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- #1432452
- Topic
- SSWR's Attack of the Clones - Alternate Timeline Edit (WIP)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1432452/action/topic#1432452
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If you go to the teaser, the link to watch is in the description:
Theres a few interesting ideas in the edit. I donāt remember everything. It does have a new intro using TPM footage. New Jango Fett footage from video game commercial? New voice for Watto which is very nicely done. Dooku with a blue lightsaber. Anakin basically brings Padme back from the dead. New score for the ending.
I liked some of the ideas here. The new Jango footage didnāt fit in. I appreciated the effort all of it took. But imo there arenāt enough changes to the film.š
Dang i feel old.
This is great! Thank you for so much hard work!
Question: Am I missing something? Anakinās eyebrows being removed was a 2011 change, right? Not an 04 change?
While in the midst of editing AOTC, I began to see some things here and there that Iād never seen before. Maybe you havenāt seen them either. š
P.S. Oh yeah, this time you have to look at my face. Iām sorry in advance. š
JEDDIT: Oh and I got my pc worked onā¦and got a new hard drive. Working good as new!
Hereās the Kylo Deleted Scene integrated into my edit in what Iām hoping is a final form:
Password: fanedit
If this is acceptable thereās just those couple of shots near the end of the film to complete (as well as any Restructured changes I missed)!
This is great! Extremely well done!
Me too please! Iām very interesed in moving the deleted obiwan/droid scene to kaminoā¦might have to use a version of this in my own edit. š
Deepfake monkey eyed TESB Palpatine into RotJ with an AI or impressionist Clive Revill voice.
To be honest, Iād like to see this. Not that Iād want to replace the originalā¦
Testing the waters with an early deepfake. Full disclosure: I screwed up one of the steps and havenāt gone back to fix itā¦but still itās not quite there anyways.
I chose this shot for a couple of reasons:
For those interested, I just went step-by-step with this video:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iAFBgOUFLpA
P.S. It looks like Iām gonna have to break down and buy another pc. The one Iāve been using was already used and had several issuesā¦and now Iāve got the blue screen of death and have tried everything to get it to boot up with no success. Iām waiting for some additional funds that should be on the wayā¦then I can determine how much Iām gonna spend on a new pc. So it might be a hot second before Iām able to give another real update.
This is looking nice! What software are you using to colorize with?
This, to me, is probably the best deleted/extended/alternate/whatever scene in all of the ROTJ material weāve seen.
Thanks, guys, for the interest in a workprint. When i have one ready, Iāll post an update for sure. But itāll still be quite a while before one is ready!š
Hey, thank you MisterBenja!
Your observation on the "did you hear what they said was right on. And something about it has just started feeling off to me.
Wait- the way you cut it sounds like the theatrical cutā¦or am i misunderstanding?
What Iām looking at doing now is to keep everything as i have it but revert the dialogue back to ādonāt worry we have R2 with usā.
As far as a workprint: itās funny- i originally didnāt want to release one mainly because i have a lot of ideas that (if i can pull them off) i donāt want them to get out there until itās completed. However, because some of my ideas are a little āout thereā and/or extremely hard to pull off, i think i will indeed release a workprint because i have a feeling Iāll need lots of feedback in order to get everything working! Lol Plus, if thereās enough interest in this edit, maybe i can get some help from others on some of my crazy ideas.
Hey, you know what would be awesome and extremely helpful? Is for those watching the workprint to record there reactions. Like a director at an early screening, ya know? Now, i can certainly understand if no one wants to put their face out there for all to seeā¦but something to think about!š
But thatās so fitting!
Hello again peoples
Wanted to drop another video here and see about getting some feedback particularly with the dialogue. Again, Iām using my voice only temporarily, so, aside from not liking my vocal performance, does the dialogue itself work?
Main things Iāve done with this clip:
Altered the music to change the atmosphere of the scene. Iām not completely sold on the soundtracks Iām using BUT it gives the āfeelingā I want to convey. I donāt think any of the pieces Iām using are in the same key and I just donāt know enough about music to know if itās really a problem or not.
Created a shot of Padme not knowing how to respond to what Dorme says. Padmes āthen my jedi protector will have to prove how good he isā isnāt particularly bad imo but I couldnāt find another way to cut around the little Obi/Anakin exchange without removing this line.
Cut Obi-Wans berating Anakin about doing anything without consulting him or the council. In this edit, Obi does teach Anakinā¦but less Master/Student and more like an older wiser guy showing a younger guy the ropes, if you will.
Anakin hears a noise and looks up thinking it could be trouble. Iād like feedback on this too. Iāve liked this idea for a long time but hadnāt implemented it until now. Iād like to know if you think it worksā¦if it adds anything to the scene.
This is where it gets a bit iffy:
-āwhat are you thinking about?ā
-āthis is my first assignment on my ownā¦thought you should know.ā
Does this exchange work? or what if I cut Padmes line altogether? they walk along in silence for a few seconds then Anakin just blurts out his lines?
-ādid you hear what they said about us?ā
-āyeahā
-both laugh
Did this exchange make sense? Did you find yourself following along?
I could revert his dialogue back to ādonāt worry, we have R2 with usā and that would work well with the new R2 shot Iāve added.
You guys are my Brian Trust. What do ya think?
Hey thanks so much for the info!
I had just recently seen a YouTube video with someone eliminating certain frequencies specifically for processing vocals and it hadnāt even dawned on me to try that for my purposes. Iāll definitely be testing out both methods. Thanks!
danieldubb, could you give me some advice or pointers? In my edit Iām working on, i need to be able to remove as much original music from the film as possible in order to rescore. Especially in action scenes. I can do a certain amount of rebuiling of the sfx but i was hoping to retain as much of the original sfx as possible. Iāve played around with multiband compressers and limiters (in davinci resolve) with a bit of luck but i dont really know what Iām doing. Any advice on how to go about this? Any helpful youtube videos you may know of?
Iām back with another clip, folks!
This time Iām tackling the kiss scene. This will give all of you a better idea of how drastic I want to āadjustā this movie. So, a few things going on in this clip:
I take advantage every time Anakins mouth is obscured by something or someone to add and/or change his dialogue.
removed āacross the starsā music and replaced it with a lighter āanakins themeā from TPM which fits the mood better imo
I thought it might be fun but also wise to add R2 into this scene. Just to maybe reduce the question of āwhy are they NOW safe from bounty hunters?ā. Without explicitly saying it, one could now reason that R2 is continuing to use his scanners for any sort of activity. And now, thereās a fun little bit where he turns away as they kiss. These shots of R2 are not yet finished. In fact, if anyone can think of a better shot of R2 to use, please let me know! This shot is not ideal because itās so short.
Iāve repurposed Padmeās dialogue from TPM and placed it here to tease Anakin
the kiss itself is reworked to have a bit more passion from both charactersā¦as if theyāve both wanted to do this for quite a while
thereās no abrupt ending to the kiss. no āI shouldnāt have done thatā from Padme. They both enjoyed it, both feeling slightly awkward afterwards, Anakin cracks a joke to lighten the tension.
At this point, Iām slowly moving forward with my edit. This is the most ācompleteā scene so far but I would definitely appreciate feedback. Is there anything that isnāt working? Anything throw you off?
Well, itās been a while, hasnāt it?
I canāt necessarily say that my edit is back on trackā¦but I have started messing around with footage again. Iām currently using the free version of Davinci Resolve. The nodes in Fusion are still throwing me for a loopā¦but Iāve learned a bit. š
Itās really the color grading tab that got me interested in taking another whack at this edit. Thereās a lot you can do within it.
Iām still playing around with this scene but as youāll see, the main idea was to remove Obi-wanās dialogue that spells everything out for the audienceā¦as well as his pisssed off-ness towards Anakin.
The music is temporary alsoā¦but it does add a little tension/uncertainty which is welcome.
Aaand a focus pull shot by snooker! (this was doneā¦like a year or two ago)
I was trying to edit this in 5.1 (and indeed this clip is in 5.1ā¦although you wonāt be able to tell cuz youtube) but manā¦with all the changes I have planned I think itāll be too much of a headache.
P.S. Iāve reuploaded quite a few of my videosā¦still gettinā around to the rest of 'em.
A little late for the 40th anniversary but still awesome:
https://www.goodmorningamerica.com/culture/video/rare-exclusive-scenes-empire-strikes-back-74735668
Extended/alternate scenes and bloopers Iāve never seen before!
YES! Welcome back!
Gremlins 2
Is this for real?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mo3KAQY9wLY
JEDIT: Had I looked for just another split second, I wouldāve realized it is not.
I wish I could pull a shot off like this! Looking good!
Youāre back??? Yeah!!!
Nice clip! I actually had another idea for this scene Iāve been sitting on for a while:
Maybe with a different piece of music, it could be played less seriously. Play up the absurdity of the situation.
No kiss hereā¦save it for the end.
Iām glad youāve got a working computer again!
If any of the current rumors are true (KK out, Favreau in, retconning the ST, etc.) does anyone think we might get an OOT release? IF Disney is actually taking this seriously and is wanting to appease some of the angry fanbase, I think that would go a looong way. Just call Mike Verta and ask him to finish up his restoration. š