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- Star Wars Episode IX: The Last Hope (Help Wanted Finishing This Edit) (WIP)
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Cheers guys. Is there any scenes you wanna see next?
Cheers guys. Is there any scenes you wanna see next?
@JARBEAR you changed your tag quote š¤£š¤£š¤£ PalpaWalker gets me every time!! LMFAO
Iāve made a breakdown video of the end scene with the sparking light sabers after the final battle.
I agree! I just feel those few early shots of Reyās close-up need to be a little darker in the corners, and the Porg white light changed to a more orange tone to indicate the light coming from the fire and not the Sun.
Impressive⦠Most impressive! Nev
Really great job on the ghostly glow and tone of this shot now. I also liked the shorter āYou have everything you needā cut. Your hard work is extremely appreciated, dude.
If anyone is wanting to tweak this further. Here are Lukeās haircut clips we have so far. Theyāre not 100% but theyāre better than what is in the original. https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1U92OXNv86v5SfQkJrLbg7nNYTwNwjaA-?usp=sharing
My first thought would be, If the deleted scene of Rey running to the village is added to TLJ would that be considered ālesson 3ā?
I also like how Luke interrupts Rey. It matches Lukeās attitude in TLJ. I also like 4.
I think this could go somewhere. Great work, dude.
P.S. I cut the āIt was fear that kept me hereā. line from Luke as I felt it contradicted the āFear is the destiny of a Jediā line.
This has been in the back of my mind for ages. Could it be that the water is discoloured so it changes the reflection?
I canāt imagine a way of recoloring the sand that wouldnāt also change the color of the charactersā skin.
EbSynth: Now this looks like a job for me.
Awesome! Iāve just been convinced to start using EbSynth. It looks like a lot of fun. Looking forward to seeing what you can do with it. š
@sherlockpotter I absolutely love your passion for this. Welcome to the party, Pal.
I think we should move this chat over to another thread but Iām interested in your ideas. Maybe continue the chat here? https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1415754/action/topic#1415754
Nev that is awesome! Beautiful work.
Iām mates with JX, What do you need?
I tried reworking JXās 'third lesson audio and we talked about it a long time ago, shared it in here and everyone decided against using it.
Thatās a shame. Nice to see you posting dude. Itās been a while.
Nev that is awesome! Beautiful work.
Iām mates with JX, What do you need?
Thatās a nice idea. šš¼
I actually really like lesson 3. It shows Lukeās isolation is making him cynical and selfish. Itās like Rey gave him a wakeup call at this moment. https://youtu.be/-He5_RtDE1o
That surprised me to.
I just found out a number of parents had an issue with ā3PO, move your metal ass!ā I did find that a little harsh for a kids movie so Iāve changed it to ā3PO, NOW!ā. Let me know if you wanna use it?
Wow! That first glow looks perfect. The second one looks like an inner glow rather than an outer, which glow effect are you using?
This may help https://youtu.be/SeZ7Cidl-00
Idk man, when you were younger did you ever have that one guy in your friend group that nobody really was that close with, but they thought you guys were super close?
Yes, except that one guy was me. š
Me too! I think thatās why Iāve got an issue with it.
Hal, Exactly!
I like the idea of the metaphorical/physical ādark placeā and things progressively getting lighter as she comes to terms with reality. Itās like poetry.
Or maybe I feel the younger characters havenāt earnt the right to treat him like crap. I Dunno, it makes me uncomfortable so I made 3PO a bit of a Dick to Poe so he at least earns it a bit. š¤£
Who added in the TIE fighters into that shot for the Mustafar scene? š
Other than Poppaās addition, the others were done with preset green screen layers. Iām still on the hunt for another element 3d or blender user. I have the models if someone has the time?
Han & 3PO had great humour in the OT but the sequels felt like old Dad jokes that are awkward. I really donāt like how the new team bully 3PO either. They got the chemistry all wrong. I feel particularly bad for 3PO in the cave. He completely gets ignored, at least the OT had interaction with him. The who āmy friendsā line in TROS isnāt earned at ALL!
Its progressing really nicely Nev, really nicely.
Iām thinking the Luke by the Log stuff is going to be the pain in the butt to work with since is glowing is different affected by the original shotās day time coloring/brightness.
You have no idea. Luke has basically no glow in the original due to the high-key lighting, so practically all of his brightness now is due to roto work. Same thing with Reyās hood. Luckily the scene just short enough that after working on it, I still have some sanity left. Barely š
If youāve already rotoād it have you thought about adding a glow effect to that layer and removing the feather?
I did think about doing a binary moon in an earlier scene. Thought we havenāt really seen that.
I like the idea but Iām not sure it needs a flashback at that point of the conversation. Giving Jannah a little more depth wouldāve been nice though.
@Brewzter Iām not sure she can be there much longer than a few hours according to the time limit of the movie? Making it feel like sheās there overnight allows that scene not to feel rushed.
@NeverarGreat Is it worth having the first segment of the scene almost dark grey/black to show more passing of time? Really nice work on the Roto, Maybe motion track the closeup of Luke so the glow matches his movement? I like where this is going.