I feel like the improved Fleet Arrival and Captain Ship battle could work really well in the film with some extra work.
Yeah, I saw that I really liked it, I think Cad Bane and the Jawa were really cute without making Cad feel like he’s soft. It would be interesting if anyone tried to use this footage for a BOBF edit, I could see some people using the Bane v Stormtrooper action scene.
New test clip: the Hosnian destruction and Holdo’s Escape Redux!
Right before I made the thread for this project, I did a mockup for the idea of having Holdo and The Raddus barely escape the destruction of Hosnian Prime. This would, in my edit and in most Sequel edits I think, introduce a glimpse of the character before her appearance in TLJ material and tie things together slightly more than before. This clip is the updated version of that idea now slotted in with the rest of that material in the current edit. Feedback would be greatly appreciated!
Like the previous clip, this is more of a test than even a workprint version, so there are things to fix/change/finish at every level. But it helped me work out some pacing issues, start testing Force-tinting again, and made me come up with a hopefully simple solution for the idea that Hux broadcasts his “last day of the Republic” speech to the galaxy before firing the weapon.
As for the workprint for THE NEW ORDER as a whole - my spreadsheet tells me I’m 86% done with it. Getting the workprint done would probably be a score of 95% or so, so that 86% feels kinda about right. I’ve got three or four more sequences to lock down before I’m ready to start sending things out: (1) the Senate report, (2) Rey’s extended flashback, (3) Galen’s explanation of how this new threat works, and (4) the weapon firing & post-fire debate from this clip. Probably sounds like a lot, but everything already has a mildly rough edit in the timeline, and I have notes/thoughts for each one that I just need to implement. So without screwing myself by mentioning an actual deadline for this, I’ll say ‘getting sooner every day’ and leave it at that.
Looks really great, love the red, and I think the Holdo escape was done really well!
PMs are open for links if anyone is interested!
- Daniel Logan as Boba Fett (presumably the young version)
Surprisingly he is also voicing adult Boba too. TT games posted a short clip of adult Boba on twitter and he was indeed voiced by Daniel Logan.
I think it works pretty well, but I wonder how are you gonna put Kylo in the Hallway scene?
Sorta inspired by Anakin Starkiller and u/Electrical_Ad_7194 on Reddit.
This series is a fan edit, including several Spider-Man shows, movies, and even video games. This edit is not the best way to view this material, but I think it’s a fun experiment It lets me craft my version of the Spider-Man mythos using my favorite bits and pieces. You will definitely need a lot of suspension of disbelief to enjoy this edit due to the change in actors and the change from live-action to animation, it won’t be for everyone. The editing itself might be kind of crude and far from perfect, that’s because this is the first time I’ve ever edited anything, so go a little easy on me. Still, feel welcome to give some constructive criticism.
Spider-Man: TAS (1994)
Spider-Man (2002)
Spider-Man: The Movie: The Video game (2002)
Spider-Man the New Animated Series (2003)
Spider-Man 2 (2004)
Spider-Man 3 (2007)
Spectacular Spider-Man (2008)
The Amazing Spider-Man (2012)
The Amazing Spider-Man 2 (2014)
Spider-Man PS4 (2018)
Spider-Man: Into the Spider-Verse (2018)
Spider-Man: No Way Home (2021)
Link: PM me for a link!
Start with Peter’s high school scene from the Amazing Spider-Man.
Intro plays
(Intro made by Dusty Maniac on YouTube)
Peter on his Field-trip from Spider-Man
Peter goes home and goes to sleep and his DNA changes from SM 1
Peter wakes up and makes a mess in the bathroom ASM 1
Goes back to his room and “Big change!” commences.
Cut mentions to painting kitchen
Peter gets to school and dunks on Flash. ASM 1
This causes Flash to get mad so Peter and flash fight. SM 1
Peter and Ben in the principles office ASM 1
Cut mention of picking up Aunt May from work
Gwen and Peter talk
Peter makes his web-shooters and Swings for the first time. ASM 1
Peter runs home, takes out the trash, and talks to MJ about Flash and the future.
Peter draws his suit
With Great Power comes Great Responsibility
BONESAW
Uncle Ben dies
Peter chases the murderer and “kills” him
Peter cries and comes home to hug Aunt May.
Peter goes to school the next day devastated and hugs Gwen ASM 1
Peter becomes Spider-Man after talking to Aunt May.
City Montage and Jonah “Infamous!” scene
Final Swing from Spider-Man 1
Credits (from Spider-Man TAS cuz I love the music)
Starts with the Car Jacker scene from ASM 1 minus the Uncle Ben killer stuff
Intro Plays
Aunt May’s money problems (Spectacular)
Shot of Midtown High
Peter’s class just ended and his teacher talks to him and Gwen about Dr. Connors’ internship.
Gwen invites Peter to dinner ASM 1
Peter and Harry talk at the Osborn house
Cut Harry talking about Sally
Peter shows up at the Connors’ lab and is told he won’t get any money
Peter takes pictures of himself for Bugle SM1
Peter gets home and talks to Aunt May about how he’ll get some cash soon (Spectacular)
Curt injects himself with Lizard DNA from ASM 1
Peter shows JJ pictures of Spider-Man and gets paid by Betty. SM1
Curt wakes up and ogles at his new arm but it doesn’t go wrong (At least from what we can see) ASM 1
Peter goes to dinner Gwen’s house for dinner.
Gwen’s mom catches them kissing and Peter swings off to the bridge to stop the Lizard.
Bridge Scene from the ASM 1 happens
Gwen and Peter talk about him being Spider-Man and what happened at the bridge yesterday. ASM 1
Peter and Gwen show up at the Connors lab and Curt has his arm back they celebrate until it goes bad. Spectacular
Cut Gwen’s dialogue after Peter saying “I guess I should get going too”
Peter grabs his bag and runs Martha yells wait and says “I guess he’s just scared” to end the scene off.
Spidey chases Lizard through the subway until he gets away.
He returns as Spider-Man to the Connors lab to help Martha and Gwen with the cure.
Spidey goes to the Zoo to feed Lizard his cure.
Peter gets reprimanded for taking photos of the whole thing and Martha fires him.
Peter takes a Gene cleanser and wants to take it until he sees a picture of Uncle Ben
Credits
A secret post-credit scene
Spider-Man is on patrol and an explosion happens underground. Flint Marko and Alex O Hern are responsible. Spidey comes down and stops Marko and O’ Hern but they get bailed out of jail by Tombstone. Spectacular Ep. 5
Intro Plays
Adrian Toomes comes into Oscorp angry at Norman for stealing his tech. Spectacular Ep. 1
The other scientist in this scene is no longer Otto but is supposed to be Dr. Strom. Luckily his name is never mentioned
“We have no chimney” scene. ASM2
Vulture suits up
Spidey swinging while on the phone with Eddie talking about the previous episode’s events but cut goon saying target spotted. Spectacular Ep. 4
Enforcers talking to the Big Man about squashing the bug.
Shot of Osborn’s Penthouse from Episode 4 of Spectacular.
Shot of Vulture taking Osborn but no follow up conversation between Harry and Peter or him jumping off the roof
Spider-Man and the Vulture’s first encounter
Norman meets with Oscorp’s board of directors about his performance enhancers. SM 1
When Norman arrives home he is ambushed again by Toomes. The Enforcers get in on the action and the 3 duke it out.
Gwen Cures Peter’s wounds. Cut all mentions of the Lizard. ASM 1
Cuts from “It’s okay” to “Let’s get out of here.” Gwen and Peter then swing together.
Montana steals Shocker equipment.
Spider-Man falls into Shocker’s trap and they have their first battle.
Peter in PE class but cut the scene after “and, I showered three times last night.” Peter goes to the Bugle to get his check replaced.
Flint and O’ Hern are robbing the camera store so Spider-Man stops them.
Peter goes home and talks to Aunt May about Bills. Harry is mad at Peter for forgetting to help him.
Hammerhead and Shocker discuss finishing the job.
Peter and Betty come up the elevator to see the commotion in the Bugle. Spidey finds Shocker’s location and fights him. The police find Shocker webbed up.
Flint and Hammerhead talk about the next step.
Peter and May make a deal to get a new camera and help her pay the bills. Cut the scene before the webs appear in the sky behind the house.
Norman tests the performance enhancers and goes Goblin mode
A secret post-credit scene with Flint Marko and the Big Man.
Spider-Man chases a truck of plutonium and graduates and sees Flashbacks to George Stacy (died off screen)
Intro plays
Goblin blows up his competitor and congratulates Peter on graduating.
Spider-Man becomes more active now that he isn’t in high school. ASM 2 montage
Peter watches over Gwen worryingly then goes to save people from a fire.
Spidey and Goblin fight for the first time the burning building.
Peter sees MJ outside of her job and they talk about work and Harry.
Peter, Norman, and Harry talk in the boy’s new apartment.
Peter goes to the Bugle and Jonah gives the Green Goblin his name
Spider-Man saves Max Dillion from drowning in cement and is late for class.
MJ and Harry are going to a party and say Peter probably won’t show up.
Max tries to suck up the people who kidnapped him (he doesn’t know they did it) and Peter has a slight issue with that.
Harry and Peter talk about the party and Doug. Cut mentions of Norman being dead
Norman is upset that Oscorp is being sold
The party happens and Max gets embarrassed and turns into Electro.
Spider-Man defeats Electro
Peter is messed up by the death caused by Electro and breaks up with Gwen to protect her.
World Unity Festival fight
Peter interrupts Gwen’s Oxford interview
Thanksgiving
Goblin blows up Aunt May
Electro returns
May and Peter talk in the hospital
Peter gets a call from Gwen saying she’s leaving so he swoops her up and they kiss
Electro makes a fuss and Gwen helps Peter to stop it.
Norman shows up and Gwen dies.
Peter and MJ talk about Gwen (She says Indie in the scene but I really liked the scene so I kept it anyway)
Peter returns to Gwen’s grave and has a vision of an old man telling him to get Revenge.
Spidey and GG fight
NWH rescore by Spec Spider Ken on YouTube https://youtu.be/yyhctTrKK_c
Norman dies
Peter can’t deal with more loss and pain so “Spider-Man No More”
Credits Secret post-credit scene
The thing is the separatist have to speak English, because Obi is listening. Other ways it would feel jarring.
I think the problem with the voices is that they sound like they were recorded on a toilet, it doesn’t sound like they are standing in this huge hall.
Yeah, I guess you’re right, I don’t really know how you’d fix that problem though.
I am planning to complete the first 30 minutes with all the Geonosis stuff this week. Most of the difficult dialogue work from the first act is already done so all that remains is to throw everything together.
Here are the first five minutes:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1RpQKv8jvMUyS74B-boYCY05rrZFXXZFM/view?usp=sharingLet me know what you think of the audio, working with the AI voices was a little harder than expected.
EDIT: There are some audio cracks during the opening, I’ll try to fix this later today.
I really like this as an opening to the movie, it’s eerie and darker than TPM which is perfect for the second film in a trilogy. I think the AI voice for Obi-Wan worked very well, but I don’t think the Separatists didn’t sound the greatest IMO. Instead of going with AI voices maybe you should try what Anjohan did with the Nemodians in his Phantom Menace edit. Overall this makes me more excited for this edit!
New sample clip available: https://vimeo.com/682548733
Curious to hear feedback!
Man does this make me excited for the Sequel part of this edit but also the project as a whole! I thought the Rey and Kylo clip was crazy, each clip just gets better and better!
I’d like a link too!
This edit sounds really cool can’t wait to see more of it!
Right, I’ve finished the JAR JAR VOICE TOOL.
You can find it here. Thanks again to evansj1983 for identifying all the Clone Wars clips.
The spreadsheet now contains a list of 300 Jar Jar voice lines, timecoded and marked as clean or dirty. It also contains a link to the accompanying video file (4GB, ~35 min) featuring all 300 lines in order, indexed back to the spreadsheet and also timestamped in case you want to re-source them for your own edit.
Basically, anyone should be able to now search the spreadsheet for the line, word, or sound they want, then use the video in any editing software that splits audio by track in order to play around with Jar Jar’s audio.
There’s lots of good stuff in there - many references to him supporting a Queen, discussing the Force and the Jedi, being a Senate representative, and having proper motivation and character beyond passivity.
If you notice any errors, let me know, because it’s set up in such a way that I can fix it easily.
Go play!
If you need anymore lines there is always the Disney Infinty 3.0 lines for Jar Jar. Here’s a YouTube link to all of his lines if it helps: https://youtu.be/uoGGwG4-JUU
Naboo Aftermath (Beta)
Will need some more work. Any suggestions would be good.
I will probably add some dead battledroids, but I wonder if any dead civilianz would be too harsh?
I really dig this, It fits perfectly with the more hostile Takeover of Naboo you set up in V1.
That’s crazy good! It feels completely natural to me atleast. I loved the original version of the Ancient Lore and am very excited for V2!
Idk if you guys have seen this but someone’s extended Jango’s death scene with deleted scenes and VFX. Here’s the post: https://www.reddit.com/r/StarWars/comments/stt8ib/i_finished_the_cgi_in_jango_fetts_deleted/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf
Version 2.0 of the balcony scene, all jarring cuts removed by just not cutting back at all 😉
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qGjqTuUfP5uX6soZAY5sENl_BazjQFnK/view?usp=sharing
I think this works much better, also I really liked how you did the assassination attempt!
I can see you took some inspiration from the clip I put together. Some parts dont feel as natural to me tho. I dont see the link anymore so I half forgot some other details.
Could I see the clip of yours you’re talking about?
I really liked the final battle clip, but If I were you I’d remove Kira because she looks way to young in the clip from Solo. I liked how you had Boba and Mando though.
Is this edit finished? If so I’d like a link, I really enjoyed the other two and would like to finish of the trilogy!
Here’s what I got, but I’m open to feedback:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wJ6tJrSvYTpPJEgRgsqoX-ZhOQ13CgeQ/view?usp=sharing
Sounds great to me, good use of the Bounty Hunter game.
I finally got around to watching this, and just like the last edit, I absolutely loved it! The things that really stuck out as great were the Training montages, music edits, slight tweaks, and giving original scenes entirely new contexts. For example I loved the Order 66 soundtrack you played at the end of the Kylo and Luke Duel, it really fit imo. Giving the guards lightsabers will always be cool, and it fits more in line with Legends materials like The Force Unleashed. The Mandalorian Season 2 soundtrack in the Luke and Leia scene fit perfectly, and I really love how you end Luke’s journey.
There is one complaint I have though, I feel that Rey went from “YOU’RE A MONSTER!” to “There’s good in you” To quickly, I think that would’ve been fixed by adding back the last two Flashback sequences. I can also I understand why you didn’t add them, I personally feel like they show a very Human side to Luke, but I know in this edit you were trying to place the blame more on Kylo and less on Luke.
Other than that I feel like this edit is perfect for my tastes, Green Saber Luke, World between Worlds, and the tease for the next edit at the end are all awesome. I hope to see TROS edit soon!
I think it works pretty well, the Anakin and Sebulba subtitles really sell it too.
This concept is really neat, looking forward to see more of it!
Just created a mockup for a Clone Wars “ending montage” for a potential V.2. It’s very rough and has no sound effect or score, and is more of a proof of concept. It uses clips from the Dark Times and several other cinematics. When V.2 comes around I hope to make my own cinematics to match the aesthetic of the first clip from Dark Times. The purpose is to really cement home the idea that the Galaxy is now engaged in a full-scale war, and to adopt George Lucas’s early ROTS ideas of wanting a montage of the Clone Wars, albeit in a different way.
https://vimeo.com/manage/videos/654684814
Password: fanedit
I like the concept, and I think this could really work within the context of your edit!