NeverarGreat

Maz’s ownership of the saber was something I was trying to figure out at some point, and thought it could work to have it be part of Rey’s vision in the previous scene. I abandoned the idea since I thought it would disrupt the scene too much, but here’s one way it could work:

https://vimeo.com/622038704

Password: fanedit

Obviously just a mockup, but all the elements are there and I think it may actually add something. Leia’s ‘Bring him home’ could refer both to her later line regarding her son as well as instruction to Maz to find Han and bring him back to her, Maz being a trusted confidant of both parties. Or it could even refer to Luke, since Leia could have deputized Maz into the Luke quest at some point and thought giving her the saber would help somehow.

People often overlook that documentary-style filmmaking was a significant element in the original Star Wars, which helped give a sense of reality to the fantastical world.

With TFA nearly every shot has dramatic camera movement, the shots cut for the fleeting emotion of the scene and the scenes existing within a fragile web of movie logic that begins to dissolve upon any closer inspection.

Though TLJ is better in this regard, it still feels like the director is driving the focus of the scenes with singleminded intention.

IMO, a stationary camera on a tripod is sometimes the best answer.

21C Peasant said:

I did a little mock-up to see how the colors might be brought more in line.

Just an idea.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1m2jHIR9q99MmBVpyLCqNupym-pf7Jv1B/view?usp=sharing

Looks good! I’ll try for that.

Chase Adams said:

Apologies if I missed anything in the thread about this, but was there ever any interest expressed in adding the ‘Finn and the villager’ back into the film?

Yeah, I was thinking about it for a while but I found it was very tricky to include. If it’s included as-is, the score would need to be lengthened and it also messes with the flow of the scene. And if it’s included as-is, then it isn’t really adding anything that his later refusal to fire doesn’t cover.

The only reason to add the scene in my eyes would be to serve as a replacement for the moment when Finn reacts to his dying comrade so that the implication isn’t made that he has a special concern for their welfare. However, that’s where he gets the streak of blood on his helmet so the moment would have to be altered and not removed, presumably to add a dying villager in place of the trooper. That would be my ideal solution, but it is probably outside of my abilities to accomplish and again serves to make the Finn and villager scene redundant.

Chase Adams said:

NeverarGreat said:

JEDIT: Also updated the dice background for continuity with the rest of the scene.

Looking really good Nev! 😮

Just curious, any particular reason for changing the cropping of the shot? Seems a little more zoomed…

Also I wonder if the Falcon’s hull should be shadowed/tinted the slightest bit more, I feel like with this new background being somewhat darker the ship blends with the environment a tiny bit less. I dunno, just the first thing that came to mind.

Perhaps so. I’ll take another look at it.

DMC said:

One thing, in the wide shot the big lights in the back of the cockpit are more white compared to the blueish color in the surrounding shots. Perhaps those could be brought more in line? Looks like that shot could use some blue in the highlights overall. 😃

That’s something I’ve noticed, and actually tried to pull the lights to blue but it just wasn’t working at the time. I’ll give it another go. 😃

Thank you! The project is nearing completion so there are just minor things to do now, but regardless, PM sent!

The Galaxy of Sounds: Connections episode has the Han in the Falcon cockpit scene with just sound effects, which would be perfect for the rescored Dice scene if anyone has access to it.

JEDIT: Also updated the dice background for continuity with the rest of the scene.

Huh, it’s actually pretty great as a resource 😃

As I said, either approach works for me 😃

Indeed. I believe I was one of the damn fools who argued for adding the second charging due to it being unrealistic for Poe to let his emotions get in the way of a pointless mission that was already too costly in terms of lives.

This was mere weeks before TLJ’s release, as I recall.

Yeah, the idea of it being multi-use makes some sense based on the remaining solar material at the end, and it works for me either way.

Of course if it bugs you too much there are other edits that remove the multi-use implication altogether 😉

If you would like the workprint you have but to ask, however here are some screencaps:

Not at all, I’m happy to get feedback on the work 😃

I’ve put the Dice scene into the edit, though there remains work to do on that front. Overall however the edit is shaping up and the color grade in in place. I’m pretty pleased with it, but there remain some things still to do, a few miscellaneous notes for small tweaks. The changes are small enough that I’m hoping to get it done pretty quickly and have a final render here after…(checks notes)…four and a half years.

But seriously, I’m running out of things to tinker with, so if anybody finds another deleted scene that must be included, kindly don’t let me know 😉

Oh, I thought you were physically masking out skin tones and fire and such.

Selective color is something that I use quite heavily in the Jakku grade, but even with fine control and selecting only certain hues at certain saturation/luminance levels it’s still really difficult to find settings that knock out the hues of the sand while leaving all of the skin tones and explosions, or at least enough to not look weird. In the end, I found that taking out all the color in the sand shadows would always play havoc with the skin tones, which is why I settled for settings that targeted mostly highlights and high midtones.

Servii said:

Just remove all the opening crawls. Screw it. Let the audience figure it out.

That may actually be a good change, at least for all films but the first in the trilogies.

Oh masking every scene of Jakku would work, but is it worth the trouble for a subtle improvement? To me, not really.

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The link is updated with the background and prettification. I haven’t added glare to the windows yet, but everything else is about done.

Chase Adams said:

Amazing, amazing stuff Nev! That arm reconstruction work is so seamless I had forgotten where the camera covered it up.

One thing I did notice that I should probably point out is that the little piece of metal that Han hangs the dice on seems to slide around quite a bit, might be a good idea to stabilise it in some way…

Definitely planning on it.

In regards to the face though, my suggestion for the simplest solution would probably be to just trim the clip and make do with a little bit of a loss of continuity between shots. Not sure how other people would feel about that though.

I feel like for such an important shot it should go as long as possible, as it’s the only one where we see the dice.

Anyway, I’ve updated the mockup to include the work on Han’s face and some scratches on the glass which will be toned down later.

https://vimeo.com/590342667

Password: fanedit

The distortions on the face have literally given me a headache, so I’m calling it quits for now. It might be good enough if I put a bit of glare on the windshield near that spot, or it could be chalked up to distortion through the glass. What do you think?

You’re welcome and thank you for your thoughts!

• The Jakku regrade is pushed about as far as I can take it without the washed out grade negatively affecting the explosions and skin tones and such, and so I’m pretty happy with it.

• You’re right, the scene is too contrasted so the interrogation will be toned down in the final version.

Also, I’ve gotten Han’s arm and left shoulder reattached!

https://vimeo.com/590342667

Password: fanedit

Now what to do with the face…

jarbear said:

Thanks for the update Hal on the state of things. So it’s simple, we just need to make Faraday work all night, since sleep is over rated. Also, just hunt down Jonh and convince him actual work, providing for family, etc. is obviously less important than clipping Luke’s hair. Oh, and Nev to work. My goodness! /S

(Of course joking, I just wish I had the tools and the know how to do anything.)

Don’t forget the saber shots! Though if it’s just the beginning of the film that is incomplete maybe the effect could be faded in throughout the film to imply a physical degradation of the crystal as well as a mirror of Rey’s struggle?

BTW, I vow to the best of my ability not to singlehandedly hold up the project - if it’s good to go apart from my last shots I’ll push them to the top of the list. 😉

Entire cockpit clean, now on to the surgery…

Eh, ESB had Yoda convincingly levitate an X-wing, I don’t think it would have hurt to give Anakin a moment of Force demonstration on that level.

Are we sure that’s higher quality than anything we have, or is he just implying that he got a fan project?

Chase Adams said:

That’s pretty amazing Nev, nice work! 👍

Bringing this scene to life now seems like much more of a possibility.

Though not sure what can be done about the temporarily obstructed elbow and face… 😕

Thanks! I’m cautiously optimistic that I can do the reconstructive surgery, but only time will tell…

You’re welcome, glad you liked it so much!

JEDIT: updated the mockup again, now most of the cockpit has been restored.

https://vimeo.com/590342667

Password: fanedit

Star Wars in 360 degrees. Looks to be 4K77 as well. A trippy time for all.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zTaz1DB8yAU

jadenkorr41 said:

I’ve been doing some of my own rotoscoping and masking for scenes for my own edits. I’ve shared some early WIPs in this thread. For starters I want to remove the ILM logo watermark from the galaxy fleet charging the star destroyers. Hal’s ascendant has most of the clip with the watermark removed, but there’s a longer clip of that and I was wondering on how to give that a go.

Which thread should I go to? I can’t seem to find a search feature for these forums… sorry

This thread is a good place to start, and though it doesn’t specify TROS I’m sure no one would mind that being included.

https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-deleted-and-extended-scenes-database/id/51879/page/1

This is also a good general info area, though it again doesn’t include TROS since there are no official deleted scenes for the film so far.