Grand Admiral Thrawn

Hal 9000 said:

If the key ingredient of the idea is Palpatine knowingly trying to drain the dyad, I don’t think the footage is there to establish what’s happening, as he holds his hands up in surprise to exposit what’s happening.

Again, I do like this idea and wish it could be fully realized without seams.

I guess the question is… can we make something doable for V2 for this idea and can anyone assist to make it happen?

Instead of “KILL THR GIRL!” at the beginning, can it just somehow be changed to “Bring me the girl!”

Rey still thinks Palpatine wants to kill her throughout the film.

Kylo thinks Palpatine just wants Rey, however he wants to go there together to defeat Palpatine. Palpatine wants them both for their dyad. Kylo is afraid Palps will kill her which is why he only wants her going with him; which is what Palp’s goal is.

Line Changes:

Kylo Ren: What could you give me?

Emperor Palpatine: Everything. A new empire. The might of the Final Order will soon be ready. It will be yours if you do as I ask. Bring me the girl, end the Jedi and become what your grandfather Vader could not. You will rule all the galaxy as the new emperor. But beware. She is not who you think she is.

Emperor Palpatine: The Jedi apprentice still lives. Perhaps you have betrayed me. Do not make me turn my fleet against you.

Kylo Ren: I know where she’s going.

Emperor Palpatine: Make sure of it. Kill her.

Emperor Palpatine: The Princess of Alderaan has disrupted my plan, but her foolish act will be in vain. Come to me on Exegol, General Pryde.

General Pryde: As I served you in the old wars, I serve you now.

Emperor Palpatine: The Final Order begins. She will come; her friends will follow.

General Pryde: Yes, my Lord.

Emperor Palpatine: Your coming together is your undoing. The lifeforce of your bond… a power like life itself. Unseen for generations. And now… the power of two restores the one, true Emperor.

Chase Adams said:

NeverarGreat said:

here’s my take on the opening:

https://vimeo.com/640530188

password: fanedit

Okay, this has won me over on the two shot option. Brilliant ideas all around.

Agreed. I think this is the best option of what has been suggested so far!

What if the order was flipped?

TIES in space
Vader’s Castle (Biomes)
Overhead of lava and trees
TIES above the forest
Kyle Ren

Movies Remastered said:

^ I would have liked this comment 😉

Top comment search or thread search would be super handle too. I would help us track down older video links etc, especially as we’re closing 15,000 comments on this thread alone. 😲

Exactly my thoughts on this! Searching through PAGES of stuff to find a video link is a pain. Even being able to filter posts that contain external links would be nice.

Movies Remastered said:

Can we suggest that admin find a way to add likes to posts? There’s so much good stuff happening right now. 👍🏼

That would be awesome, especially if you can sort by liked posts or view most liked posts in a thread!

Hal, let’s do a recount! Shuttle is so much better 😃

sherlockpotter said:

Original ending for comparison: https://streamable.com/15r2vd

Potential new version: https://streamable.com/asygmi

I mainly tried to smooth over the pickup note between Rey’s Theme and the End Credit fanfare. Oh, and shoutout to bbghost for helping me find the correct music clips!

Perfection!

Master Lawdog said:

Also, is it still being worked on for the final shot to be an overhead shot of Tatooine in space as the Falcon makes the jump to lightspeed?

I would love to see this idea fully realized. I posted a mockup of it a while ago but my experience is nowhere close to where it would need to be to pull it off. I think the music just needs to extend out a bit. I’m just not a fan of it cut straight from Rey’s theme to the credits 🤷‍♂️

@Dat_SW_Guy had a mockup he made:

Agreed, Luke desperately needs to lose the long hair and few extra pounds Jonh trimmed off to fix that scene and make it watchable. With all the other added changes to the Luke scene, the final version will look like a masterpiece compared to the original.

EDIT: Especially with the de-blued Luke ghost

Master Lawdog said:

I forgot if jonh said he’d be interested in doing a version with Sebastian Shaw or not. I wish he’d come back around soon. For all we know, he could finish the crackly saber sequences since he’s already done a far grander sequence in this project.

When speaking privately with Jonh, he informed me that he would try taking a crack at it.

Hopefully he won’t mind me posting this, but I reached out to MR and he told me he unsubbed from most threads and is just keeping in touch with some people via PM.

He’s having some computer issues and will hopefully rejoin the thread once they have been fixed.

@Testing really did a lot to hurt people’s morale around here…

EvantheKidDS said:

The idea I’m presenting is changing the angle of Tatooine and the Escape Pod so it falls in that direction and angle.

Hopefully this helps clarify your idea. I took your angle and modded it to be in the right ratio.

Master Lawdog said:

TM2YC did it on Fanedit.org. He titled it “Ghostbusters III.”

I saw, I’m not a fan of titling it that. It kind of ruins the immersion when you know its a reboot and not a sequel.

Jar Jar Bricks said:

Sirius said:

Hi. I don’t read all the messages of this thread, and the last time I saw TROS was in the cinema, so I have a question (if you guys doesn’t bothered to answer): In the scene of Luke and Leia training, what’s the difference between the new dialogue from this edit and the original dialogue from the movie? Just curious to know what improvement you are making on the scene, and how it helps to improve the film as a whole

We also replaced “you’ll take both sabers to Exegol” with “We’ll always be with you”. At least that’s how I remember it.

If my memory serves me right, the new dialogue should be as follows:

Luke: “There’s something my sister would want you to have…”

Rey: “Leia’s saber.”

Luke: “It was the last night of her training, Leia told me that she had sensed the end of her Jedi Path. She surrendered her saber to me and said that one day, it would be picked up again, by someone who would finish her journey. We’ll always be with you, but this is your fight.”

Rey: “I can’t get there. I don’t have the wayfinder. I destroyed Ren’s ship.”

Luke Skywalker : “You have everything you need.”

Flipped shots are always so distracting. I can forgive them for flipping one face. I’d say trim the scene but don’t flip it.

sherlockpotter said:

https://streamable.com/kpaie8

Perfection!

littlev87 said:

sherlockpotter said:

In other news, I’ve been playing with a new reading of the word “end” for the Leia training. I’m at the point now where I need a clean set of ears to listen to it. Let me know how it sounds, and if you think this version works any better than the other!

Old version (Version A): https://streamable.com/y02l42
New Version (Version B): https://streamable.com/6dn00m

I still think this is the best version.

https://streamable.com/ehphfh

Great work either way.

Also agreed. The word “end” just sounds so funky in the other versions since it is being cut together. This one sounds the most natural.

sherlockpotter said:

I was rewatching some clips from V1, and something stood out to me right at the end - when it goes from Rey’s Theme to the End Credit fanfare, it’s like there’s an extra note in there or something? So rather than hitting the end credits immediately, it’s almost like it hiccups a wee bit? Am I imagining it?

Nope, I had mentioned before that I feel it needs to be smoothed together a little more if possible. One trick I have learned is overlapping the audio and using volume levels and fades to crossfade more and that usually works well.

CamSMurph said:

Movies Remastered said:

Wow! That’s really appreciated. Sorry I’ve not been involved in conversation. I find it tough not contributing to an edit thats so close to finish.

I’ve honestly really missed the escapism. I hope you’re all doing good though.

Thanks guys.

How are you still active without a working computer? 🤔

Smartphones are a real thing 😉

Amazing work as always. Can’t wait!

Here’s my video, my editing software doesn’t have the proper credits transition but the point is there:
https://vimeo.com/266600925

I flipped the shots of the Falcon in hyperspace and the group shot and the music lines up perfectly. You just need to add sound effects for the hyperspace shot.

If it could be rearranged some it could better imply that Leia was passing her Jedi journey, and not just her saber, to someone else. Plus by re-adding some removed dialogue from this edit and repositioning it, it could make it more personal for Luke and Leia with Rey. Just food for thought to help the scene some 🤷‍♂️

Luke:
“There’s something my sister would want you to have.”

Rey:
“Leia’s saber…”

Luke:
"Leia surrendered her saber to me. She told me that she had sensed the end of her Jedi path and that one day, it would be picked up again, by someone who would finish her journey.

Rey, she saw your spirit, your heart… we’ll always be with you, but this is your fight."

EDIT