Thank you for the kind words, everyone! I really truly appreciate it!
ben_danger said:
I always wondered if Anakin would have been a stronger character if he just spoke LESS in AOTC, that shot pretty much nails that!
Yeah, I would say he speaks quite a bit less in my version. There are just too many angry/hateful/whiney comments. Wherever I can, Iāve tried to rework the dialogueā¦but a lot of the time his face says āIām pissedā so it has to be cut.
DMC said:
The cut after Mace says āweāre keepers of the peace, not soldiersā I found a tiny bit jarring for some reason. Maybe have the hologram noise start a sec before the cut? Just an idea.
Thank you for this. I wondered about that instance myself. I tried out your suggestion and, yep, I think that did the trick! Thanks for the idea!
By the way, Iām working my way towards a VERY rough workprint. I believe EVERY scene in the film has been reworked to some degree. There will also be some half-baked ideas left inā¦incomplete scenes/visual fx/sound fx/musicā¦scenes that are almost like an animatic. Why? Well, Iām hoping for specific feedback- ⦠I donāt want to invest all my time and energy into some of these scenes if itās not working properly. Itāll still be a hot second before itās ready but itās getting there! š
As long as everyoneās ok with it, Iām gonna include everyone whoās commented here in the thread in the credits.