Wow, thanks for the nice compliments sade!! Honestly there are so many brilliant rewrite ideas around, but it interesting how a lot of them share similar beats. I’m big fan of ATLA as well, so I really enjoy your interpretation of the climax. And I totally agree, I think it would have been interesting to see Rey having to struggle to pick the violent, easy path to solve problems, vs the difficult non-violent one.
And speaking of ATLA, I feel like Zuko and Kylo Ren get compared for obvious reasons, and I wish Kylo’s redemption arc could’ve been as strong as Zuko’s! I think I share a lot of ideas with you too, NFB (interesting to know the origin of that name now!). I also thought about eventually making a separate thread for my own rewrite, but since we’re talking about I could quickly share my ideas for the Rey & Ben stuff.
I also like the idea of Rey’s dark side showing a little bit more than it did in the film. We were teased dark Rey, but no one was surprised when all it was was a vision. But, I think the idea of a dark Rey/light Ben role reversal is intriguing, but I feel like it would be hard to get Rey to that point organically and back in a 2hr film.
Plus, I feel like Rey and Kylo being the last duel in the saga feels right, and is the battle where we would feel the most tension.
So, broad strokes:
I think I would keep Palpatine, but only as a resurrected spirit, rather than having a tangible body. In this film he would be more of a force of nature rather than an individual. Meanwhile, as the legend of the last Jedi spreads, fires of rebellion are sprouting up across the galaxy. Supreme Leader Kylo Ren needs more power to maintain control, and he is desperate for a way to quell the Resistance.
So with the help of the Knights of Ren, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren finds a surprising lead. They learn from a Sith holocron that Snoke was an acolyte of Palpatine, who was on a quest to resurrect his master in exchange for knowledge and power. Kylo, in his hubris, thinks he can do what Snoke couldn’t: control the power and wisdom of this Sith phantom, and bring everlasting peace to the galaxy.
Behind the scenes, Hux has been plotting with the main Knight of Ren to overthrow Kylo Ren, because a) power and b) they don’t like the way he’s running things. So, they stage a coup and try to kill Kylo Ren, but Kylo manages to barely escape.
Kylo and Rey reconnect through the Force, and Rey and friends go on a mission to rescue/capture him. So, during a majority of Act 2, Kylo is working alongside our heroes, albeit with a lot of tension and reluctance, for obvious reasons. Plenty of space for fun character interactions. Kylo Ren has not turned back to the light just yet, but Kylo tells them that the First Order is trying to resurrect Palpatine, so they must join forces to stop this greater threat.
In the meantime, we’ll see that the new leader of the Knights of Ren volunteers to become Palpatine’s new vessel. We get a demonstration of their raw power in the dark side.
So, our heroes go on a mission to figure out how to stop someone that can come back from the dead. During the mission, they learn of the resurrection/possession ritual and its risks (that a vessel with a stronger will could send the host spirit into the void).
With the sequel trilogy being so heavily focused on identity, I like the idea of the film’s antagonistic force having the ability to challenge our characters’ identities in a dramatic way.
After we get several sequences of Kylo fighting, arguing and working with the gang, we would start seeing Kylo and Rey grow close again. But just as things are looking good, Rey confronts Kylo when she realizes that Kylo wants to use Palpatine’s spirit to solidify his rule of the galaxy, rather than destroy it like they want to do. So Kylo and Rey fight in a duel similar to their Death Star duel in TROS. And much like that duel, Rey gets the upper hand and beats Kylo, leaving to confront Palpatine on her own.
We follow as Rey goes to confront the Knights of Ren, and she duels and defeats the Knight who was serving as Palpatine’s vessel. (It’s also possible to make it where Rey gets there as they’re about to begin the ritual, and Rey kills the lead Knight in order to become the vessel instead. But, I think it might be a good idea demonstrate how the possession thing works) Rey believed that she would be strong enough, or sure enough of her own identity, to overcome Palpatine’s spirit and send him to the netherworld. But instead, her fear overwhelms her and she loses the spiritual battle, succumbing the dark side of the Force, and being possessed by Palpatine.
Meanwhile, Kylo has his come to Jesus moment, and after Ben makes amends with Poe and Finn, wanting to try and right the wrongs he has made, goes on a mission that leads him to confronting Dark Rey and dueling her (much like their duel in Act 2, but now with them on opposite sides).
They fight, and Ben manages to get the better of Rey. Even though this is his opportunity to take Palpatine’s power for himself, and rid the galaxy of the last Jedi, Ben drops his weapon and refuses to kill her. The dark side within Rey takes advantage of his compassion, and begins killing Ben (force lightning? draining his life force? force choking him?) Ben keeps trying to snap Rey out of it, and eventually he starts getting through to her. We get a sense that Rey is trying to regain control, but is struggling. (It could almost be like an exorcism)
This is when I think it would be cool to have a sequence that is different from your typical Star Wars film, where we actually go inside Rey’s head, in a sense, and see the spiritual battle between Rey and Palpatine. Instead of their opposing spirits throwing astral blasts at each other, or something dumb like that, it would be interesting if Rey overcame Palpatine’s spirit by overcoming her fear of him (and her fear of her own darkness). Once she accepts her darkness as a part of her identity, and let’s go of her fear, Palpatine loses his grip on Rey, transforming from the Dark Lord Sidious, to a shriveled old man who is afraid to die. (Definitely took this idea from Sade!)
Instead of the Jedi Force ghosts dramatically dragging Palpatine to Force hell, we see them appear and treat Palpatine with compassion, and gently escort him to the netherworld. Maybe Anakin could pick him up and carry him into the light, paralleling him picking him up and throwing him into the reactor shaft in ROTJ (Anakin’s participation could also help maintain Anakin’s role as the Chosen One). After this, Rey is free. Maybe a death & resurrection could play out in this moment, but it doesn’t have to either. I personally would rather both Ben and Rey live, so having one or both of them die, then come back would feel a little unnecessary I think.
Anyway, it’s definitely not Oscar-worthy writing, but I feel like phantom Palpatine is a good way for us to really get Dark Rey, even if it is brief, but not totally contradict her character. And this climax allow both Ben and Rey have their hero moment. In a way, their actions reflect Luke and Vader at the end of ROTJ, for better or worse. Ben lays down his weapon like a true Jedi, and Rey’s reaffirms her identity, and beats Palpatine in a more nuanced way than shooting lightning into his face.