Could anyone tell me if the crawl sounds ok?
I’m not British nor American, so I’d really like to know if it’s ok, or if the first one was better.
I’d really like to watch these aswell. 😉
New crawl?
"War threatens the galaxy. Hoping to defend it, Anakin Skywalker has managed to become a Jedi Knight.
Assembling many planets and fleets, former Jedi Master Dooku created a SEPARATIST ALLIANCE to leave the too bureaucratic Republic and become independent.
To prevent this catastrophe, Padmé Amidala, Senator of ALDERAAN, travels to Coruscant to join her collegaue Bail Organa to vote on the critical issue of creating an Army of the Republic…"
What do you say?
Thank you both, I think I’ll do as you say. I tried making Obi Wan’s voice work, but each time it sounds a little bit off…
I’ll keep Obi Wan saying “Escorting senator Amidala home”, and then show the marriage…
Wow, they’re so cool! How did you make the new sunset?
Yeah, I tried that.
At first it didn’t sound ok, but now I’m working again on it, because that’s the only thing that could work.
Thank you, man!
https://vimeo.com/325268706
password: fanedit
As you can see from the clip, I changed a bit the ending.
But just before Anakin and Padme’s marriage, Windu asks to Obi Wan “Where’s your apprentice?”.
Considering that I don’t want Anakin to be Obi Wan’s apprentice, but at the same time I need Windu to ask where Anakin is, I don’t know how to make this work.
I tried adding the word “Anakin” to Windu, to make him say “Where’s Anakin?”, but it doesn’t work well.
Does anyone have suggestions?
PS: I’m thinking that I can leave 3PO here. He is not built by Anakin, but we don’t actually need an introduction. He is just one of Padme’s droids, or something like that.
SomethingStarWarsRelated said:
Excuse me, what’s deepfakes?
Sorry I don’t know if you’re kidding. Deepfakes is the process of putting nic cages face on everyone else’s using a certain software I don’t understand. 😉
Here’s an interesting one
https://youtu.be/ANXucrz7HjsThat channel has some pretty cool videos…including some tutorials.
No, I was not kidding, lol.
That’s so cool!
Final duel clip.
At around 1:45 you jump cut from Doku with his back to us to Doku facing us…
Really stands out 😉I don’t have a problem with the Yoda fight, as long as you trim the wild jumping.
At first I didn’t mind that Dooku cut. But then I realized it didn’t look good.
It’s already fixed 😉
Excuse me, what’s deepfakes?
Edit also uploaded on Google Drive.
PM me for link 😉
Edit also uploaded on Google Drive. PM me for link 😉
EDIT: Sorry, wrong post. It’s the other edit, this one is not finished yet.
I’m not able to do it with clips, but how cool would it look?
The main problem with PT’s Yoda is the eyes, IMHO. Too different from puppet Yoda.
Edit finally released on MEGA.
PM me for links 😉
Ok, this is what I need. I will work on it.
Is that all or there’s something else?
Final duel clip.
Here you can see:
Tell me what you think of it 😉
https://vimeo.com/328810341
password: fanedit
Problem solved. I can’t change Windu’s lightsaber. I work on the edit with Sony Vegas, and even with a frame-by-frame masking, the color change on his lightsaber looks awful… But I finished Dooku’s saber CC 😉
As you can see, I decided to change Dooku’s lightsaber color into purple. I’m thinking about not mentioning him as a Sith lord until the very end, by placing the meeting with Palpatine as the final scene.
The purple lightsaber shows that he is not really a Jedi but also not a Sith, at least until the ending.
I don’t know if I’ll change also Windu’s lightsaber…
FULL TRAILER.
It’s almost done. I’ll have to wait my new internet line to upload the two edits, but they are coming.
As a whole, I’m pretty satisfied about how it’s coming out.
Updated changelist & Yoda/Dooku clip.
As I said before, Yoda doesn’t use a lightsaber.
Here’s my cut of the scene. Yoda arrives when the three are still fighting, and just as he calls Dooku, the Sith uses the Force and runs.
I will try to change Dooku’s lightsaber color. I’d like to keep the revelation of him being a Sith lord at the end. But I don’t know if I can, so this can be the final version.
https://vimeo.com/327932283
password: fanedit
Thank you both. I will keep it then.
Yeah, I had to add the senators praising Palpy to remove the voice of Jar Jar.
As soon as I update my internet connection I will release Shadow of the past (EpI edit) and then this one 😉
Creation of the Clone army clip.
Ok, I really need a feedback on this.
You can see the color correction. I think it works quite well.
This scene is placed just after the Dooku/Padmé dialogue scene (from the deleted scenes, used to replace the droid factory action sequence).
Tell me what you think about the music track. Of course it’s from ROTJ.
I know it can sound too joyful, but at this point the Republic and Palpatine are meant to be the good guys. And both Yoda and Windu are listening. We should not, as audience, be afraid of what’s to come. After all, even in ROTJ this music is used even if the characters know they are going into some sort of battle.
Anyway, here it is.
https://vimeo.com/327437747
password: fanedit
Senate comparison.
I always hated how the Senate looks different from movie to movie.
In the first it’s blueish, in the second yellow (as everything in this movie), in the third black (or at least pretty dark).
I want it to be consistent. I already changed the color in Shadow of the past (there is a clip in its post page).
Here’s the comparison for KOTP.
http://screenshotcomparison.com/comparison/132975
PS: It won’t be Jar Jar the one who gives powers to Palpatine. We actually don’t see this. Windu enters, and we cut to the Senators cheering for Palpatine.
Thank you so much for these feedbacks.
One or two moments need a little bit of work for the audio 😉