Hal 9000

Yeah, that’s my thought, too.

I hate to ask for more work but if you’re inclined that could be interesting to see.

If so, great, but I’m not gonna think about it.

Pretty good!

Interesting idea, I haven’t heard that before. She shouldn’t appear pregnant, though.

That is exactly the sort of stuff this movie needs.

Maybe, just an idea popped into my head.

Guess I better try again.

Anything R2 projects onscreen is canon, but nothing else.

jonh said:

Jedi ghosts advanced
I have replaced yoda and anakin, and have made them more visible…
https://vimeo.com/409718237
password:jedi

Keeps getting better! I hope you don’t take our feedback as criticism. It’s because it’s so promising that we are vetting it!

I like this footage for Anakin better. It’s not immediately recognizable to me.

I’d be inclined not to include Qui-Gon, although hearing all the various Jedi spirits audibly even seems to go against what ROTS told us. (Weird as that was even.)

I guess Qui-Gon and the other few must have enlivened the rest of the dead Jedi. Maybe it takes a while and so they started with the big names in reverse chronological order.

Hmmm… Leading into the credits may be the tricky part. Just playing with it in my head, I have an idea but I can’t think how to express what I mean without humming. (Can’t do that, with multiple sleeping family members and myself about to join them in sleepybyland…)

I wouldn’t want to remove the ghosts, myself. If anything adding Ben would be nice. (Even if he’s goofy! It’s okay for him to be.)

It’s not much, but I finally got to sit down long enough to mix the elements snooker sent me for the little Ewok scene into 5.1 and blend it into the new context.

Thanks, snooker, it’s a wonderful little thing.

“✅.”

Nah, I don’t think so.

Yeah, that’d have been interesting and presumably her body wouldn’t have still been around.

I put nothing past all of us, of course.

I’d prefer not to include Leia with the ghosts. Her body is still sitting on Jungleworld, but I think we can get away with just hearing her voice because that seems to come first, as with Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan. Kinda/sorta. Plus her appearance at the end is that much nicer to see.

Noah, I honestly haven’t had the time to do anything with that at all. If it fits in nicely, I think an underplayed, nonchoral allusion to DOTF would be cool for the duel, but not the whole piece, I don’t think. I don’t want to use Anakin vs Obi-Wan music either, as that seems paired closely with just that confrontation.

And let me just say, I’m really happy this community can come together around this. My edits would always have been garbage without you all, and I look forward to a sort of ‘Hal9000 Presents…’ final entry.

One little nitpick: Luke looks like he is finished walking into position in the first shot, whereas the other three are standing firm.

I wonder if it might help just a little to mirror Anakin since he’s gazing to the right whereas Rey (and therefore sort of the ghosts) are established as being right of Palpatine.

The shot of Anakin is pretty static, perhaps the face aging could be done with a still or two using key frames. If so, I wonder what it’d be like to blend him with a young Sebastian Shaw (because there’ll be more footage to work with) and then aging that.

Easy for me to say, of course.

krausfadr said:

Rey stays on Ach-to with Luke until dusk: https://youtu.be/hmBVc0nXYnk

YouTube took it down. Interesting idea, though, I hope it’ll resurface.

Knight of Kalee said:

Hal, I remember you or someone else here thought of changing the music that plays over the ending Rey Skywalker/Binary Sunset scene, as to avoid repeating the Force theme across three movies. Have you though of putting some version of Rey’s theme instead? I believe it might be the most fitting, because it reaffirms Rey’s identity above all else, and is very much the central musical theme of the sequel trilogy. I personally like this track (originally from TFA end credits): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1bJpmMwrabo.
Not the full theme, but some snippets of it, like that transition between the Force and Rey’s motifs. If you plan to end the scene with a fade to black, maybe the peaceful version of the SW main theme that plays at the end of the track could could fit better instead of a more bombastic piece, as it has much of a “final farewell” feel to it.

Nice idea! That would be a very nice way to end it. It sounds like if I can’t play with the audio or get it right, Dominic certainly will. 😉

jonh said:

Jackpumpkinhead said:

jonh said:

Hal 9000 said:

That’s some very nice work. However, I think the only way I would actually want to use it as if it is so subtle that it’s almost hard to notice on the first viewing.

??? jedi ghosts v4…with anakin
https://vimeo.com/409718237
password:jedi

Jonh,
This is some great stuff, I think if you made them seem more in the distance (maybe add some blur for distance) and only appear with the lightning strikes and then disappear in the shadows, it would sell the effect better

Jedi ghosts advanced
https://vimeo.com/409718237
password:jedi

I’m sold. That’s great! Unfortunate that Luke, Anakin, and Yoda’s footage is repurposed, but maybe I’m just too sensitive to that. Well, I know I am. Have you thought about aging Hayden a little?

If I remember correctly it didn’t match his tone or the environment. I’d love to be proven wrong!

My version would have CGI Yoda, but would use CPY for just the shot where he says, “leads to suffering.”

It doesn’t sound right, sadly. Listening with headphones at least, it sounds obviously added later.

Hmm, I’ll give that a try next time I find myself in front of my computer, whenever that is.

And poppasketti, you’re a genius. Borrowing consonants from other Kylo dialogue… great work.

Yeah! That’s great!

Personally, I prefer Dominic’s version of the initial vision. And I’m not sold on the snake being frightened by her inner darkness, either the idea or how effective it’s possible to get it to be.

That’d probably make more sense. My idea was to imply that tracking Snoke’s miscellaneous stuff would lead him to Palpatine, like following a marionette’s strings to its animator.
But that’s hard to get across, and doesn’t make immediate sense as Kylo rummages through Darth Vader’s sock drawer.

Just updated the OP.

Here’s a revised stab at a crawl. I welcome ideas.

Episode IX
THE RISE OF SKYWALKER

A shadow has consumed the galaxy. To suffocate the spark of rebellion, the First Order has scattered and isolated those with the bravery to face the darkness.

As Rey, sole heir to the Jedi, continues her training under the ailing General Leia Organa, their fledging Resistance gathers intel to forge a path to freedom.

Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren rages in search of his grandfather’s SITH WAYFINDER, determined to unlock the secrets of his former master’s power…

Yes, RogueLeader, THAT’S how you include Across the Stars.

Damn, that might be worth putting out one more version of my TLJ project. Wonderful work!