Sorry Hal, I’m still having to goto my mum’s to upload. My provider can’t fix my line at my house.
I’m due to upload anotjer video in 3 days so can do it then if that’s ok?
Also, are you planning on making the Sith Acolytes chant duel of the fates when Palpatine prepares for the sacrifice? Would be a great nod to TPM.
If this is possible, that would be absolutely incredible
You bet it is
https://vimeo.com/414116878
The way I’ve used it is to have the acapella intro and stretched the scene by having the Sith stand up (first shot in reverse), pan to wideshot and then sit back down. It works great for that segment.
Oh my god, Hal, I just finished watching the workprint and the only thing I have to say is that I was almost in tears laughing at the part you put at the end when it had the ‘Hal 9000’ logo! If you guys know what I’m talking about, don’t ruin it for everyone else! 😂
I loved that 😃
I think typing more than what’s necessary reduces the amount of white noise.
Yeah, I found that typing the same line 3 times reduces it but it still kicks in very quickly after a few works.
I may try find voice actors but I’m hoping I can at least cut each work for a sentence like I’m doing for Luke & Leia’s farewell scene.
Does anybody else find it odd that Luke’s hair blows in the wind? He is a ghost after all.
Don’t mention this to Jonh. He loses his shit every time Luke’s hair is mentioned. 🤣
Click on the three dots on the audio player, then click on download.
I got it working but it seems to change every render. Is there a way of getting rid of white noise that happens with spaces sometimes?
I actually think this may work with some serious remixing.
I’m still planning to score the DSII Duel and include it in an alternate audio track.
Nice! I also really like what you did with the Ewoks Endor scene. Very cool. 😎
I liked the added palpatine dialogue at the start and I really liked how you moved the chess game to the end and Rey’s emotions “skywalker” line. It think that really works in your cut.
I was surprised you didn’t add a score to the duel?
I HATE how Finn is such a sadist, klaud is useless and how Poe says sorry to Chewie, so I made around 50 more cuts just in the first 15 minutes than you did to fix these.
Are you adding a Coruscant scene anywhere? Other than the new end clip.
@kewlfish while I totally agree with you on this point when it comes to most of the other movies, I feel TROS and TLJ needed some heady handed reworking to put right. If only we had delete TROS scenes but saying that I think every one has done a Stirling job at recreating amazing new ones. 😃
I’ve just finished watching the workprint. I hope this doesn’t sound bad as I know how much work you’ve put into it and I mean this with respect but I feel it’s extremely conservative and too close to the original.
I’m not a fan of Rey being a Palpatine or a Skywalker (without reason) and I feel Ben really needs to stay alive so Leia actually changes his destiny and her vision. Without this I just feel she added to his death rather than trying to save him.
I dunno, it’s nice to have a moment of just thinking and not having something heavy-handed happen.
Anyone else for cutting the “it’s good you’re here” thing?
Absolutely. I hated the casual tone of both their responses.
I shared this in another thread. Kylo’s tie not exploding.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1J971QJXUBjJ9lbPHX2vXD_aVhRm1l8_l/view?usp=sharing
I honestly don’t think this scene should be here seeing as all supreme leader ships are prototypes. This just pops back in the next scene.
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Thanks for the PM Hal. I’ll watch as soon as I can download it…
If you have a Google Drive, “copy” this to your Drive, then copy it again within your Drive, and then you should be able to download.
Cheers Hal, I’m still having internet issues so I drove to my mum’s to download it. About to start… very excited!
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Thanks for the PM Hal. I’ll watch as soon as I can download it…
Did Christmas come early??? 😲
I’m more excited about this than the actual release of TROS. LOL
I hated The Medallion but I couldn’t find a way of taking it out without it seeming like they just flew on board with no resistance.
Hal, how did you manage to get rid of Wickets sound at the end of the movie?
This is all coming together so nicely. I can’t wait to see this version.
I’ll be doing some test screenings over the next month so if anyone is interested in my cut please PM me with “test screen” in the title.
Hal, if you’re doing the same can I put my name down for yours?
That captain Jack gif is extremely accurate 🤣
Here’s an alt for the end celebration including Coruscant in place of Endor!
Coruscant End Celebration
pw: faneditThe incredible backplate was made by jonh, and I comped in the ships and added a bit of texture.
This is beautiful!
Are the Ewoks being cut or moved?
Nice, poppasketti! That’s a wonderful surprise for this afternoon. You and jonh both.
And thanks for continuing to pioneer the Mustafar scene. I’m hoping LILLIAN will get me the other footage soon. That’ll be a little fun to put together, I reckon.
I’ve kept the separate .PSD files for each clip so if you pick a different colour gradient for your edit I can either sent you them or do it for you.
Exactly! Anything but what we got.
If anyone wants to use this I’ve just hand painted each blue blast frame yellow for the Mustafar scene just to get them to match, with help from kewlfish with colour balance.
https://vimeo.com/429055516 pw: fanedit
Poppa that looks epics mate! 👍
Wasn’t that already done in TLJ?
Not that I remember, He was in a generals uniform not a stormtrooper in TLJ? I just think that would have suited that story better rather than just walking straight in with barely an issue. Captain’s medallion was bad enough.
Here’s that clip for you: https://vimeo.com/429010558
Nice job. Appreciate you sharing. I’ll do a side by side preview and see which one fits. I cut the line “voices of the Jedi before” to fit with my narrative.
@Jonh, I couldn’t see anything wrong with your last upload. Your perfectionism is worse than mine. 🤣
It frustrated the hell out of me that they didn’t allow Finn to go full circle and to dress as Stormtrooper when they storm Kylos ship. I think they would’ve actually echoed ANH and actually worked with the storyline much better than everyone just walking around without triggering any alarm etc.
I didn’t know about the other Finn storyline. They would’ve been awful!
What do you mean by tick scenes, though?
I meant the missing scenes you haven’t ticked yet. I thought all those scenes were finished? They look great imo.
As an American married to a Brit, I think the confusion here is that Hal doesn’t know that a “tick” is a checkmark outside of the US
I didn’t know that. Nice! Thanks for clearing that up. It’s hard to know where everyone is from with just an avatar 😃
I meant the missing scenes you haven’t ticked yet. I thought all those scenes were finished? They look great imo.
Chase 🤣 Has jonh not finished lukes hair scene? Again, it looks finished but I have asked him to look at Zorii’s crazy hair segment.
I’d like to see your version of Rey & Leia if you have it posted? I think the audio was ok but I was just nit picking my own version as I know what tricks I used.