Jar Jar Bricks

Alright Hal, I don’t know if you’re cooking up the changes we discussed yesterday but I decided I might as well share what I was talking about here. This is the Palpatine/Rey interaction without “for my grandchild to come home” and “I never wanted you dead”. Obviously the audio could use a little bit of work but I think the conversation still makes a lot of sense:

https://youtu.be/AbxI8xMA2O0

“Long have I waited… Empress Palpatine… you will take the throne.”

Tobar said:

Jar Jar Bricks said:

I guess you could make the argument for Rey not showing up. Luke kinda messed up by convincing her to leave Ahch-To, come to think of it. Ben likely would have realized Rey wasn’t on Exegol, and the two of them would have just chilled elsewhere while the Resistance launched an attack on Exegol.

Fairly certain that Finn, Poe, and co. would have gotten rid of all the Star Destroyers in that battle. Their actions never relied on the Palpatine interactions, did they?

Oh boy, I’m never going to be able to forget this plot hole now.

There would never have been a battle since Rey is the one that showed them how to reach Exegol.

That would have left the Final Order fleet free reign to fully deploy and spread out across the galaxy destroying countless worlds and then holding a proverbial blaster to the head of the galaxy.

Thank you! I knew there was something they had written in there in order to prevent this plot hole. I just haven’t seen the entire movie in a while so this never occurred to me.

TestingOutTheTest said:

How many times do I have to say this? It’s clear in the actual film Palpatine changes his mind and turns back to Rey because Kylo Ren redeemed himself. His plan was to possess Kylo Ren, that is until he redeemed himself.

To be clear, I’m fairly certain this is the approach Hal is going with. So no need to clarify this again.

EDIT: We are doing a slight deviation from this, though. In this edit, Palpatine always wanted Rey dead until Ben redeems himself. So he never “turns back” to Rey, he only realizes she can serve his purposes now.

Has Hal already said he is using one of those improved shots? Because I like them a lot. Specifically v2 and v3.

Ed Slushie said:

Jar Jar Bricks said:

Oh boy, I’m never going to be able to forget this plot hole now.

Sorry.

It’s fine. Ghosty Luke likely knew future events and saw that this was the easiest way to permanently destroy Palpatine. If neither Rey nor Ben showed up, who knows what shenanigans he would have done during the battle and after. He could probably drain all the troops that tried to attack him and escape somehow.

At least that’s my head canon answer.

I guess you could make the argument for Rey not showing up. Luke kinda messed up by convincing her to leave Ahch-To, come to think of it. Ben likely would have realized Rey wasn’t on Exegol, and the two of them would have just chilled elsewhere while the Resistance launched an attack on Exegol.

Fairly certain that Finn, Poe, and co. would have gotten rid of all the Star Destroyers in that battle. Their actions never relied on the Palpatine interactions, did they?

Oh boy, I’m never going to be able to forget this plot hole now.

Ed Slushie said:

Jar Jar Bricks said:

Look no further than the fact that Palpatine’s original plan in the script was to get Rey and Ben together in order to drain their dyad (which would have been significantly better imo)

I’m gonna have to disagree. If draining Rey and Ben was Palpatine’s plan all along, then that would undermine all the decisions they made up to that point. It’s still a problem in the final movie - if Rey and Ben hadn’t gone to Exegol, Palpatine wouldn’t have gotten the power to electrocute the civilian fleet and the sith would still lose - but at least he discovers the dyad by accident. If he wanted them together from the beginning, that would mean all of the inspirational moments they’ve had (Kylo being redeemed, Luke lifting the X-Wing, Rey and Ben deciding to stand together) were exactly what Palpatine wanted, and that makes the whole movie worse in my opinion.

True, hadn’t thought about that.

Although, it isn’t as much of a problem in the final movie as you say it is. While it’s true that Palpatine himself wouldn’t have been rejuvenated if Ben didn’t show up, that also makes it highly unlikely that Rey wouldn’t have gone through with the sacrifice. This is because Ben is what gives her the hope to resist Palpatine. So Palpy would have possessed Rey and cleaned house with the Resistance. Not sure what Ben could really do from there.

This ^
I’m pretty sure they never were able to come to a solid plan while filming. Look no further than the fact that Palpatine’s original plan in the script was to get Rey and Ben together in order to drain their dyad (which would have been significantly better imo), and JJ also wasn’t sure if he wanted Rey to be a Palpatine even while filming.

If we had access to all the filmed material, I’m convinced we could have made a significantly better film. Instead, we have to make sense out of what we have (or otherwise gut the entire movie).

Hal 9000 said:

Actually… in this new streamlined approach, why the heck would he expect her to come there?

Probably because he has just sensed a massive shift in the force which he correlates with Leia returning Ben to the light. As a result, he knows Ben has a wayfinder still, and so he is probably hoping that him and Rey will come to him together (where he would theoretically want to kill Ben and thereby corrupt Rey).

Hal 9000 said:

In this way of thinking about it, Palpatine wanted Rey dead as a child bc he sensed her power as a threat. Her parents wouldn’t betray her location so he killed them.

Also because “he saw what [she] would become” according to Kylo. So basically he knew that whenever she returned she would be a powerful user of the light. Thus why he would want her dead so Kylo doesn’t come back to the light, or possibly get killed.

EDIT: Funnily enough, both of those last things happen to Kylo technically because she was allowed to live.

Thing is… Rey’s father isn’t force sensitive according to Canon. And for good reason. Otherwise he never would have been allowed to escape Exegol. While that might work, it would be simpler just to reduce it to Ben Solo/Kylo Ren as his first choice.

DZ-330 said:

Yes, however for it to work the “Long have I waited…” and assumptions that this always has been the plan needs to be removed.

Yes that is why I suggested to Hal that he removes the “for my granddaughter to come home” part after he says that because in the version we’re going for it wouldn’t have been a long time waiting for her to come home. He only just recently changed plans.

With that line removed and the “I never wanted you dead” line the conversation goes, “Long have I waited… you will take the throne.” So he’s really talking about how long he has waited for a worthy vessel to take the throne.

That is also never explained. Your guess is as good as mine.

All Lando says is that he and Luke tracked him “halfway across the galaxy” and then they found his abandoned ship on Pasaana with no clues to his whereabouts.

I believe Vader got his wayfinder from the Eye of Webbing Bog. It’s not explained why he had it to begin with.

As for Palpatine, you’re probably right that he was planning on staying on the second Death Star for a while.

Yup, all the pieces are there for the interpretation of the film we’re going for. The problem is that the original film, as stated previously, doesn’t do a good job settling on one.

Hal 9000 said:

It wouldn’t solve as many things as elegantly, as to me it still begs the question “why was Palpatines literal or figurative puppet so keen on killing her last time?”

Interestingly enough, Snoke’s reason for wanting Rey to die (“you have the spirit of a true Jedi”) would also be the reason Palpatine would want her dead. Essence transfer doesn’t work if the kill comes from somebody without hatred or vengeance (i.e. a Jedi).

These two simple line removals just make everything click so much better imo. The alternative is a lengthy procedure that removes large portions of this film to have things make sense.

RogueLeader said:

But if I had to guess, the filmmakers were honestly not sure what the answer was themselves, and left it ambiguous so someone else could answer it, or let the audience pick whichever interpretation they preferred.

JJ Abrams in a nutshell.

EDIT: To make myself clear, I still enjoy a good portion of what this film does. And seeing as how the interpretation that I call for with this movie are mostly the “canon” answers, I don’t really have a problem with this flaw in the movie.

nl0428 said:

Jar Jar Bricks said:

Nope. This is still the Rey Palpatine version believe it or not. The problem we’ve encountered is that Palpatine clearly wanted to essence transfer into Kylo because he put so much effort into corrupting him and calls for Rey’s death, and then suddenly at the end of the film it’s revealed that he always wanted her to live. Like, what?

I agree, I felt that was jarring, but like someone said, this could be because Ben has been redeemed. Afterall, you can tell he’s changing his plans when he made Pryde lead the Final Order on Exegol.

Yes, but that would imply it wasn’t always his plan to let her live, which is what him and Finn claim in the movie.

Nope. This is still the Rey Palpatine version believe it or not. The problem we’ve encountered is that Palpatine clearly wanted to essence transfer into Kylo because he put so much effort into corrupting him and calls for Rey’s death, and then suddenly at the end of the film it’s revealed that he always wanted her to live. Like, what?

So to summarize:

1. Remove Finn saying that “He wanted her alive” because it doesn’t make a lick of sense and was clearly added in after filming.

2. Remove Palpatine saying “I never you wanted you dead. I wanted you here.” (And optionally remove “for my grandchild to come home” because it implies the same thing and is a really goofy line)

You may also have to remove “For my grandchild to come home” after he says “Long have I waited…”

So he would say the following: “Long have I waited… you will take the throne.”

I always thought that line was goofy anyway. I distinctly remember people in my opening night showing laughing at that line.

Who knows lmao. It’s abundantly clear the process of creating this film was an absolutely mess though.

If you delete Palpatine’s line of “I never wanted you dead” as well, I think it makes this whole mess a lot more digestible.

True. And like I said, it’s EXTREMELY obvious the “He wanted her alive” line was added in during post. His face doesn’t move at all while he’s talking. Reminds me of the time Holdo talks in TLJ without moving her mouth.

Hal 9000 said:

I guess it actually makes some sense related to rumors before the movie came out about Palpatine saying he was going to die and he was grooming Kylo Ren as a successor. Problem is the movie leaves us with a mess.

If we can flatten it to Palpatine wanting to kill Rey to resorting to her after Ben is redeemed, I think that’ll help a lot.

Moving the ‘spirit transfer’ line into the opening sequence already breaks the above plot outline, at least implying that Palpatine could take over more than just Rey in particular.

Agreed. So I agree it isn’t ideal to go from Finn saying “What’s your name?” to Ahch-To, but unfortunately that’s the only easy way I see out of that situation. Unless you could edit around Finn and Poe’s lines?

EDIT: While watching the scene between them, I noticed something funny. When Finn says, “He wanted her alive” his lips are clearly not moving. So it was added in during post.

Hal 9000 said:

I edited my last post FYI so just want to make sure you see it.

Is it possible to delete that entire scene between Finn and Poe rather than just that one line? You say they are talking about information the audience already knows, so clearly it isn’t necessary to have.