logo Sign In

JoyOfEditing

User Group
Members
Join date
27-Jan-2025
Last activity
4-Jul-2025
Posts
191
Web Site
https://www.youtube.com/@JoyofEditing

Post History

Post
#1639880
Topic
New YouTube Series about recutting George's STAR WARS SAGA.
Time

G&G-Fan said:

When is Tatooine part 2?

I’m hoping for the end of next week. My biggest work project of the year finishes this Saturday, so I’ll be getting back into the swing of releasing an editing episode every two weeks or so.

The scene for Tatooine Part 2 is already cut/recomposited. I just have to sit down and write/record the script, which hasn’t been possible the last month with 2/3s of my brain tied behind my back. 😉

Post
#1637540
Topic
New YouTube Series about recutting George's STAR WARS SAGA.
Time

James.Quattro said:

Hello all! I wanted to try my own hand at the AotC Wizard Duel, so I whipped something up with my DVD copy in a few hours. It’s very rough, but I wanted to try to smooth things in the other cuts, like the Lightsaber sound over “this is just the beginning”. I think the implication from my cut is that Dooku was confident with Obi-Wan and Anakin, but facing Yoda he throws everything he has as fast as he can to get out of there.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZfC4EEVetMU

Also, I don’t like cutting Anakin’s “I am a slow learner” line because then we’d have to cut this scene(which is absolutely important to the canon):
https://youtu.be/M5MIhBsB50M?si=PHPoPYYUj4muCv8o&t=143

Anyway, just wanted to throw my hat into the ring. Everyone’s been doing really cool work here!

Okay, this made me laugh so hard! I wish the wizard battle had that kind on frenetic energy, lol! I don’t think there’s a way to make that vision work with the shots available, but man I enjoyed this!

I also like the way you had Yoda speak before he turns up. I personally wouldn’t go that route, but I think the idea does work in principle.

Post
#1636893
Topic
New YouTube Series about recutting George's STAR WARS SAGA.
Time

jkimm said:

JoyOfEditing said:

O00ll00O said:

Just wait til we get to the Arena Battle. It’s gonna be Force Mad!

I know you said it’s something that you’re really proud of, so I can’t wait to see it!

FYI It’s live: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1C-UtrN7ew7RJ46eIARA26fIql07RbBKF/view?usp=drive_link

I really like the pacing of the arena battle. Of course, I had to take a crack at it. Same order as yours but Anakin and Padme don’t ride the chariot (horrible sfx) and Dooku doesn’t stop the battle. Just about every scene has some type of trim.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/19LF-MApgyiPyhRYUuEIE5UCClEeZ_q3w/view?usp=sharing

K got a chance to watch it through. I really like the idea of the LAAT’s coming in at the end of the battle without stopping. If there was more good footage building up that sequence, I think that idea could definitely work (Though I still prefer the original).

All in all, I would keep my version as it is for META-editing (edits across sequences/films) reasons. Here’s a couple of them.

-I need the fight to stop for a breath at Mace’s entrance and right before the LAATs fly in, because I speed up the beast wars. If those breaths are shortened it feels too frantic.

-The chariot sequence was originally in little pieces sprinkled throughout the arena battle, but I recut it all back together to make it “Romantic” in an Errol Flynn kinda way. Throughout all of Attack of the Clones, I reworked the romantic chemistry between Anakin and Padme to focused far more on the way they fight together, rather than the way they talk together.

-I try to leave 10-15% of the “Jank” in all of my STAR WARS recuts. If you make the films make too much sense and focus too much on continuity, they become sterile. So is “This Party’s Over.” a bit goofy? Yes! But it falls into that 10% “Jank” that needs to stay IMO.

Really enjoying your takes! I might take some time tomorrow to rework the droid factory one more time, because I think you’re on to something with the ending.

Post
#1636743
Topic
It's Not a Trap! - Calling all Admiral Ackbars!
Time

jkimm said:

Excellent work adding that footage in. I love the idea of having more alien characters in the fighters. Unfortunately it makes the Mon Calamari on the freighter seem less special. Same thing with Niem Numb on the falcon. Too bad they didn’t dust off a Greedo or Ree-yees mask when filming those. I’m curious to see how this progresses

Yeah, it would have been awesome if there were even more aliens!

I actually don’t think the Sullustan and the Calamari pilots take away from Ackbar and Nien in the scope of the whole film, because we’ve already had several scenes featuring the hero characters in the build up to the battle. The other benefit of adding in the Calamari pilot as “Red 2” - is that you get a hotshot confident Mon Cal to cut against Ackbar’s fretting. (I’ve got “Red 2” kinda filling in the role Wedge played in the other OT films as the most featured secondary pilot.)

Yeah, still a good bit of work to do on the sequence. I need to fine tune the color grade, and Phase3 is working on a cleaning pass of the Alien shots to bring them in line with the rest of the footage. Now if I can just find someone to redub “Red 2”. . .

Post
#1636558
Topic
It's Not a Trap! - Calling all Admiral Ackbars!
Time

Bored at 3AM said:

I remember reading that there was a female pilot as well in that battle, but they were edited out because Lucas didn’t think America was ready to see women die in battle. Is there any footage of that available?

They shot quite a few female pilots, and one is actually in the film redubbed as a man: “Red 3” who gets blown up by two interceptors. I frankly don’t think the redub had anything to do with “watching a woman die in battle”, but rather the rushed state of Jedi’s production. (If you see the original footage it’s obvious that all of it was going to be redubbed.)

Here’s some of the female pilots footage: https://youtu.be/806P_lVgPM8?si=GmzCwY5wYZ0bq34t

I haven’t seen any color prints of the female pilots, because if I had, I would have found a way to cut “grandma” in, lol!

Post
#1635986
Topic
New YouTube Series about recutting George's STAR WARS SAGA.
Time

jkimm said:

JoyOfEditing said:

O00ll00O said:

Just wait til we get to the Arena Battle. It’s gonna be Force Mad!

I know you said it’s something that you’re really proud of, so I can’t wait to see it!

FYI It’s live: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1C-UtrN7ew7RJ46eIARA26fIql07RbBKF/view?usp=drive_link

I really like the pacing of the arena battle. Of course, I had to take a crack at it. Same order as yours but Anakin and Padme don’t ride the chariot (horrible sfx) and Dooku doesn’t stop the battle. Just about every scene has some type of trim.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/19LF-MApgyiPyhRYUuEIE5UCClEeZ_q3w/view?usp=sharing

Awesome! I’ll take a good look at it tomorrow. In the meantime, you can tell me everything I did wrong over here 😉: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Its-Not-a-Trap-Calling-all-Admiral-Ackbars-/id/129423/page/1#1635984

Post
#1635907
Topic
It's Not a Trap! - Calling all Admiral Ackbars!
Time

.Mac. said:

Absolutely loved this, Joy! Very interested in seeing how this goes.

Also, couldn’t help but wonder what the Mon Calamari would possibly be saying to himself right after each kill.

“That was a trap.”

“That was a trap.”

“Heh, he fell for that trap!”
😄

“Wedge, why is Red 2 flying a Y-Wing?”

Wedge: “If I let Fadlan fly an X-Wing, there’d be War Crimes.”

Post
#1635905
Topic
It's Not a Trap! - Calling all Admiral Ackbars!
Time

.Mac. said:

Absolutely loved this, Joy! Very interested in seeing how this goes.

Also, couldn’t help but wonder what the Mon Calamari would possibly be saying to himself right after each kill.

“That was a trap.”

“That was a trap.”

“Heh, he fell for that trap!”
😄

Imperial Fleet moves in to attack

Capt. Fadlan: “Got 'em right where I want 'em!”

Post
#1635904
Topic
It's Not a Trap! - Calling all Admiral Ackbars!
Time

G&G-Fan said:

Honestly I unironically support edits that add even more alien presence to Star Wars. I think it’s cool. This is a galaxy full of different sentient alien species, they shouldn’t be regarded as looney tunes characters.

Bro, no joke when I posted this last night, I was thinking to myself this might be something G&G will unironically enjoy!

Post
#1635622
Topic
New YouTube Series about recutting George's STAR WARS SAGA.
Time

Phase3 said:

JoyOfEditing said:

O00ll00O said:

Just wait til we get to the Arena Battle. It’s gonna be Force Mad!

I know you said it’s something that you’re really proud of, so I can’t wait to see it!

FYI It’s live: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1C-UtrN7ew7RJ46eIARA26fIql07RbBKF/view?usp=drive_link

That looks great, and flows very nicely!
Would you want a clip to correct the continuity error of Ki-Adi-Mundi’s Lightsaber changing colour? In the film it goes from blue, to green, then back to blue. I can send you a clip where it stays blue the whole time if you like?

“Do it.”

Post
#1635270
Topic
It's Not a Trap! - Calling all Admiral Ackbars!
Time

Some of y’all are probably aware that footage was shot of Alien Pilots for RotJ during production. I was bored the other day, and decided to see if I could cut some of those pilots into the space battle as a joke. . . It worked far better than I expected. . . I ended up using the Sullustan Pilot as Blade Leader and was able to turn “Red 2” into a Mon Calamari Pilot with an absurd kill count.

Here’s a WIP of the Alien Pilots in context with the beginnings of Phase3’s restoration of the unused footage: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rNbINBT88XY

I was able to create some good dialogue for the Sullustan Pilot from scraps of Nien Nunb’s VO from Battlefront 1, but I need to redub the Mon Calamari Pilot with VO that sounds well. . . a little more Mon-Cal than Simon Williamson.

If anyone does an Adimral Ackbar impression (It doesn’t need to be dead on, because the Pilot is a different character), and wants to redub Simon’s lines for fun, shot me a PM. I find real VO is always much more fun than AI.

Post
#1635227
Topic
New YouTube Series about recutting George's STAR WARS SAGA.
Time

jkimm said:

JoyOfEditing said:

jkimm said:

Adding in Padme and Typho being thrown definitely works better for the reasons you mentioned. I didn’t even notice it was cut originally. 😄 Removing the Palpatine bit to Yoda is a nice call. Makes him come across as being more confident now.

I’m a little torn about the droid factory sequence. The last bit where Anakin slices the robot arm to make the cauldron fall still doesn’t connect for me. I messed around with it some more and am curious what you think of these changes?

• Kept the cut between Anaking slicing geonosian in half and Padme navigating through machinery. This keeps the action going from left to right and fixes the abrupt music change.

• Kept shot of Anakin looking up when Padme is being taken away in cauldron.

• Insert brief shot of cauldron moving along to further sell what Anakin is looking at.

• Insert different shot of Padme looking up in the cauldron.

• Reinsert Anakin force throwing objects at geonosians and added thud sound fx when they get hit.

• Anakin jumps up to higher platform and uses force to unhook the cauldron. Only problem is the same force shot is used twice. Still need to find a fix.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1M3I3ybJ2-Ac0EPGf4hLaFmZ1yKE4euh_/view?usp=sharing

Yeah, I’m with you that the Force move on the Vat lands with way more punch, and I like a lot of the minor tweaks. I don’t worry too much about “abrupt music changes” as long as they aren’t distracting. There are quite a few “abrupt changes” in the Vanilla cut that are waaayyyy more abrupt than mine, lol! But I’ll see if I can clean that exchange up a bit. I think the “Perfect Version” is somewhere halfway between both of ours. . . Imma think about it and do another take.

In the meantime, I’m rendering out the Arena Battle for you to chew on. Stand by.

YES!!!

Aight. It’s uploading. About an hour from now it should be live at this link: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1-GJ1VlEvPO5XlQALDODDeZdWrGEH_ZHP?usp=sharing

You’ll know which one it is 😉

UPDATE: It’s live.

Post
#1635222
Topic
New YouTube Series about recutting George's STAR WARS SAGA.
Time

jkimm said:

Adding in Padme and Typho being thrown definitely works better for the reasons you mentioned. I didn’t even notice it was cut originally. 😄 Removing the Palpatine bit to Yoda is a nice call. Makes him come across as being more confident now.

I’m a little torn about the droid factory sequence. The last bit where Anakin slices the robot arm to make the cauldron fall still doesn’t connect for me. I messed around with it some more and am curious what you think of these changes?

• Kept the cut between Anaking slicing geonosian in half and Padme navigating through machinery. This keeps the action going from left to right and fixes the abrupt music change.

• Kept shot of Anakin looking up when Padme is being taken away in cauldron.

• Insert brief shot of cauldron moving along to further sell what Anakin is looking at.

• Insert different shot of Padme looking up in the cauldron.

• Reinsert Anakin force throwing objects at geonosians and added thud sound fx when they get hit.

• Anakin jumps up to higher platform and uses force to unhook the cauldron. Only problem is the same force shot is used twice. Still need to find a fix.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1M3I3ybJ2-Ac0EPGf4hLaFmZ1yKE4euh_/view?usp=sharing

Yeah, I’m with you that the Force move on the Vat lands with way more punch, and I like a lot of the minor tweaks. I don’t worry too much about “abrupt music changes” as long as they aren’t distracting. There are quite a few “abrupt changes” in the Vanilla cut that are waaayyyy more abrupt than mine, lol! But I’ll see if I can clean that exchange up a bit. I think the “Perfect Version” is somewhere halfway between both of ours. . . Imma think about it and do another take.

In the meantime, I’m rendering out the Arena Battle for you to chew on. Stand by.

Post
#1634733
Topic
New YouTube Series about recutting George's STAR WARS SAGA.
Time

jkimm said:

100% on the way you’re handling the politics of Attack of the Clones. The inclusion of Phase3’s deleted scenes work really well. Of course, I had to attempt some additional trimming to both scenes.

Intro
• Cut enthusiastic “we made it”
• Cut decoy and Padme dialogue
• Tiny trims here and there

https://drive.google.com/file/d/18zumkxyzy44pru49Yc69FLBErRZrdGL_/view?usp=sharing

Factory
• Cut sequence between Anaking slicing geonosian in half and Padme navigating through machinery
• Insert shot of Anakin looking up when Padme is being taken away in cauldron
• Remove Anakin using force to throw objects at geonosians
• Add Anakin chopping geonosian and then using force to unlatch cauldron

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1UkJpyZpclH_eiu-EWQTkKwU6L3gmjUwr/view?usp=sharing

Thoughts?

UPDATE: I’ve uploaded new versions of each sequence.

Here’s Sequence 1 (Bomb-Padme Addresses the Senate-Palptine’s Office): https://drive.google.com/file/d/14M7QuUx_Nmql8iYmG5aa_e2P8nAl-KBZ/view?usp=drive_link

-I Slightly tweaked your change, by adding back in Padme and Typho being thrown by the blast. I think that change adds a bit more context, and a bit more Ooomph to the blast, while still achieving the change you’re going for. Other than that I just went with your changes! GREAT WORK! So much better.

-I also made a small change to the scene in Palpatine’s Office. I cut the bit where Palpy asks Yoda, “Do you really think it will come to war?” right after he just said that his “Negotiations Will Not Fail.” . . . A bit double minded if you ask me. . .

And Here’s Sequence 2 (Droid Factory-Dooku’s Interrogation-Emergency Powers): https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Yvbmct2jlqnUbwIEHE7nDCzEN-KZvlu8/view?usp=drive_link

-For this one I completely reworked the end of the Droid Factory to take advantage our your idea for Anakin looking up as Padme is taken away in the vat. I’m MUCH happier with this version, but you’ll have to let me know what you think.

Keep the suggestions coming 😉

Post
#1634510
Topic
New YouTube Series about recutting George's STAR WARS SAGA.
Time

jkimm said:

100% on the way you’re handling the politics of Attack of the Clones. The inclusion of Phase3’s deleted scenes work really well. Of course, I had to attempt some additional trimming to both scenes.

Intro
• Cut enthusiastic “we made it”
• Cut decoy and Padme dialogue
• Tiny trims here and there

https://drive.google.com/file/d/18zumkxyzy44pru49Yc69FLBErRZrdGL_/view?usp=sharing

Factory
• Cut sequence between Anaking slicing geonosian in half and Padme navigating through machinery
• Insert shot of Anakin looking up when Padme is being taken away in cauldron
• Remove Anakin using force to throw objects at geonosians
• Add Anakin chopping geonosian and then using force to unlatch cauldron

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1UkJpyZpclH_eiu-EWQTkKwU6L3gmjUwr/view?usp=sharing

Thoughts?

I was counting down to one of y’all sending in some revisions on those, lol!

Once again great cutting, I think all of those changes work!

In the case of the Bomb scene I think I’m gonna change my edit to something close to what you have. I tried both of those changes but never at the same time, so it always felt off (Quick-to-Slow and Slow-to-Quick), but your Quick-Quick sets the scene in superb timing to my mind. Excellent work!

On the Droid Factory, I think it definitely works (Your cut is pretty similar to Hal-9000’s, if you’ve seen it), but I would personally stick closer to what I have mainly due to the Meta-Pacing I’m going for (My AotC clocks in at just over 90 minutes, so I need to use as much good footage as I can). I also really like my extended action intro/outro of Anakin being a Jedi boss, because of what it does for his character, but again that’s all down to taste. The one change in that sequence that I’m gonna try to implement is the way you have Anakin look up at Padme being carried away. That is a fantastic bridge cut!

Keep up the great work, I’ve been really enjoying these!

UPDATE: I messed around with both of these sequences and ended up making a bunch of changes. I don’t have time to render them out tonight, but in the next day or so, I’ll re-render them so you can see them. Your change to the Droid Factory gave me an idea that made the end SO MUCH BETTER! Thanks buddy!

Post
#1634453
Topic
New YouTube Series about recutting George's STAR WARS SAGA.
Time

BedeHistory731 said:

JoyOfEditing said:

Okay first off, I need to know the story behind your username. Anyone whose username references one of the greatest tomes to come out of the twin monasteries of Monkwearmouth-Jarrow, must have an extreme amount of class.

That was an outgrowth of a medieval manuscripts class I took in college. The name really appealed to me and I’ve been rocking it ever since.

To your Jedi question, the answer to that is blasphemous. . . You have to cut Boba Fett out of the fight, because if you do, suddenly everything works. It turns out the main villain of the Sail Barge should have been the bro with the deck gun, because he ties together Luke’s swashbuckling and Han’s skiff sinking together like a bow.

That’s exactly the kind of change I was thinking of to improve the scene. Cutting Boba out focuses the action a lot more.

I also studied ol’ Bede in college and for some dang reason took two full courses on Old English literature. What was I thinking!?! . . . Ironically, those classes really helped me recut George’s films, because he borrows quite a few tricks from the Anglo-Saxons.

I love Boba Fett, but it’s Luke Skywalker’s movie. If you cut that sequencce you get three benefits: Luke looks like Obi-Wan from the Prequels, Han is suddenly back to his Empire/A New Hope form, and Boba Fett survives the Sarlaac Battle. . . is it too late to reshoot the Book of Boba Fett? It is. . . dang it!

Post
#1634351
Topic
STAR WARS: EP VI -RETURN OF THE JEDI &quot;REVISITED EDITION&quot;<strong>ADYWAN</strong> - ** PRODUCTION HAS NOW RESTARTED **
Time

G&G-Fan said:

I don’t agree that ROTJ is the “first Prequel”. It’s different from the other two OT movies, but not any more then ANH and ESB are different, and it’s closer to those then the Prequels. It’s character-focused rather than plot-focused, the plot isn’t as convoluted as the Prequels, it’s methodically yet effectively paced (IMO), the visuals are far more prettier, and the writing is clear and well-articulated where it needs to be and subtle where it needs to be, unlike the Prequels where it’s often either muddy and messy or on-the-nose.

I find it interesting that Hal said that, since he didn’t make an edit of it in the same vein as his Prequels.

I think Hal and I are coming from a technical standpoint. (If I remember that Hal post correctly, he was saying Jedi is his favorite). When you crack open these films as an editor, you see them completely differently than you do when you’re experiencing them as a viewer. From an experiencial standpoint, I 100% agree with you (I like the Theatrical Cut of RotJ WAY better than any of the Prequels because it’s tone much closer to IV and V), but from a technical editing standpoint Jedi is closer to the Prequels than it is to IV and V.

Post
#1634330
Topic
STAR WARS: EP VI -RETURN OF THE JEDI &quot;REVISITED EDITION&quot;<strong>ADYWAN</strong> - ** PRODUCTION HAS NOW RESTARTED **
Time

So at least for this nerf herder, I might prefer an edit that doesn’t remove nearly as much (and that’s coming from someone who’s actually okay with excising existing shots/scenes [within reason of course, lol]) as I’d want certain scenes to have both flow and still make enough sense for a first-time viewer - even if it might mean keeping some of the flaws (and that’s where Ady often applies his magical brush at concealing much of that!). Otherwise, I still very much enjoyed this, Joy! Thank you for sharing it and I’m sure Ady will see something in there that works for his vision 😉 I look forward to seeing more of your clips!

And Joy, if you’re at all interested and have plenty of free time (emphasis on “plenty”), I invite you to take a gander through my ROTJ wishlist. There you can see much of my thoughts regarding ROTJ and understand my take on certain scenes (including what I think can be deleted/trimmed) and, who knows, perhaps there’s something in there you’ll like for your future editing 😃

Haha, I totally get y’all’s concerns on the pacing/lack of setup. I think the thing to keep in mind with my cuts are that I’m doing all six of Georges films at the same time to align all of them, so the Jabba setup has already happened in the Phantom Menace’s Podrace scene. I also MASSIVELY reworked Dagobah in Empire, so that the single scene of Yoda’s Death would make sense in Jedi (I’m trying to do a Dark Crystal style setup where the first scene sets up the Emperor, and the second scene is the death of the eldest mystic (Yoda)). Because you’ve seen so much of Yoda in the Prequels, and you know from the Prequels that Vader is Luke’s daddy, you don’t need the bit where Yoda confirms this (I’m pretty sure that scene was put into Vanilla Jedi because so many folks were convinced Vader was lying at the end of Empire). In short, the Yoda scene doesn’t feel too short in the scale of the full saga, but it would be WAY too short/unsatisfying, if you don’t have the Prequels.

FYI I was never actually arguing that Ady should use my recut for his version of Jedi (I don’t think it will match at all with the other two, lol). I was just trying to give an example of how you can indeed effectively start on Dagobah, if you want to. 😉

I don’t have a ton of free time at the moment, but go on you can PM me anyway. I just can’t promise that I’ll look it over in a timely manner.

As far as Jedi being the best of all six, I know that sounds ridiculous, but I think you can actually get it pretty stinking close to the level of VI and V, with the just the material from the Vanilla Cut. If you wanna see more of that, I’d hop over to my thread (right now we’re talking Attack of the Clones, but we’ll eventually get to recutting the Sail Barge, the Final Duel, and other cool Jedi stuff, and I really don’t wanna sidetrack Ady’s thread down a rabbit hole, haha!).

Cheers!

-JoE