NeverarGreat, the new scene is great!
I don’t know how you pulled it off, but just the addition of the voices during Rey learning the Jedi mind trick makes it way more tolerable to me.
Her learning that so quick without even knowing of the technique or having any training what-so-ever, was one of the biggest scenes that pulled me completely out of the movie.
I didn’t think anything could save that scene for me.
Bravo, good sir!