tehwallaby said:
I've been thinking, maybe ROTS needs a rewrite of the crawl... I'm not yet sure what it should be, but I'm working on it now.
Original:
War! The Republic is crumbling under attacks by the ruthless Sith Lord, Count Dooku. There are heroes on both sides. Evil is everywhere.
In a stunning move, the fiendish droid leader, General Grievous, has swept into the Republic capital and kidnapped Chancellor Palpatine, leader of the Galactic Senate.
As the Separatist Droid Army attempts to flee the besieged capital with their valuable hostage, two Jedi Knights lead a desperate mission to rescue the captive Chancellor....
New:
The Chancellor has gone missing. Republic intelligence have tranced the Chancellor's homing beacon to a Confederacy ship containing both Count Dooku and the mysterious cyborg, General Grievous.
The rage of war still lingers on after years of endless battles and as affected all corners of the galaxy, the Republic split in two.
The kidnap of the Chancellor has sparked a conflict near Coruscant, two Jedi make there way through the battle with the aid of Republic forces to rescue the Chancellor from Dooku's firm grip....
Well thats what i would like to see anyways haha