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- #1433655
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- Worst Edit Ideas
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Give me a ghost of Anakin as a partially melted, still smoking cyborg horror and you’ve got a deal.
Give me a ghost of Anakin as a partially melted, still smoking cyborg horror and you’ve got a deal.
Okay, I think this is better, while still obscuring the background music.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1dHO9Ox2T94RPV_iC_lO1I4FeW0xOL3Cx/view?usp=sharing
That is nicer for sure!
Sigh.
Yeah, for an in-universe transmission it sounds good, but for something to come through in the movie it would need to be more clear.
^lol.
You know who it’d be awesome to get to record something for the 3PO red eye scene, if we go they route?
The guy who voices Creepio for the Auralnauts. I have zero clue whether they’d be interested in doing so, and imagine likely not. I am not sure how a rando would quickly be able to convince them that this isn’t one of “those” fan edit projects. Probably a pipe dream.
That would be perfect, and there’s no harm in trying!
JEDIT: I guess you saw their EP 7 trailer.
The establishing shot is very reminiscent of Mount doom. i love it.
True story, my girlfriend walked in and asked ‘Are you working on LOTR now?’
I just use Eevee when a recipe calls for all-purpose Pokemon, I thought everyone did that.
Whether or not objectivity exists in art is for all practical purposes a moot point. It makes me uncomfortable to admit that things exist beyond the quantifiable, but as soon as an authority posits an ‘objective’ judgement in an artistic discussion, the discussion is dead.
It can be compared to a discussion of free will. You could state that free will doesn’t exist because it’s all just deterministic quarks and charm, but even if that’s true you must put aside the objective fact and act as if the abstract awareness arising from this base matter is more than the sum of its parts.
Art has objective components, like the brain. But like the products of the brain, it also must ultimately be viewed as something which transcends its constituent parts to become more, unconstrained by judgments of the ugly bits of which it is comprised.
Congratulations on the numerological confluence!
I assume this thread shall eventually be reborn in a few years to celebrate 10,000 posts, a similarly pointless yet entirely notable inevitability 😉
I’m leaning toward a two-shot solution myself.
Since there are so many moving parts in this shot, I had rendered it out as an AVI to use in the final speed ramping and framing. It wouldn’t be too difficult to slow down the pan around the castle.
And yes, the color is still muted compared to the extreme saturation of TROS. I didn’t want to push it too far and introduce artifacts, but I’m sure it will need that adjustment before the end.
I’m hoping that someone will be brilliant and add First Order TIEs back into the shot somehow, that would be the ideal change. Of course that would happen after all the speed-ramping discussion has been done.
I am uploading two bitrate versions (prores and AVI) so people can play around with the shot and decide what’s best. PM me if you want them, but I’ll probably take a little break from this to give everyone a chance to decide what to do. 😃
Yeah, the 15x speed was really the fastest I wanted to push it, but there’s no speed ramping, just another 25% boost on top of it. I think the issues come mostly with the movement. It’s difficult to find a path that works since it goes from a pan down to the planet right to a pan up to the castle. Like I said, we may have to lose the first part of the shot and just have the Rogue One style rotation around the castle then the TIE shot.
I’ll render out a full quality version of the entire shot for people to play with.
Here’s the establishing shot replacing all three of the previous shots.
Password: fanedit
I ramped the speed another 25% or so, and keyframed the vertical movement to play with the extra space and make it more dynamic. The only thing that’s missing are the TIE fighters.
If we wanted to keep the final TIE forest shot, it might work to just cut the first part of the castle shot and shift it to make room.
I figured that it could as easily be Kylo’s shuttle, since they have similar color and wing configurations.
Here’s the Mustafar Establishing shot:
Password: fanedit

What was done:
-Speed 15x
-Color graded
-TIE’s removed
-Lavafall slowed
-Windows darkened
-Forest tracked
This is still a little longer than all 3 previous establishing shots, so I may be able to speed ramp the middle of the shot some more after everything else is finalized.
PM Sent!
Rush Hour.
Fantastic movie. See it.
Well Disney has been known to make edits to their streaming material after it has been released, so it’s not outside the bounds of reason.
“Lord Sidious, I have good news…should I simply say the news or do you want to hear it in person?”
“Lord Tyrannus, you know that we must meet once a month for our dark conspirings.”
“Where would you like to meet, Lord Sidious? Perhaps someplace that isn’t too hard to get to this time…say, a nondescript location near the Senate?”
“Sometimes I question your dedication to our Sith cause, Lord Tyrannus. Just for that, take your solar-powered space boat and meet me at the literal ass-end of the galaxy, like so far away and hard to find that just asking for directions is illegal.”
I’ve only done the Kylo scene, FYI, that list is just scenes that could be completed and used.
I’m personally making as many extending shots to Mustafar as possible, mainly for pacing and to establish this work.
Nev, that colour is amazing! Are you motion tracking the forest in the background?
I am tracking it. Parallax is tricky, but it should work with minimal distortion when done.
JEDIT: Guys, you don’t all need to quote the image.
You and me both! Tracking the forest elements will be a bit of a trick, but I have hope that it will work.
The third shot does work well right now, but for time we’d then have to lose the river of lava approachig the castle if we keep the reveal of the forest beyond.
I’ll err on the side of the longer shot just in case, since it can always be cut shorter. 😃
A Work-in-progress on color correcting and forest-ing the Vader Castle shot:

Obviously the lights of the castle will be darkened.
As far as the shot length, I’ve sped it up 1000% (10X speed) and that’s still not enough to simply replace the castle from the original 3 shot establishing sequence. I don’t want to speed it up more since the smoke and fog looks odd (and I’ll have to re-track a slower version of the lavafall regardless), so I’m thinking that it might be possible to use this one shot to replace all three.
Thoughts?
Replace all action sequences with footage of 6-year-old boys playing with their action figures.