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#1470443
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<strong>The Book Of Boba Fett</strong> (live action series) - a general discussion thread - * <strong>SPOILERS</strong> *
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jedi_bendu said:

WitchDR said:

I thought this one was a massive improvement!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OHu5uYXYLFs&ab_channel=CinematicCaptures

Very nice find! That’s the biggest edit I’ve seen made to Bane’s face so far. From the distant shots for whatever reason I don’t like the edited version so much, but in the close-ups it looks great.

Yeah, it’s awesome! I still don’t understand why ILM launches an episode and one day after emerges a video showing better effects than the show itself. First was Luke in Mando season 2, now Cad Bane.

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#1470378
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<strong>The Book Of Boba Fett</strong> (live action series) - a general discussion thread - * <strong>SPOILERS</strong> *
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For me, the real story of The Book of Boba Fett that the producers really wanted to tell all along was the flashbacks. And that’s it. However, the scope of it would be too small to justify a series, so they resolved to continue Mandalorian series through The Daimyo storyline (what they dragged A LOT). Let’s be honest here, the flashbacks could be encapsulated in two episodes and the Daimyo in one episode if we skipped the fillers/Mandalorian storylines, and with the season finale would be a total of 4 episodes worth of real story focusing on Boba and Fennec vs the Pyke Sindicate.

The Hutts, the biker gang, the mayor and his assistant, the Rancor… Mostly of the scenes
involving these characters are filler. We could just have the Hutts giving the rancor as an incentive for Boba to resolve the Pike’s problem for them, then Boba and Fennec chat about the muscle thing, Boba recruiting BK in the bar and the biker gang in that alley and finally Boba’s reunion with the crime lords of Tatooine. That pretty much would sum up the story from the first four episodes of BOBF in the present day. Episodes 5 and 6 has scenes worth too to Boba storyline, but very few.

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#1469875
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(The Last Jedi) Fate of the Jedi | A Star Wars Legends Re-edit [Workprint Released]
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Hi, I watched your edit. I’ll be honest, I saw the original movie in the theater and find it pretty bad, and I haven’t seen it since. That said, I have to say that while I liked some of the changes you made, I still didn’t like the movie. Nothing wrong with the changes you made, though. At the end of the day, I think the original movie has so many problems that not even editing can save it for me, unfortunately.

What I liked in your edit:

Luke saving Leia was great;
I liked that you took out unnecessary parts of Rose and Finn’s storyline;
Luke got to be a lot more likeable in your edit;
I liked the addition of Palpatine’s voice at the end, but I think it could have been edited better.

What I didn’t like:

In your edit, Luke uses the force from distance three times (once to save Leia, once to break the Imperial ships, and once to fight Kylo Ren). For me this plot device was kind of repetitive in the movie, and took the impact of Luke’s “force projection” sequence at the end. I found the second sequence where Luke uses force from distance in your edit to be a bit unnecessary, and since you used scenes of Luke’s sacrifice to assemble this sequence, his sacrifice became a lot less emotional for me towards the end of the movie;
Luke’s Theme From The Mandalorian Series didn’t work for me in your edit;
I found the sequence in which Rey tries to lift the rocks in training with Luke a little confusing. At first I thought that sequence of everyday images was really her training with Luke over time, but at the end of the scene it is shown that time has not passed, as she is still there, with her hand in the floor. I simply don’t get it;
In my opinion, I think it would be good to cut the scenes involving Finn and Rose’s storyline a little more. I thought the movie was starting to drag about half the screentime, and I think a lot of that is due to the lack of action mainly because of Finn’s storyline (and a little bit on Poe’s storyline as well).

What I didn’t like about the theatrical version that you kept in your edit:

For me Admiral Holdo is the worst character in the original film, and in your edit she is still very annoying. The truth is, I just can’t see her usefulness in the movie, and to me it would make a lot more sense if Poe simply took over the leadership of the resistance after Leia was knocked unconscious, and Holdo was cut out of the movie completely;
To me it’s stupid for Kylo Ren to “know” who Rey’s parents were, and for her to simply believe him without questioning how he knows this information in the first place. In my opinion, this line could simply be cut from the movie, because it doesn’t make any sense in the overall context of the plot.

And that’s it. In spite of the criticism, I really think you did a great job in your edit, cutting the worst and highlighting the best of TLJ. Thank you so much for sharing your edit with me.

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#1469810
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<strong>The Book Of Boba Fett</strong> (live action series) - a general discussion thread - * <strong>SPOILERS</strong> *
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Chase Adams said:

CarboniteSolo said:

All they did was remove the pod racers, they did create a few new shots for it, but mostly used the 24 year old footage.

I’m sorry, don’t mean to nitpick / further derail the thread, but how do you actually know this?

They saved a few thousand by doing this.

And this?

I don’t know specifically about the episode 5 of BOBF episode, but ILM did this kind of thing in Mandalorian season 1:

During a recent interview with ICG Magazine, ILM VFX supervisor Richard Bluff provided insights on how ILM integrated real-time technology with elements from the original Star Wars in order to create a “greater connection.” Bluff explained, “There has been an enormous number of practical elements shot for previous Star Wars films, so we leveraged as much as possible from ILM’s asset library.” Bluff continued with an example from episode 5, in a scene when the Mandalorian looks off into the distance and sees two Banthas. "I was adamant we shouldn’t build a fully animated and rigged furry Bantha for just two shots and suggested we pull out the plates from A New Hope’s dailies. I knew I could come up with a shot design to leverage the Banthas from that.”

Bluff also shared that his team used ILM archives and reshot old matte paintings. “When Mando flies toward Tatooine, we are actually seeing the [Ralph McQuarrie] matte painting seen early in the original film.” This was not the only time the team used this technique. They also used another old matte painting of Mos Eisley for a fly-in. “I sent a photographer out to the exact spot George shot his original plate, capturing high-res elements so we could up-res as necessary.”

https://www.google.com/amp/s/screenrant.com/mandalorian-reuses-visual-effects-original-star-wars/amp/

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#1469622
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Mando EP3: A New Path (A Book of Boba Fett Edit) [RELEASED]
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Kanemedhurst said:

Hello again, I don’t want to seem like I’m backseat editing or anything but I reckon we could get 2 movies from this.

The first could be a prologue, compiling and editing the flashbacks together. This could be THE boba fett film, doesent need to be a long one either. This probably would be fit for viewing between the 1st and 2nd Mando film.

The second could be the present plot from the BOBF. However, it is presented as a Mandolorian film (either Episode 3 or a spin off adventure). This could be done by weaving chapter 5 with a very condensed chapters 1-4 (followed by whatever happens next). This way, it would feel like Mandos isn’t stepping into Boba’s story, but the other way round.

Enjoying this season so far, but I feel that the apperance of Mando, and Boba’s story with the Tuskens are the highlight and the rest of the story is a bit bland.

Side note: If you keep alot of chapter 5 in, I beg for the line about dating jawas to be removed. I loath the fact that Jawas dating humans and being furry is now canon 😉

Wow, I totally agree with this. We don’t know how the story is gonna be developed in episodes 6 and 7, but for now, this approach makes too much sense for me.

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#1469249
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<strong>The Book Of Boba Fett</strong> (live action series) - a general discussion thread - * <strong>SPOILERS</strong> *
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For me the problem isn’t showing Din. The problem is a full episode focusing on just him, and even caring to showing Boba. And gets worse by the fact that this fifth episode alone had more action and more progress in the present story than the entire BOBF so far. It even seems like a high budget episode, while all of the first four episodes of BOBF seemed to have a really low budget, with pour effects and bad action scenes. The impression it gives me is that they care more for Din than Boba, something that isn’t right. Both characters needs their time to shine. But at least for now, Boba seems like a fancy supporting character in his own show, where even Fennec is more active than him.

If episodes 1-4 of BOBF are awesome, I think I wouldn’t care for a Mando only episode. But with the lack of development of the whole Daimyo storyline so far, it’s hard to see an episode “wasted” with Din.

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#1469185
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<strong>The Book Of Boba Fett</strong> (live action series) - a general discussion thread - * <strong>SPOILERS</strong> *
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I find this episode great too, but as you guys said, burned one slott of BOBF with content that could easily been told in Mando season 3.

Sometimes seems like the producers of this show just doesn’t know what to do with Boba Fett. Boba have ±25 years of unexplored content in the new canon, they could have explored his teenage years plus the time he worked for the empire, and a thousand other things. It’s sad that they spent four episodes to tell a story that could be told in two and now we get a Mandalorian episode in BOBF.

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#1469126
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The Kenobi <s>Movie</s> Show (Spoilers)
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Yeah, I agree. It’s just that The Mandalorian and BOBF had so many filler content, that I feel that the Kenobi show could explore real significant storylines that are relevant to the canon. The early years of the rebel alliance, the childhood of Luke and Leia, the relationship of Obi and Anakin, the relationship between Vader and the Emperor, the Anakin’s grief before Padme, the relationship between Obi-wan and the Lars/Luke, the training involving Qui Gon Jinn… And a few plot holes that the prequels didn’t cover of the OT.

I know that the show maybe could explore some of these topics, but… I just expect that the series doesn’t exchange potential good content for pure filler, giving the amount of screen time the series will receive.

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#1469081
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The Kenobi <s>Movie</s> Show (Spoilers)
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I just think of something that could be really cool if happens in the show. Imagine if the relationship of Luke and Biggs was developed in the series? It could show them in childhood creating that bond that would lead to Biggs becoming the “best friend Luke ever had”.

Then, the showrunners could add, in the final moments of the series, the deleted scenes of Episode 4, with Luke, Biggs and the gang talking in the Tosche Station. In the final shot of the episode, the series could finish with Ben (already old) seeing Luke far away, with the sunset of Tatooine, after Luke looking frustrated with his current situation.

If these deleted scenes are used well in the show, they could fit nicely with the beginning of Episode 4, plus adding a part of the story that most fans had wanted to be included officially in canon for years now.

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#1468624
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The Kenobi <s>Movie</s> Show (Spoilers)
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I hope the show is good, but with Lucasfilm I’m always on the back foot, unfortunately. Their productions are very mixed in quality. I expect that they take into account the criticism the prequels had in the past (specially Ewan McGregor, who felt in his skin the pressure of that period and now is executive producer) and make a truly wonderful series. As other have said, this could be the “missing piece” of the prequel trilogy, the spiritual episode 3 that should have been released in the past (I love ROTS, but as a conclusion for the prequels, it was a bit let down, because made me want to see more Vader in his early years in live action).

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#1468327
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A New Hope: Vader edition (Released)
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Wow, I’m impressed! The edits you made (putting Vader from Rogue One and the Vader vs Obi battle from sc38) are really smooth with the rest of the movie. I never imagined that this scene from Rogue One would fit in the beginning of A New Hope so well. I don’t know you know, but in the book Star Wars Storyboards, is said that George Lucas intention was to made Vader seem “omnipotent” in his first apparison (what didn’t really land in a new hope, but it does in your edit):

https://images.squarespace-cdn.com/content/v1/54b55241e4b06afb7cd6609c/1480484916135-L6V9JHO1TNAR284HDX2H/SWSBsOriginal_03.jpg?format=1000w

And I have watched a few sc38 edits before yours, but yours is the first that I saw that worked with A New Hope.

Looking foward to your future edits (especially the Andrew Garfield’s Spider-Man one).

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#1468299
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Mando EP3: A New Path (A Book of Boba Fett Edit) [RELEASED]
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BrotherOfSasquatch said:

vranir said:

Since he doesn’t remember getting out of the sarlac in his armor, maybe don’t show that part? You could cut away after he uses his flame thrower inside the sarlac or start with him disoriented, being found by the Sand People.

This is honestly one thing that bothers me about the series logically. Because he sees these Jawas come up to him and start taking his armor before he gets knocked out. And then when he gets better, he thinks the armor is still in the Sarlacc Pit? HUH?!?

Yes, after all these years!

As someone said in the BOBF discussion topic, the producers probably made Boba go to the Sarlacc pit for a “settling of accounts” of sorts, killing the creature that digested him, and they used the search for the armor as an excuse for it. But neither the “quest for the armor” nor the “revenge” aspect makes sense (Han is the one that throw Boba in the Sarlacc to begin with, the monster was just there, taking care of his life).

For me the scene just doesn’t makes sense at all, whatever angle I try to look at it.

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#1466720
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Mando EP3: A New Path (A Book of Boba Fett Edit) [RELEASED]
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This show is screaming for a fan edit like this. So far, I think too many scenes could be deleted and others, reordered.

After watch Star Wars Theory review of the episode 3, he gave an idea that I think could work for this edit:

(SPOILERS FOR EPISODE 3 AHEAD!):

SWT commented that the BK fight scene with Boba could be placed in the first episode instead of the third. After all, Boba’s back was broken in this fight. In this episode, we don’t see the repercussions of this fact, since Boba walks normally after the fight, which is a bit strange. Reordering the scene to the beginning of BOBF would make his weakness so much understandable in the story of the series, since he was so badass in Mandalorian and in BOBF, he doesn’t (at least for now). Even the bacta tank scenes would make more sense, if the bacta was used for curing his back instead of his skin (since in the Mandalorian series Boba’s health was perfectly fine).

A second suggestion for this episode: if you maintain the chase sequence, I think it could be good to cut the bikers pursuing the mayor’s assistant, because the scene itself is really embarrassing. Just putting Boba reaching the assistant through the jetpack in the end could resolve, I think (and would give Boba more attitude).

Overall, looking forward for this edit. BOBF seems to fit more in the movie format than the series format.

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#1466555
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The Star Wars Fan Edits Request Thread: Request the links to Star Wars fan edits here
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StarkillerAG said:

Sirius said:

Hi, someone here have the magnoliafan edit of The Phantom Menace? I would be really grateful

It’s on fanedit.info, just type “magnoliafan” into the search bar and you’ll be able to get both that edit and the follow-up edit based on AOTC.

I know I’m repeating myself, but if you want the links to one of the famous prequel edits, just go on fanedit.info and you’ll probably find it. You’ll need to download JDownloader to access the files, details are on the site.

Ah ok, thanks!

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#1466091
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The Kenobi <s>Movie</s> Show (Spoilers)
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If the rumors about Leia being in the series are really true, I wish they could explain that scene of Leia remembering his true mother in Return of the Jedi. Maybe they could show Leia watching a hologram or something of Padmé “being beautiful, kind… And sad”. While restoring the canon, it could be a sweet scene.

I feel like this series has more chances to resolve the plot holes between PT and OT than to break canon (if done right). Except the line of Ben telling Luke that “Obi-Wan” is a name he doesn’t hear since before Luke was born. I don’t know how they could resolve this, since in Revenge of the Sith he is called “Obi-Wan” the entire movie.

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George Lucas's Sequel Trilogy
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I read this article a while ago. It has information that is already brought in this thread, but complement it a bit more:

George Lucas’ Episode VII

Everything we know about George’s vision for the seventh Star Wars movie.

by Andrew G.
Jan 1, 2018 · 15 min read

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Death Star Underwater Trench concept art by Doug Chiang and Ian McCaig. From February 2013.

In late August 2012 Star Wars fans from all around the world gathered in Orlando, Florida for the sixth official Star Wars convention, Celebration VI. The lineup was strong despite the live action movies, always the brightest and biggest stars in the franchise’s galaxy, coming to na end seven years earlier. Though he was not scheduled to attend, series creator George Lucas was there. Publicly, he was just there to make a surprise appearance during the panel for the animated The Clone Wars TV show. But privately he was there to talk to original trilogy stars Mark Hamill and Carrie Fisher. They were brought to a conference room away from the convention floor where George broke the news: he was working a new Star Wars trilogy and wanted them to reprise their iconic roles.

My wife casually said, “What if he wants to do a new Star Wars movie?” and I just laughed at her. — Mark Hamill

George’s motivations were not purely creative. He’d decided to sell his prized company Lucasfilm and wanted a sweetener to entice prospective buyers. And there was nothing in the industry more desirable than a new live-action Star Wars movie. After coming up with some ideas for this new sequel trilogy, Lucas tapped Oscar-winning screenwriter Michael Arndt to begin working on a script for Episode VII, brought on Empire Strikes Back and Return of the Jedi writer Lawrence Kasdan and producer/writer Simon Kinberg as consultants, and contacted Hamill, Fisher, and Harrison Ford to gauge their interest. Even Ford, long known to have na uneasy relationship with the role of Han Solo, agreed to return.

As the summer of 2012 began to turn to fall, the Disney/Lucasfilm buyout negotiations entered their final stretches. Once the broad outlines of a deal were agreed upon, Lucas relented to letting a few Disney executives see the treatments for the new trilogy that he had been working on with Arndt with help from Kinberg, and Kasdan. Disney CEO Bob Iger, Walt Disney Studios Chairman Alan Horn, and Executive Vice President Alan Braverman were the selected few, with Lucas even having them sign NDAs to protect his story. “We thought from a storytelling perspective they had a lot of potential,” said Iger. On September 6th, 2012, new Lucasfilm co-chairperson Kathleen Kennedy addressed the assembled divisions of the company to announce her intention to produce more Star Wars films. On October 30th, the sale of Lucasfilm was announced to the public, along with the news of a new Star Wars trilogy.

On December 18th, 2015 Star Wars Episode VII — The Force Awakens opened to glowing reviews and massive box office returns. After the initial high wore off, people began wondering what George’s plan for the movie had been, since both he and director J.J. Abrams had sad his outlines were abandoned. Through various interviews and the Art of books, details have slipped out. The following is everything currently known about George Lucas’ plan for Star Wars Episode VII, circa 2012.

“We’re making seven, eight, and nine.”

When George decided to make a new trilogy, he moved quickly. He reached out to old friend and all-star film producer Kathleen Kennedy sometime in the first half of 2012, hoping to bring her on as co-chair of Lucasfilm. The two then approached screenwriter Michael Arndt about writing the entire trilogy around May. After working on The Hunger Games, he wanted to avoid big Hollywood blockbusters for a while but the allure of a young woman becoming a Jedi was enough to get him to sign on. When Kennedy was officially announced on June 1st, many saw it as a signal that the company was getting back into the movie-making business. But the cinematic Star Wars universe was thought dead, so most speculation was about Indiana Jones 5. Later that same month, members of Lucasfilm’s story team learned the news. Lawrence Kasdan and Simon Kinberg were brought on as consultants by October. Mark Hamill and Carrie Fisher were told at Celebration VI in August, and Harrison Ford was likely called and informed at roughly the same time. Lucasfilm as a whole was then made aware in September. Sometime around the finalizing of the sale Michael Arndt turned in a 40 to 50-page treatment. Vulture said it was a treatment of Episode VII while Deadline claimed it was of the entire trilogy. In a conference call on the day of the sale announcement, Disney CEO Bob Iger referenced a “pretty extensive and detailed treatment for what would be the next three movies, the trilogy.” Then the sale to Disney happened in October and the world was told. And things really got going.

In December of 2012, production designers Doug Chiang and Rick Carter and ILM Creative Director David Nakabayashi met to pick artists for the “dream team” for Episode VII. The day after the meeting, Rick Carter met with George Lucas at Skywalker Ranch. The design team had its first meeting on January 9th, 2013. In attendance were writer Michael Arndt and director J.J. Abrams, though the latter would not be officially announced as attached to the project until the 25th and due to post-production on Star Trek Into Darkness would only attend weekly teleconferences with the team until May when he joined full time. The design team, or “Visualists” as Rick Carter would call them, would meet with George Lucas on January 16th at Skywalker Ranch, where he would be shown art of Luke Skywalker, the Jedi Temple he had exiled himself to, and the training of Kira. This appears to be his last involvement with the film.

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Kira Training by Karl Lindberg. From January 2013.

Early outlines for the movie centered around the characters Sam and Kira. Arndt described them, respectively, as “pure charisma” and a “loner, hothead, gear-headed, badass.” [1] While it’s been widely reported that Lucasfilm told Vanity Fair the leads of George’s outline were “teenagers,” George himself implied they were in their 20s, which fits the early concept art better. He also said the story was about the grandchildren of Anakin Skywalker.

The original saga was about the father, the children, and the grandchildren. I mean, that’s not a secret, anyway, it’s even in the novels and everything. And then the children were in their 20s and everything and so it wasn’t [The] Phantom Menace again. — George Lucas

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Kira and Sam from January 2013. By Ian McCaig, Doug Chiang, Karl Lindberg, and Erik Tiemens
That’s the only released concept art of Sam from early 2013. Kira would morph fairly seamlessly into Rey while Sam would go through numerous changes before settling into Finn.

From the very beginning we sort of settled on very quickly that we wanted the girl, Rey, to be a scavenger. We always wanted her to be the ultimate outsider and the ultimate disenfranchised person, because that person has the longest journey… And then we were struggling to figure out who the male lead was going to be. I remember we talked about pirates and merchant marines and all this stuff. — Michael Arndt

According to original screenwriter Michael Arndt, his first attempts, even when he was still working with George, ran into a Luke Skywalker shaped stumbling block:

Early on I tried to write versions of the story where [Rey] is at home, her home is destroyed, and then she goes on the road and meets Luke. And then she goes and kicks the bad guy’s ass. It just never worked and I struggled with this. This was back in 2012. It just felt like every time Luke came in and entered the movie, he just took it over. Suddenly you didn’t care about your main character anymore because, ‘Oh f–k, Luke Skywalker’s here. I want to see what he’s going to do.

Some of the very first concept art done for the movie was that of a remote Jedi Temple where Luke Skywalker was hiding out. George approved at least one such piece:

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Concept art of a Jedi temple by James Clyne that was given a “Fabulouso!” stamp by George Lucas.

We now know of at least one other concept piece that George approved, this painting of Luke by Christian Alzmann:

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Concept painting of Luke Skywalker by Christian Alzmann from January 2013.

From Alzmann’s Instagram post of the image:
My first image I made for Star Wars: The Force Awakens. This was January of 2013. Luke was being described as a Col. Kurtz type hiding from the world in a cave. I couldn’t believe I was getting to make this image and I got a George “Fabulouso” on it to boot.

Phil Szostak, author of The Art of The Force Awakens and The Art of The Last Jedi, revealed that the Luke Skywalker seen in The Last Jedi had his genesis in ideas from late 2012.

So, the late-2012 idea of a Luke Skywalker haunted by the betrayal of one of his students, in self-imposed exile & spiritually in “a dark place”, not only precedes Rian Johnson’s involvement in Star Wars but J.J. Abrams’, as well.

Again it’s mentioned that Marlon Brando as Colonel Kurtz in Apocalypse Now was na inspiration for this take on the character. Doug Chiang created a concept piece of Luke’s X-Wing submerged in the waters of the planet he was exiled on in February 2013.

Another late 2012/early 2013 idea appears to be Mono Lake in California as inspiration for the planet that would become Jakku. The planet being strewn with junk comes from Michael Arndt at the very first meeting of the design team on January 9th, so it may have originated from the Lucas/Arndt days.

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Junk Castle Landscape concept art from February 2013 (left) by Erik Tiemens. Photograph of Mono Lake in California (right).

While not much about Han Solo or Leia Organa’s roles in George and Michael’s treatment is known, there are several pieces of concept art from early 2013 of the Millennium Falcon on or above the planet of Felucia, which was briefly glimpsed during the Order 66 Jedi purge montage in Star Wars Episode III — Revenge of the Sith. During an art review meeting in February 2013 glimpsed in the official behind the scenes documentary included with the home release, an entire art board can be seen devoted to the planet. Text in The Art of The Last Jedi implies that Han would have shown up later in The Force Awakens than he does now. Additionally, Harrison Ford told GQ that as he remembers it, his first call with George Lucas about Episode VII included the detail that Han would die.

Ford’s least expected late-career reprise was his return to the world of Star Wars. “I was surprised,” he concedes. The first call came from George Lucas. “It was proposed that I might make another appearance as Han Solo. And I think it was mentioned, even in the first call, that he would not survive. That’s something I’d been arguing for for some period of time” — Ford had unsuccessfully lobbied for Solo to die in Return of the Jedi in 1983 — “so I said okay.”

In a Q&A with Entertainment Weekly writer Anthony Breznican done shortly after the release of The Force Awakens, original writer Michael Arndt implied that his early ideas had Han surviving Episode VII:

I had thought that the Han story and the Leia story was just about them coming back together. At the end of the movie they would have reconciled and they would have gotten over their differences and you’d be like “okay, well, bad stuff has happened but at least they’re back together again.”

A character similar to Darth Talon, a red-skinned Twi’lek from the Star Wars Legacy comic series known for seducing one of Luke Skywalker’s descendants to the dark side, makes a curious amount of appearances in early concept art. Interestingly enough, George Lucas was known to be fond of the design, asking game development studio Red Fly to include her in their Darth Maul game just before the time he likely started thinking about a sequel trilogy.

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Concept art of the Darth Talon like character by Ian McCaig from January 2013.

The art above is accompanied by the caption “The tattoos are a lot simpler. They follow a rhythm and they flow. And that’s the evil thing puppeteering her from behind.” The character also seems to appear in a series of storyboards titled Seduction from February 2013, the earliest known storyboards from the movie.

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“Seduction” storyboards by Ian McCaig from February 2013.
She also pops up on the very edge of a piece just titled “Bar” by Christian Alzmann from the same month.

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“Bar” concept art from February 2013 by Christian Alzmann. Note the red-skinned Twi’lek on the far left.

Originally, R2-D2 and C-3PO showed up together, but Lawrence Kasdan told Michael Arndt to split them up.

Around the release of Empire Strikes Back, George mentioned that the sequel trilogy would be “much more ethereal.” In the companion book to the AMC TV series James Cameron’s Story of Science Fiction, there’s a conversation between Cameron and Lucas where the latter reveals that the Whills would have had a role in his sequel trilogy.
[The next three Star Wars films] were going to get into a microbiotic world. But there’s this world of creatures that operate differently than we do. I call them the Whills. And the Whills are the ones who actually control the universe. They feed off the Force.
Back in the day, I used to say ultimately what this means is we’re just cars, vehicles, for the Whills to travel around in…. We’re vessels for them. And the conduit is the midi-chlorians. The midi-chlorians are the ones that communicate with the Whills. The Whills, in a general sense, they are the Force.
All the way back to — with the Jedi and the Force and everything — the whole concept of how things happen was laid out completely from [the beginning] to the end. But I never got to finish. I never got to tell people about it.

If I’d held onto the company I could have done it, and then it would have been done. Of course, a lot of the fans would have hated it, just like they did Phantom Menace and everything, but at least the whole story from beginning to end would be told.
While mentions of the Whills first came up all the way back during the early drafts of the very first movie, some of which were said to come from the “Journal of the Whills,” who or what they are has never really been defined in any canon media.

According to Mark Hamill, George’s overall plan for the sequel trilogy had Luke training his sister Leia in Episode IX before dying at the end of the film, though it’s unclear if Mark was referring to Lucas’ plans at the time of the sale to Disney or if this was from the numerous ideas he’d shared with the actor in the 80s.

Na interview with J.J Abrams from Entertainment Weekly published shortly after the release of The Force Awakens mentioned some previous ideas for the movie:
Some of the early MacGuffins of the movie — the thing that drives a movie’s plot — were a search for Darth Vader’s remains, or a quest to the underwater wreckage of the second Death Star to recover a key piece of history about sacred Jedi sites in the galaxy.

That mention of na underwater Death Star, in particular, is interesting, as Doug Chiang created a painting (at the very top of this article) showing just that in February 2013, shortly after George left the project. The caption for that piece:
So when the adventure’s over, Kira finds a hidden map inside the Emperor’s tower of the second Death Star. And the map tells you where the Jedi are and where Luke is hiding — Ian McCaig.

Two more Death Star concept pieces were created in April. Ryan Church made one called Underwater Emperor Room.

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Underwater Emperor Room by Ryan Church. From April 2013.
The caption for this piece:
Rick (Carter, Co-Production Designer) said ‘What if the Emperor’s chamber has crash-landed after the second Death Star explosion?’ That doesn’t make any sense, but that’s when Rick knows he has something. He’ll say, ‘Exactly!’

And Doug Chiang drew one called Falcon Underwater:

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Falcon Underwater by Doug Chiang. From April 2013.

And the caption for this piece:
Part of the journey of the story is that they take the Falcon, go underwater, and find the Emperor’s tower [laughs]. The Falcon is watertight because it’s airtight, so it can go underwater, right?
After those two pieces were done in April, The Art of The Last Jedi described the story thusly in May, with quotes from Doug Chiang:
“After Return of the Jedi, when the Empire fell, Luke went through a period of turmoil. He decides to reform the Jedi, Luke being the last. So he creates his own Jedi academy and recruits people.” One of Luke’s pupils was the character then known as the “Jedi Killer.” “Ultimately, he turns against Luke. There’s a big fight, and the Jedi Killer is wounded and cast aside. There’s this big through-line of the Jedi Killer wanting revenge on Luke. And that’s partly why he takes on this persona of Darth Vader: to haunt Luke.”
Some of this appears to have survived into the final film, as the map R2-D2 has in the movie that helps lead to the first Jedi Temple came from when he was hooked into the first Death Star in A New Hope.
Interestingly, the first teaser trailer for Star Wars Episode IX: The Rise of Skywalker ends on the remains of one of the Death Stars sitting in a body of water. So it appears this idea has finally found its way to the screen. Right after that shot, the voice of Emperor Palpatine can be heard cackling. This wouldn’t be noteworthy here, except Lucasfilm president Kathleen Kennedy told MTV News that some of the ideas they are using now were around since the development of The Force Awakens.

That goes back to when we were talking about The Force Awakens and, you know, just the whole blueprint of where we’ve ended up now has kind of been in the works since then. — Kathleen Kennedy
She doesn’t say when, exactly, during the development of Episode VII it came up, but her mention of “the whole blueprint of where we’ve ended up now” sounds kind of like it could go back to the George Lucas days. He did turn over outlines for VII, VIII, and IX.
In na interview with Den of Geek about his role in Knightfall, the History Channel’s fictional series about the Knights Templar, Mark Hamill seems to say that he was told his role in the sequel trilogy would be bigger than what it has been.

That’s what I was hoping when I came back: no cameos and a run-of-the-trilogy contract. Did I get any of those things? Because as far as I’m concerned, the end of VII is really the beginning of VIII. I got one movie! They totally hornswoggled (tricked) me.
In 2016, the novel Star Wars: Bloodline was released. It focused on Princess Leia as a Senator six years before the events of The Force Awakens. In it, the Republic Senate is split between the Populists and Centrists. Leia is a Populist and forms a friendship with a Centrist, Ransolm Casterfo. Casterfo gets manipulated into revealing Leia’s true parentage. Around the release of the book, Pablo Hidalgo revealed that Casterfo was “ a character that existed, in various forms, in the earliest versions of the TFA story.”

Updates
(1/3/2018)
Just days after posting this, Lucasfilm Story Group member Pablo Hidalgo tweeted out some information about the early versions of Episode VII (Skyler is another name for the Sam/Finn character).

Skyler and Kira (and Kira wasn’t the first proposed name either; she had at least two others) became, after a fashion, Finn and Rey. The Jedi Killer morphed from Talon corrupting the son to becoming the son. Uber became Snoke. The starting point shifted. Yadda yada yada.

The son falling to the dark side was always in the mix. The movies just ended up having it already an established fact. Skyler was the son in some versions. And as for how all that was gonna go down, that ain’t my story to tell. And in 2016, he confirmed that Thea (Kira/Rey), Skyler, Darth Talon, and the planet of Felucia were in George’s plans.

https://medium.com/@Oozer3993/george-lucas-episode-vii-c272563cc3ba