- Post
- #572837
- Topic
- SW Episode III - Reign of the Dark Side (* unfinished project *)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/572837/action/topic#572837
- Time
Bob, a few things I'd cut out:
-The line "We need to warn the Naboo" If they're coming down with the invasion force, it will be too late to warn them.
-The line where Qui-Gon says the name of the gas. How does he know?
And I have one F/x suggestion:
-When the Jedi get up from their seats, don't have them ignite their lightsabers. Remove the blade ignition effect, so it just looks like they pulled out the hilts. Then, when they ignite their blades in the smoke after the droids open the door, it will make for a much more dramatic introduction to the lightsaber.