Grand Admiral Thrawn

I would definitely appreciate watching “Solo - A Star Wars Story… that you can see”

You’re still holding on! - KR

It’ll get there for sure! Snooker will get it down. Make it look like it always belonged there 😉

I hate to be a pain, but I don’t think it is super convincing just yet.

I think if the ship descended much slower, and if the smoke was more transparnet to the background it would work much better. As a bonus, it would be nice to see some Naboo starfighters flying away from the destroyer, even if it is just some small ships instead of one big ship blowing up with nothing around it.

jkimm said:

Are the stormtroopers still going to say “Knights of Ren… Ghouls” or are you planning on making them silent and just look at each other? Seems like half of us thought they were saying “cool”.

I would love for them to be silent and just have that look of unease. We don’t need them to give us story details.

Just skimmed the Workprint. Loving all the changes. Gray Exegol rocks! Only issue I noticed is that the rest of the LUT makes the picture a LOT warmer and more red.

PERFECTION

JEDIT: Almost there! Looks like the Star Wars logo is a little bit too big. Maybe make the white lines a tad-bit thicker. Other than that, it looks amazing!

Movies Remastered said:

I really like this one. I feel it matches your Kylo cover better and has more punch to the colors? I’ve messaged Nate, just waiting on a reply…

This!!! 😁😁😁

Are you able to make the purple hue a stronger red? It might make it seem like a conflict with the blue on the left and red on the right. Just a thought!

Here are two of my very quick mockups of a cover:

I’ll take a stab at a cover. Stay tuned!

Could someone provide a png of a matching logo though?

Any project updates? It’s been pretty quiet in here the past few days.

I mocked up the ending with the cockpit shot (music-only) and I think it actually makes the final music track smooth out a lot nicer towards the end!

I also increased the warmth of the cockpit shot to simulate the sun through the windows.

It would be cool to include R2 and maybe D0 behind BB-8 at the end.

https://vimeo.com/436658564
PW: fanedit

And it would be AWESOME to include the ghosts of Luke, Leia and Ben watching them fly off.

For the Stormtrooper lines:

“Stop talking.”

“Switch him off already!”

Another note too, would it be worth it trying to extend Anch-To by including an establshing shot of Luke’s hut before Rey is gifted Leia’s lightsaber?

Why did Hux’s “I’m the spy.” line get removed in WP V3?

Poe and Finn’s reactions feel kinda jarring without the line. Plus I thought it was kinda funny too. Like it or not Hux is the First Order’s Jar Jar haha

The next new stormtrooper 3po joke is hilarious but the voice line sounds like it was obviously added in. I think the audio there could maybe use a little reworking or maybe a better filter.

Hal 9000 said:

That looks wonderful!

Please use it!

I think I noticed Aurora Borealis in Hal’s kitchen…

Great idea I saw mentioned on another thread… have the force ghosts watch the Falcon fly off into the sunset during the ending. One last Luke looking at the suns shot and seeing Rey off.

Glad I was FORCEful on the restructure. Glad to hear the positive feedback for V2 😃

Maybe you could still include the shot of Rey looking at the Death Star. If we have the dialogue, we can have her say “I feel it”.

Which then cuts to the riders approaching.

Finn:
“Got something for us?”

Boolio:
Yeah, sounds like they stumbled upon an old Imperial fleet, at least the spy said so.

Finn:
“A spy? Who?”

Boolio:
I don’t know! Just take the message.

Finn:
“How do we thank you?”

Boolio:
Thank the spy.

Hal 9000 said:

I think one thing that makes restructuring the opening feel wrong is that even though we hear “the Falcon still hasn’t reported in,” we see Poe and Finn appearing to just start their mission. The reason it took so long to get back was because Poe screwed up the Falcon with his shenanigans.

That could also be assumed to be they haven’t reported in to say they got to the ice planet or met up with the spy. Either or 🤷‍♂️

Hal 9000 said:

DZ-330 said:

Here is a very rough mockup of the restructure:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kUZNzMavv6m_hTcBi1yqY4–sQalmApq/view?usp=sharing

Link says I need access. (I requested it.)

Corrected 😉

Here is a very rough mockup of the restructure:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kUZNzMavv6m_hTcBi1yqY4–sQalmApq/view?usp=sharing