I thought this thread was for a discussion of Hal’s edit. Not what is canon versus what is not? Are you editing Darth Jar Jar into the Sith Eternal crowd still???
Hmmm, for the 3PO/trooper moment… I like what RogueLeader came up with. But I don’t have anything else clever in mind.
If you wanna be meta funny
3PO: “excuse me, sir"
Trooper: “hey wait"
3PO: “would you be so kind to…”
Trooper: “you’re that droid!”
Bam ya dead
has any thought been given to trimming the opening notes of burning homestead for the ghost scene to help make the tacked on music flow in a little better? I can post a mockup of it shortly!
I think if the first 2 notes were cut from Burning Homestead it would make the music flow clearer. Cut out the buh buhhhhhhh, before the force theme kicks in and it should have a much more natural sounding transition with the existing music.
It would be awesome if it could stick with the original music and play Rey’s motif when she takes the lightsaber and then go silent and then pick back up when the lightening starts.
Nice to have you back Ady! Best wishes to you and your family 😃
I think it would be a good idea to do another WP and call it a day until whatever odds and sods are produced to call it done.
Totally agree! It would be nice though to see a de-blued Luke ghost until Jonh finishes giving him his haircut.
Also, it seems on 8/21 Disney is releasing an Official Score for Jedi Fallen Order. There may be some musical cues from there possibly worth utilizing.
Is there anything on your list that would bring about a new workprint, or are we in the endgame now?
I’d take the explosion sounds out. The other scenes are music only.
Would love a link for this.
I would definitely appreciate watching “Solo - A Star Wars Story… that you can see”
You’re still holding on! - KR
It’ll get there for sure! Snooker will get it down. Make it look like it always belonged there 😉
I hate to be a pain, but I don’t think it is super convincing just yet.
I think if the ship descended much slower, and if the smoke was more transparnet to the background it would work much better. As a bonus, it would be nice to see some Naboo starfighters flying away from the destroyer, even if it is just some small ships instead of one big ship blowing up with nothing around it.
Are the stormtroopers still going to say “Knights of Ren… Ghouls” or are you planning on making them silent and just look at each other? Seems like half of us thought they were saying “cool”.
I would love for them to be silent and just have that look of unease. We don’t need them to give us story details.
Just skimmed the Workprint. Loving all the changes. Gray Exegol rocks! Only issue I noticed is that the rest of the LUT makes the picture a LOT warmer and more red.
PERFECTION
JEDIT: Almost there! Looks like the Star Wars logo is a little bit too big. Maybe make the white lines a tad-bit thicker. Other than that, it looks amazing!
I really like this one. I feel it matches your Kylo cover better and has more punch to the colors? I’ve messaged Nate, just waiting on a reply…
This!!! 😁😁😁
Are you able to make the purple hue a stronger red? It might make it seem like a conflict with the blue on the left and red on the right. Just a thought!
Here are two of my very quick mockups of a cover:
I’ll take a stab at a cover. Stay tuned!
Could someone provide a png of a matching logo though?
Any project updates? It’s been pretty quiet in here the past few days.
I mocked up the ending with the cockpit shot (music-only) and I think it actually makes the final music track smooth out a lot nicer towards the end!
I also increased the warmth of the cockpit shot to simulate the sun through the windows.
It would be cool to include R2 and maybe D0 behind BB-8 at the end.
https://vimeo.com/436658564
PW: fanedit
And it would be AWESOME to include the ghosts of Luke, Leia and Ben watching them fly off.
For the Stormtrooper lines:
“Stop talking.”
“Switch him off already!”
