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Does anyone have a 720p version of the Tatooine arrival without the ronto passing in front of the camera?
Thank you 😉

That’s kind of like thermonuclear physics to me, but I’ll return to it, lol.

LEIA’S HOLOGRAM CLIP.

https://vimeo.com/354013432
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LUKE’S LIGHTSABER CLIP.

https://vimeo.com/344824428
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I still can’t consider it as bad… I find it more in line with the PT and ST.
Anyway, you guys are surely more expert than I am.

What do you think about this?
http://www.framecompare.com/image-compare/screenshotcomparison/DLGZWNNX

Thank you for criticism.
Right now I quite like it, it looks less flat IMHO, so at least for now I’ll keep it.

What is it that you don’t like?

At the moment… nope. 😄
I’m sorry, I quite enjoyed it, but it looks way too different. Maybe I will add one or two shots of Vader, but nothing from the actual duel.
I’m considering to have a whole different cut for the duel. If I manage to make it work, I’d like to have something similar to the “Return” cinematic trailer from The Old Republic.

Thank you so much 😉

OPENING CLIP.

You can see the new crawl (any suggestions welcomed) and the color correction (Tatooine, its atmosphere, the engines).

https://vimeo.com/353548434
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Thank you! Yeah, the close-up has already been removed. I just need to find a shot for the base exterior…

And here’s the edited blaster bolts (with new music track).

https://vimeo.com/348356611
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Death Star hologram and Dantooine search.

https://vimeo.com/347608775
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This is the clip which I already posted in the Radical Ideas thread.
It still needs work on the hologram, and the Dantooine search will be shortened, but that’s it.

Frame comparisons.

TANTIVE IV

TATOOINE

Sometimes the CC is less visible.
http://www.framecompare.com/image-compare/screenshotcomparison/JB12CNNU
(Mostly on the Tantive walls and on 3PO)

OPENING SHOT COMPARISON

Here’s what I’m talking about.
No new visual effect, just color changes.

http://www.framecompare.com/image-compare/screenshotcomparison/DLYPPNNX

New crawl.

THE SON OF SKYWALKER.

Nineteen years have
passed since the death of
Anakin Skywalker. The
GALACTIC EMPIRE rules
with fear.

Having fought a desperate
battle over the planet of
Scarif to steal the secret
plans of the Empire’s
ultimate weapon, the
DEATH STAR, the Rebel
Alliance hopes to use
them to find a weakness
in the dreadful station.

Princess Leia Organa,
daughter of Senator Bail
Organa, tries to escape
with the plans, closely
followed bu the Emperor’s
right hand, DARTH
VADER…

TRAILER: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iYz_zsJk4sM

PREMISE
Rewatch “A new hope” with a more modern look. Locations, characters and soundtrack are more consistent with the other movies of the saga.

SOURCES:

1. Despecialized edition
2. Telecine’s SFX for some blaster shots.
3. 2019 version

OVERALL CHANGES:

1. Complete color correction. I want it to be more in line with other movies (Rogue One’s Death Star, Mandalorian’s Tatooine, TFA’s Falcon) and to keep a consistent look in the whole saga as much as I can.
2. New music tracks from other movies and a couple from the Harry Potter movies.
3. Enhanced engines, lightsabers, etc.

COMPLETE CHANGELIST:

• New crawl. The Battle of Scarif, Coruscant, Palpatine and the Senate are mentioned.
• New atmosphere for Tatooine, inspired by the Mandalorian.
• Enhanced ships’ lasers.
• Added twin suns in a couple shots.
• The explosion on the Tantive is removed.
• Added Prequels music during the stormtroopers assault.
• Added Imperial March to Vader’s appearance.
• Recolored Tantive IV
• Replaced music as the Star Destroyer leaves Tatooine
• Shortened and recolored 3PO/R2 scene in the desert.
• Added Prequels music as R2 is captured by Jawas, to increase tension.
• Removed 3PO being approached by the Sandcrawler (to enhance pacing and make the audience wonder what happened to him).
• Enhanced Leia’s hologram
• Removed CG rock in front of R2
• Removed Ben saying that he doesn’t remember owning a droid.
• Restructured Ben’s hut scene (= Adywan’s)
• Enhanced lightsaber
• Enhanced Star Destroyer’s engine
• Recolored Death Star council room
• Added Harry Potter and Prequels music track
• Shortened Mos Eisley’s reveal
• Removed Ronto
• Added Imperial propaganda message inside Cantina
• Recolored Cantina
• Han shoots first. Greedo doesn’t shoot at all
• Recolored Imperial officers’ uniform with green tones, more in line with Rogue One and the Mandalorian
• Removed Jabba scene
• Recolored Falcon’s interior to be more similar to TFA. Recolored lights inside cockpit.
• Cut Han saying that he knows some maneuvers
• Added atmosphere to Alderaan
• Enhanced Alderaan’s explosion
• Added Prequels music
• New music tracks during first Luke “training” inside the Falcon
• Enhanced lightsaber
• Enhanced chess hologram
• Replaced Imperial officer telling Tarkin about the rebel base with a hologram
• Added Falcon in hyperspace establighing shot
• Added force field to Death Star hangar
• Added some new music tracks
• Recolored Death Star areas. Some corridors are blue (similar to Rebels scenes inside Star Destroyers), others are darker and black (similar to some Clone Wars and videogames style).
• Cut trash compactor one-eyed monster
• Restructured chasing sequence in order to remove stormtroopers running away from Han, and Han being overrun. I never liked that scene.
• Enhanced lightsabers during duel and added music tracks.
• Moved Luke mourning Ben to after the Tie fighters sequence.
• Added shot of the Falcon going to hyperspace, and Death Star establishing shot to introduce Tarkin/Vader
• Added sun to Yavin to many space shots
• New atmosphere for Yavin
• Recolored Yavin’s nature and temple
• Recolored X-Wing’s engines
• Added music tracks during the battle
• Enhanced displays and lasers
• Recolored entire battle (less flat, Death Star is more grey, fighters interiors slightly more blue)
• Recolored Yavin control room
• Added battle hologram to all Leia scenes
• Added “Hope” track last part when Vader leaves

Blaster bolts clip.
I’m starting to work on ANH edit. New title: “The son of Skywalker”. Other suggestions? I don’t really like “A new hope”.
Here’s a short clip, anyway. Of course it’s made frame by frame.

https://vimeo.com/348356611
password: fanedit

Yep, I’ll do as you guys say. I started working on an ANH edit. As soon as I have something more substantial, I will post it. It’s just an edit in line with my previous edits (removing any mention of Vader being Obi Wan’s former apprentice) with some new music tracks and some small visual changes (whatever I can do with only Sony Vegas).

4throck said:

Yes, that is a problem. But perhaps you can crop or stabilize some scenes from these:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bYhrzL9tsUY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8IvGpStmbOM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kRQWXh94N6o

Thinking about some closeups of storm troopers patrolling and looking, just a few seconds at most.
Then you cut to the hologram.

I think this is at least acceptable.
https://vimeo.com/347608775
password: fanedit

If you want, tell me what you think about it 😉

4throck said:

Interesting! Perhaps you can incorporate some fan movie footage and show them searching the abandoned base ? I’ve seen some good fan movies about Storm Troopers that might work here.

Do you have anything in mind? I usually dislike fan movie additions, but if the cinematography is quite similar I could surely add it.

Been messing around with ANH (lightsabers, millennium falcon’s interiors, Death Star, etc.)
This one still needs work, but I think it’s quite cool.

https://vimeo.com/347101658
password: fanedit

ANH Millennium Falcon’s CC.
I’d like to make the MF’s interior to look like the one from The Force Awakens. Don’t know why, but I liked it.

ORIGINAL

EDITED

Here’s the screenshot comparison: http://www.framecompare.com/image-compare/screenshotcomparison/P7GPNNNX

(More blue in the room, the corridors are more yellow-ish, and Luke’s lightsaber is recolored to be more in line with Anakin’s lightsaber)

Thank you.
As I said, the DS color correction is really rough, but it is meant to be darker. I want it to look less like a studio set and more like a dark control room in space. It needs work, of course 😉

Episode IV clips.

I was just playing with ANH. Here are some tests.

https://vimeo.com/344824428
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This is pretty simple, but I like it. 3PO has more color, and Luke’s lightsaber is more in line with poth the prequels and the sequels.

https://vimeo.com/344824658
password: fanedit
Here’s a test with the hologram. Also, we can see some light when the camera is on Luke/Ben.

https://vimeo.com/344824914
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This is really in early stage, but it’s a color correction to make the Death Star control room look like the one from Rogue One.

Tell me what you think about these clips 😉