Grand Admiral Thrawn

Take 2! 😃

War is beginning to spread across the galaxy.

New battlefields are rapidly emerging as the armies of the Republic and Separatists fight for control.

Taking a direct role in this conflict, Senator BAIL ORGANA has began providing relief and supplies to numerous clone squadrons on the front lines.

Anakin Skywalker has achieved the rank of JEDI KNIGHT. In honor of this achievement, Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi has put in a request to teach his skills to a new padawan learner.

Meanwhile, the pair have tracked Count Dooku’s vicious assassin, ASAJJ VENTRESS, to the planet of Christophsis.

But Ventress is far more cunning than she appears…

Can I suggest some alternate text for the beginning? Writing alternate crawls is an odd Star Wars hobby of mine!

NEW OPENING CRAWL:

War is spreading across the galaxy.

New battlefields are rapidly emerging as the armies of the Republic and Separatists fight for control.

Taking a direct role in this conflict, Senator BAIL ORGANA has began providing relief and supplies to numerous clone squadrons on the front lines.

Anakin Skywalker has achieved the rank of JEDI KNIGHT. In honor of this achievement, his master Obi-Wan Kenobi has put in a request for Anakin to teach his skills to a new padawan.

Meanwhile, the pair have tracked Count Dooku’s vicious Sith assassin, ASAJJ VENTRESS, to the planet of Christophsis.
But Ventress is far more cunning than she appears…

And here I am trolling back with Sheev quotes lol

The makeup department is a pathway to many characters that some consider to look… unnatural.

That might be perfect when Rey is looking at the stars and we hear the voices. Luke is rallying the troops to fight Papa Palps.

I thought not. It’s not a story the filmmakers would tell you…

I think showing a shot of the place they are staying at sunset after the kiss to let the music fade and then do a wipe to Kamino.

I remember a report from earlier this year saying they were both attached to star in a show but it wasn’t confirmed. I’ll have to find it.

The Master returns. Amazing work poppa

I still have my electronic R2 toy from the Hut lol

Nevsrmind! Got them! Thanks again as always 😃

Any chance you can move the alternative versions into their own folders instead of just one? Drive is being a pain and the whole folder won’t zip.

Btw, Merry Christmas!

I don’t mind Burning Homestead. TROS:A now makes a musical callback to this moment. Rey accepts the lightsaber. Then in TROS the true purpose is revealed.

Jonh’s version is the best as is. We have Obi-Wan and Yoda from the OT, Anakin from the PT, and Luke from the ST. All characters important to LUKE, and to viewers of the OT. Adding any more would just feel like overkill and something we would see in a George Lucas special edition. The Phantom Four feels like something that would have originally been in the film.

What a mess. Hahahahaha. Jonh, you have nothing to be ashamed of yours is 10000 times better.

Let me rephrase better. Talk to them and assure them you are there, but make it clear they can’t rely on you for help and that you NEED to take steps to help yourself and reach out to a professional.

I’ve been in this situation on both sides. A mental health therapist told me, just don’t reply or lead them on. By actively engaging in the messaging, you are enabling them to continue going to you for support instead of them doing it themselves.

Any way any quick snippets of TLJ can be added to Rey’s force vision? Anything to make this trilogy more cohesive is great.

If someone can get Kylo saying “You’re a clone” I made a Palpatine quote using Ian McDiarmid from Rebels to respond with.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1YkKP9VGa6iIefgQKmN5TV-ySzgwQttYj/view?usp=sharing

Double post

Those new versions are fantastic. Bravo.

Download the whole folder, not just the file

Now if only Jonh can get Luke to the barber shop… we’ll be in a great place 😃

From the Disney Investors Meeting:

Rogue Squadron

The next Star Wars feature film to hit the big screen will be Rogue Squadron, directed by Patty Jenkins. The story will introduce a new generation of starfighter pilots as they earn their wings and risk their lives in a boundary-pushing, high-speed thrill-ride, and move the saga into the future era of the galaxy. Rogue Squadron arrives in theaters Christmas 2023.