t immediately recognise what punch-cards are any more.
  • Trimmed down the length of time the scientist character spends waking up, including cutting the villain’s unnecessary explanation about Jet Jaguar landing by the lake.
  • Trimmed the conversation about why Seatopia wants to steal “the robit.”
  • Cut the scientist slamming the villain’s head repeatedly against the floor and threatening to kill him. Now he just wins the fight and demands the information.
  • Shortened the scientist’s run down to the car, and trimmed excess shots of the car driving before the chase scene.
  • Cut the scene of the villain waking up in the lab.
  • Cut the scene of the villains fighting over what to do with the shipping container, including cutting the visible pornography on the back of the van (1973 was another time for kids’ movies, man) and the guy being thrown out to his apparent death. Now it looks like their plan was just to dump the container off the side of the dam all along, which frankly makes as much sense as their plan in the theatrical version.
  • Put the radio broadcast from the van scene over the montage as a voiceover.
  • Moved some shots forward from later in the film of Megalon destroying a few random buildings, so that the radio broadcast’s mention of Megalon destroying several buildings now refers to something we actually see onscreen.
  • Truncated the montage of the JSDF vehicles arriving.
  • Tightened the pacing on the shipping container being dumped and Megalon’s arrival.
  • Cut the truck drivers threatening the scientist with a gun.
  • Cut the trope of the car not starting.
  • Truncated the JSDF firing stuff at Megalon.
  • Trimmed the general’s conversation with the scientist, including cutting the shots of them driving to the helicopter, and trimming the shots of the helicopter taking off.
  • Trimmed the villains’ conversation to focus on summoning Gigan.
  • Added Gigan’s theme when he is summoned.
  • Trimmed the motorbike arriving at the toy store.
  • Trimmed Jet Jaguar signing to Godzilla and the lengthy shots of Godzilla swimming to Japan.
  • Truncated the sequence of the kid and the scientist sneaking up to the lab, including cutting the gratuitous shot of the villain’s eyes bleeding when hit by the toy plane.
  • Truncated the fight scene and arrival of the other scientist, downplaying the bleeding eyes and removing the shots of the scientist parking and running up the stairs.
  • Removed the villain getting squashed by a flying rock.
  • Hastened Gigan’s arrival by trimming the flashing lights sequence. Added Gigan’s theme. Also swapped some shots around to make it clear that the scene cuts back to Megalon and it isn’t Gigan suddenly destroying buildings.
  • Trimmed some of the endless generic exploding buildings when Megalon is destroying things.
  • Removed yet another long filler shot of the main characters running down that big staircase outside the lab.
  • Simplified explanation of Jet Jaguar becoming independent.
  • Cut main characters’ conversation on the jeep ride towards the Megalon and Jet Jaguar fight, as well as shortening the jeep ride and their run up the hill.
  • Simplified the conversation about Jet Jaguar’s size increase.
  • Added Gigan’s theme as he arrives and attacks Jet Jaguar.
  • Added Godzilla roaring upon arrival to the fight.
  • Cut insert shot of Godzilla’s shoulder spraying blood everywhere when cut by Gigan.
  • Severely truncated the sequence of Godzilla and Jet Jaguar being bombarded by fire and escaping.
  • Cut filler scene of Seatopian leader saying meaningless dialogue.
  • Trimmed Godzilla repeatedly smashing Megalon into the ground over and over.
  • Trimmed the montage of rocks falling into the sea.
  • Sped up the extremely lengthy shot of the dry seabed.
  • Truncated and sped up the sequence of Jet Jaguar returning to normal size.
  • Cut conversation about whether Jet Jaguar would save the world again, considering it was established immediately prior that he’s voluntarily working with the scientists again.
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#1440418
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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The puppet show is done! I can’t find the link but it’s buried somewhere in the thread.

The graffiti is currently in limbo, I’m not sure if someone is actively working on it.

I’ve gotten the new Jedi dialogue from the actor who played Sors Bandeam in ROTS, but I’m currently having trouble separating audio layers in the original scene to add it in.

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#1440404
Topic
The Last Jedi: Stoic Edition (WIP)
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Cadavra said:

It’s been a while since I last watched TLJ, so I don’t remember the exact scene well enough to know how well this would work, but just to spitball…would it be possible to cut out Maz’s hologram and show just enough of Finn, Rose, & Poe discussing the plan without her to convey the basics, then play Maz telling them how to identify the codebreaker as comm audio while their shuttle to Canto Bight is in hyperspace? Again, just a very rough idea, but might be worth experimenting with.

There wouldn’t be enough coverage in the scene to do that - plus there are other things that happen before the shuttle leaves that would have to be cut as a result. Ultimately I’m not too worried about it; it’s annoying that it’s basically a Battlefront cutscene, but it’s a pretty minor thing.

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#1440392
Topic
The Last Jedi: Stoic Edition (WIP)
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jarbear said:

That would be very, very interesting twist on that subplot.

Haha, i still think one of the greatest editing feats would be finding a way to remove the Maz Battle Front Skype Call.

We can only dream.

We never see holograms working like that before or after in any other Star Wars media, which is distracting. Which is frustrating because I don’t have an issue with the content of the call; it doesn’t waffle on and the humour is organic. I was able to cut Maz flying off on a rocket jetpack at the end, at least.

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#1440212
Topic
The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
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Cadavra said:

One general suggestion that’s been brought up before, but probably not for a while: insert actors in real, physical clonetrooper armor. It it could be done convincingly, just a handful throughout AOTC and ROTS (at least in some backgrounds, but ideally replacing some in foreground shots) would go a long way toward making the films feel more tactile and making the CGI troopers more palatable.

I’d love to see a short subplot following a clone squad during Order 66 inserted. Something along the lines of Bad Batch or Seige of Mandalore, but shorter and more in line with the tone of ROTS.

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#1440119
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Jar Jar Bricks said:

I like the sound of journeyed, but I guess that does sound a little too fancy.

What you could always do is also change out the “to” before “Mustafar” for more freedom of vocabulary. Example: “Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren has arrived on Mustafar”.

Here’s the exact definition of arrived from Google: “reach a place at the end of a journey or a stage in a journey.”

+1 to either idea.

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#1440052
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

sade1212 said:

What is Kylo trying to achieve in the tug of war, anyway? Presumably he’d like the troop carrier to be able to fly off. Despite this, he appears to be also trying to pull it towards the ground, like Rey is, just in a different direction. I suppose the whole ‘trying to push Rey’ thing covers it - but that explanation comes later in the movie, so in the actual moment it just seems strange.

I always interpreted it as Kylo being blinded by his emotions, almost like a little kid - Rey wants the transport, so Kylo doesn’t want her to have it.

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#1439848
Topic
The Last Jedi: Stoic Edition (WIP)
Time

Jar Jar Bricks said:

Knight of Kalee said:

and then there’s others where there’s dialogue and editing choices that spoonfeed everything, like Rey’s experience at the vision, where we hear her voiceover explanation at the very same time we are watching it, and it makes it feel cheaper as a result.

I realize this may not be the right thread to discuss this, but why exactly didn’t the main editors here remove that voice over from the vision? I can’t imagine it would be that hard to do, and it would improve the scene a lot. The only line Rey needs to say is “I’ve never felt so alone.”

I’m cutting all of the Cave Vision voiceover from mine; it’s not as easy as click-and-delete because the dialogue track echoes across the other channels, but I’ve done some rejiggering and I think it works. If you do still hear anything, it’s not comprehensible, and at worst sounds like generic spooky Force whispers.

CamSMurph said:

When can we expect an ETA for the edit? 😃

It completely depends on whether I’m able to get help on those last few shots. The rest of the edit is good to go from my end, other than watching it back again and doing any final smoothing.