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- Help: looking for... Any 'DUNE' 3-hour cuts out there?
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Hereâs an idea of the color correction Iâll be using for the scene:





And the render:
https://mega.nz/#!TItS3ZJL!Hyeki81xS7aABTwmUygmVMjgajfp_gH6ftHKGdouKHc
I wouldnât say I didnât like it, just that I had hoped for something more than merely making it a bit truer to the book.

And look over there - The entire villain is one big mystery box. Note the question mark on his forehead.
No doubt about it, the warmer setting is best. Itâs obvious when you look at the sunset picture!
Youâd think that plans that differed so much from the actual station would be completely useless for finding design flaws. Why wouldnât they assume the flaw got fixed with a later revision?
I went ahead and rendered a full quality mockup of the Leia deleted scene:
https://mega.nz/#!vBFGRB5J!quAF4KgbzEHD08n9Ywz8neOJf1dkXvGpvDLmHExSDEo
There are 28 frames added to the runtime, but the music still seems to work so Iâm not sweating it.
Iâm unsure what to do with the introduction of the base, and settled on another angled wipe with the same duration as the first.
There needs to be new SFX work done for the shot of Finn exiting the Falcon, but other than that the sound would be unchanged.
Finally, thereâs no color correction so that Sir-ridley can just drop the completed footage in where necessary. Leiaâs mouth movements in the first shot of the new scene have been altered to fit the time-shifted line, as well as a few frames of Kor Sellaâs face at the end of her brief reaction shot.
JEDIT: Updated link.
That is just the cutest little lightsaber.
For scale and appreciation of peach lipstick.Itâs not the best shade for his complexion, but itâs a daring look and I can appreciate that.
Fixing that for the Technicolor edition was a pain.
I was the only person in our family of five who voted for Hillary. Iâm sure my mom (and almost certainly my dad) voted Trump, whereas my brother voted Stein and my other brother abstained. So despite most of my family leaning liberal, we voted 2:1 for Trump. I feel like this is representative of the dilemma faced by the country in 2016.
To take out the Imperial Conference scene, you could hold the Homestead kitchen scene until after Benâs Hut, so itâs Benâs Hut - Homestead kitchen - Sandcrawler Destruction -(wipe to)- Burning Homestead -(Wipe to)- Return to Sandcrawler.
What I meant by the âHomestead kitchenâ was the section where Owen asks Beru where Luke has gone. So after the fade out to night, we open on Lukeâs speeder as they search for R2. Then we get to Benâs hut and after that scene we get Owen looking around for Luke.
Also: If you go right from the Tusken Raiders jumping on the Bantha to the distant battle cries after the attack, you could cut out a minute in between, and simply imply the attack on Luke. Then another 40 seconds could be cut from them finding 3PO and simply have them lift him up out of scene.
If you kept the interrogation scene, you could keep the âset your course for Alderaanâ scene, and put it in place of the Destruction of Alderaan. That way the audience may assume that the Falcon gets there in time to see the laser firing, and itâs a surprise when theyâre too late.
Thereâs some fat you can trim after the Control Room scene. There are a lot of shots of our heroes just wandering around the Death Star, so maybe just leave the shots of them getting in the elevator and get rid of Ben wandering around as well.
That is just the cutest little lightsaber.
For scale.
Yeah even for star wars for me honestly. People go on and on about how terrible the Blu Ray look and how botched the colors are and some even say they are unwatchable and Iâm like⌠Yeah I guess they are a little dark sometimes?
(Content changes aside obviously)
Itâs a little dark alright.
I donât mind the altered colors in most movies, believe it or not, since I donât have a frame of reference. There was a time when I thought the 2004 master of ANH looked good. But once you start investigating the differences, itâs easy to get a little obsessed.
Donât know about the best 3 hour cut per se but having a quick look around fanedit.org Iâd say this version sounds like it could be my definitive version of Dune once I get a chance to download and watch it.
https://ifdb.fanedit.org/dune-the-alternative-edition-redux/
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Just finished watching this, in two sittings. I had high hopes for it after reading the glowing reviews, but sadly it falls far short of what Iâd like in a David Lynch Dune movie. There are now two prologues when there should be only one. The first 20 minutes are even more of an infodump than they were in the Theatrical version, and much of the extended material fails to add anything of substance. The Harkonnens are still entirely too gross, the story still entirely too somniferous.
One bright point is the addition of more Gurney Halleck. Never say no to more Patrick Stewart. Some of the additional Fremen scenes added welcome perspective. The ending is much more in keeping with the spirit of the book.
In summary: Iâm glad I watched it, but Iâm still waiting for a leaner, more dynamic edit of Lynchâs work.
JJ Abrams is entirely unsuited to third acts, at least in a writing capacity.
I noticed this as well.
I mean sure. I had a teacher in college who was probably in her 50âs and had just seen 1-6 in numerical order. She said she liked Episode 1 more than the others while not caring much for the rest, but she taught Mythology so perhaps she saw the brilliance of the Ring Theory. Such people exist. I just doubt that they make up the majority of the positive ratings.
After more than a decade, whoâs seeing these films again except for children whoâve watched Clone Wars and Rebels? Again, they have the lightsabers and special effects, and when watching them in numerical order the Prequels ruin the originals to such a degree, and the âoriginalsâ are available in such poor quality, that the quality difference between the two trilogies isnât that great.
So in summary, you have the initial inflated reviews from people who saw them before the effects became dated and before the story was revealed for the empty exercise it was. Then the bulk of the reviews are from people who are actually nostalgic for the prequels since they saw them as children in conjunction with a cartoon that apparently did the main character justice.
If Episode 8 is a smash, they should get Rian to write 9 and get someone to direct who has a strong vision and ability to conclude character arcs.
Whatâs weird is that despite all of the constant bashing of the PT I always see on sites like this, the critical ratings towards them have actually been mostly mixed to positive. If they really were that bad, then they wouldnât have a 6.5, 6.6 and 7.6 rating on IMDb.
I expect that most people think that Star Wars is lightsabers and special effects, which the Prequels did have. Also, most people tended to view the prequels more favorably in the theater on first viewing (when the effects were better integrated on actual film), and thatâs probably where the bulk of the good ratings originate.
I absolutely LOATHED Safety Not Guaranteed, which is the one of his that people seem to like. Iâm fine with this.
Agreed.
The name âSpielbergâ keeps floating through my head, I donât know why. It wonât happen, but I can continue to dreamâŚfor now.
I wonder if the person putting this together even noticed the error.
http://www.theonion.com/article/trump-fulfills-campaign-promise-pushing-major-immi-56844
Once again, the Onion says it better than anyone in the media.
It bothers me that thereâs nothing from ROTJ on that poster. Surely Slave I couldve been replaced with something specific to the third film.
Is the TFA Star Destroyer not good enough for you?
I own old copies of the Bernstain Bears and sure enough, itâs stain.
Berenstain Bears.
Are you from another universe?
I assume youâre focusing on Luke for this edit, so anything not involving Luke could be cut. This includes Leiaâs scenes in ANH, Han and Leia in ESB, and Han, Leia, Lando in ROTJ.
ANH would work if the last we saw of Leia until the rescue was her being marched away on the Tantive.
Potential Cuts to ANH:
After crashing on Tatooine and remarking on its desolateness, Threepio could see the sandcrawler in the distance and call for help, thus skipping all of the meandering droid activity. Youâd probably have to edit out the large skeleton for continuity.
To take out the Imperial Conference scene, you could hold the Homestead kitchen scene until after Benâs Hut, so itâs Benâs Hut - Homestead kitchen - Sandcrawler Destruction -(wipe to)- Burning Homestead -(Wipe to)- Return to Sandcrawler.
You could remove the Han/Greedo scene as well, just cut from âGet back to the ship, get it readyâ to âOkay Iâll take itâ.
Taking out the destruction of Alderaan would require some tricky editing, but you could have it work by placing the chess game right after the jump to hyperspace. Then Obi-wan feels a disturbance in the Force, and Han enters the scene.
You could cut the Trash Compactor scene entirely. Just cut from Han jumping into the compactor to Obi-wan at the tractor beam control, then back to Luke and friends toweling off outside the compactor. While youâre at it, you could cut right from âyouâre braver than I thoughtâ to a shortened Obi-Vader lightsaber battle, then right back to our heroes after theyâve regrouped across from the ship.
Potential cuts to ESB
Cut the Wampa cave and Hanâs search for Luke. Luke is attacked and knocked off his Tauntan, but remains in the snow until Obi-wanâs Ghost shows up. Then Han shows up and in the next scene Luke is in the Bacta, presumably rescued that night. This removes the Han/Leia bickering as well.
Cut a lot of the Walker Battle. Keep it from Lukeâs perspective, with minimal cutaways to other actors.
Cut the asteroids entirely. After Han discovers the Hyperdrive malfunction, he turns the ship around and immediately lands it on the back of the Star Destroyer. During this time, the two of them can share a kiss.
If you wanted to get artistic, you could show brief snippets of Han and Leiaâs misadventures in Cloud City as Luke is in a Jedi Trance (3PO being blown up, Han being tortured and put in Carbon Freeze, Leia looking frightened in the direction of Darth Vader). If we werenât shown anything about Lando or Cloud City beforehand, we are left in suspense about what is actually happening to Lukeâs friends. The first time we visit Cloud City is with Luke.
Cut Yodaâs âThere is anotherâ line.
Shorten Luke vs Vader by removing the bit where Vader throws things at Luke.
Potential cuts to ROTJ
Move Yodaâs death to before Tatooine. This is why Luke is taking so long to get there. His speech ends with âPass on what you have learnedâ. Cut Obi-wanâs ghost.
Keep the Droids entering Jabbaâs Palace. Chewie is already captured, as per 3POâs dialogue. Show Leia trying to rescue Han after the droids are captured, and then Luke can arrive. Cut the Rancor scene - Jabba has decided that they will all die simply because Leia ruined his favorite decoration. Anything not directly relating to Luke is cut.
Cut Leiaâs first scene with Wicket. Shorten the fire-building scene by having 3POâs Godlike pronouncements work the first time, then cut directly to his story. Shorten Luke and Leiaâs conversation.
Cut most of the ground battle and the attack on the Death Star. The focus should be on Luke vs Vader.