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Hal 9000

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#1197555
Topic
Star Wars: The Last Jedi - The Dark Cut (* unfinished project *)
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darthrush said:

Thanks for the thumbs up, I’m glad I got it right!

No Leaf Joke

https://vimeo.com/265290771

-Cut from Rey saying “Okay” to Luke resting her hand on the rock.
-Replaced “Reach out with your feelings” with just “Reach out”

Wow. I really enjoyed that moment in the theater, but my goodness, it really does play out better like this. You’ve convinced me.

Here’s another attempt, this time trying to include the shot of Luke discarding the reed he is shown holding. I submit it to get a sense of whether people think the shot is better in or out.
https://vimeo.com/265385058
password: fanedit

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#1197518
Topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
Time

It still took some FX work to transition from the Falcon leaving Jakku to the originally unrelated shot from the end of the movie.
It wasn’t really related to the main goal of the edit (or was it?), but I couldn’t resist including it when I saw his mock-up. (And, as I say, it lets us use a tiny part of TFA in a different way which would have been cut otherwise.)

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#1197475
Topic
The Last Jedi: Legendary (Released)
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I’ve invested as much care and attention to this sequence as I possibly can, and I believe this is the best I am going to get this to look and sound. It’s the caretaker removal. Wind and porg sounds have been added fresh, in order to allow the clean music from the rear channels to be duplicated to the front and center channels and carry on from Luke and Rey’s conversation, rather than trying to transition into the more dramatic music originally associated with the final exterior shot. The levels were adjusted throughout to make it flow as seamlessly as I can contrive.

https://vimeo.com/265308666
password: fanedit

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#1196412
Topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
Time

Nah. Just like the prequel trilogy is unhelpably ‘prequel’ (in terms of assuming you are familiar with what came before), the sequel trilogy so far seems very much a serial. I have no interest in revisiting TFA in light of TLJ. There were other little things about TFA that could have been trimmed, but I liked the movie and preferred not to hack it all up. Despite how that last sentence sounded, I am looking forward to Sir Ridley’s edit which will make many of these little trims in addition to what’s in TFA:R.

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#1194440
Topic
The Last Jedi: Legendary (Released)
Time

I’d like to get a discussion going about how to handle Canto Bight.

It seems like there are three options.

A) Keep the existing structure intact, but trim down the fathier stuff somewhat. This option introduces the fewest issues, but solves just as much less of the problems this stuff has.

B) Remove fathier sequence altogether. This would look like:

  • Finn and Rose arrive on Canto Bight. Finn is infatuated with the place, until Rose spills her guts about her history with the FO and how the town houses war profiteers. (This will be trimmed just a little, removing the namedrop of ‘fathiers.’ Alternatively, Finn and Rose could immediately spot the master codebreaker upon entering the casino and be thrown in jail.)
  • Finn and Rose are incarcerated, meet DJ, and we transition directly to the three of them in hyperspace making their deal.
  • Later, their story proceeds as it does originally.
    One slight problem is that transitioning to hyperspace heavily implies that we are viewing the same shuttle they left on, despite a brief establishing shot to the contrary that audiences wouldn’t pick up on. It might be slightly confusing when it is revealed that DJ stole the ship. I believe a FX shot of BB8 following the group as they leave the cell would be helpful. (Could even just be to show him leaving the shadows, similar to the shot where he watches the guards. Doesn’t even need to be added to an existing shot. Just something to indicate that he sees them leaving and is going to follow.)

C) Finn never leaves the rebels in the first place, and we are never formally introduced to Rose. This does not seem like a workable option to me, because the character of DJ will return in Episode 9, and I’d want to keep Finn’s involvement in the story. (I.e., it’s not an option to just keep Finn with the rebels all along and hardly show him. We do need to actually go to Canto Bight.)

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#1193900
Topic
Episode IX: The Rise Of Skywalker - Discussion * <strong><em>SPOILER THREAD</em></strong> *
Time

I remember hearing a rumor that Leia’s role in Ep9 would be to beckon Kylo Ren back to the light side of the force, that she would be his path to redemption.
With Carrie Fischer having left us, I wonder how it would work to still have that point be the thematic core of his arc, but to focus on her absence. At the end of TLJ, Kylo Ren is left empty and alone with a great deal of power. He decided to spare Leia from death when he had the chance early in the film, and the act of Rey closing the Falcon door on him to me spoke a message something to the effect of, “You are captive to the decisions you make, and you cannot count on others to hold out hope for you forever; there is a point at which it is too late.”

What if Ep9’s story related to Kylo Ren explores that idea? Part of Kylo assumed that Leia being alive would always allow for an “out,” but now she is gone and he is totally alone and self-absorbed. It could be a way to address Leia’s real-life absence in a thematically meaningful way, whether he is redeemed and/or dies or not.

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#1193797
Topic
The Last Jedi: Legendary (Released)
Time

poppasketti said:

Hal 9000 said:

Thanks very much; I’ll be sending you a PM shortly.

Hey Hal,

Here’s my first pass at stabilizing the crate.
https://vimeo.com/263673331
password: fanedit

I’ll scrutinize a bit more myself as I think there’s a couple small things I want to fix, but let me know if you see anything. I uploaded the prores file to vimeo, so if you like, you can download the file and slot it into your edit!

Works for me! Such a little thing, but I was watching like a hawk when I saw the movie for the second time. 😉

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#1193356
Topic
The Last Jedi: Legendary (Released)
Time

Here’s another attempt at removing the caretakers. It’s better… still not perfect, but it’s as good as I can get it at this sitting.
I don’t have any more time for the present to spend on it, but I think it needs some sort of extra shot between “Let’s get started,” and walking up the stairs. Perhaps a reaction shot from Kylo could be contrived.

https://vimeo.com/263649711
password: fanedit