DuTwan

Original:

It is a dark time for the
Rebellion. Although the Death
Star has been destroyed,
Imperial troops have driven the
Rebel forces from their hidden
base and pursued them across
the galaxy.

Evading the dreaded Imperial
Starfleet, a group of freedom
fighters led by Luke Skywalker
has established a new secret
base on the remote ice world
of Hoth.

The evil lord Darth Vader,
obsessed with finding young
Skywalker, has dispatched
thousands of remote probes into
the far reaches of space…

My edit:

It is a dark time for the
Rebellion. Although the Death
Star has been destroyed,
Imperial troops have driven the
Rebel forces from their hidden
base and pursued them across
the galaxy.

Evading the dreaded Imperial
Starfleet, a group of freedom
fighters led by the Luke Skywalker

under the name of Starkiller
has established a new secret
base on the remote ice world
of Hoth.

The evil lord Darth Vader,
obsessed with finding young
Starkiller, has dispatched
thousands of remote probes into
the far reaches of space…

Ive just thought what about if instead on saying luke skywalker in the epilogue, why cant we say he had been known as the starkiller since he indeed destroyed the death star. This is a wink to the old story and make an alias for luke and thus vader tryin to find out who the starkiller is, on top of that the emporer finds out the real name and making the whole hologram scene in the asteriod field. Anybody thinks this is a good idea?

Ithilgore said:

On battledroids, for the most part they'r grand in TPM, they sound just like emotionless robots, and are mostly functional, except for one or two instances. The first time they talk, with the roger roger crap, is usually muted, which makes perfect sense, why would they be talking loudly outside where two Jedi might stil be alive, shouldn't they try to creep in? Also the "Where are you taking them/does not compute" joke is corny, but seeing as it's pretty much the only battledroid joke in the whole film, it doesn't really stick out. Very little work needed on this film's droids.

 

Now AOTC, the droids aren't in a lot, but when they are, their voices have gotten a lot more annoying, and goofy. The super battledroids don't speak at all ,which was nice, it kept them intimadating. Again, very littl needed to do, but what does need to be done, really needs to be done.

 

But ROTS, god damn, what a horror to the senses. Every single droid in this is annoying, and childish. Every single one. Even the hulking super battle droids got those stupid high pitched voices, it's so juvenile. Worst of all, they feature the most out of all the prequels. This one needs as much redubbing as possible, preferrably similiar to the emotionless tones of the TPM droids, or at least something just as neutral and robotic.

 Thats one thing i hated about Episode 3. The droids started sounding like children, what???

In Episode 3 where R2D2 is hidin with two super destroyer droids are checking out the ships what should of been scripted is this (in a that TPM kinda voice):

Droid 1: What was that sound?

Droid 2: There are no life readings on my sensors/scanners

Or something along those lines. Make these droids robots and not people lmao

tireeg said:

Thanks now I know

 G.I. Jooooooooooooeeeeeee!!!!

Family Guy fans will know that joke :P

Ripplin said:

Ithilgore said:

What a mess.

But in the end, each faneditor will just do whatever they want. :p We know there are some strong opinions on the subject, some unswayable, it seems. (not that it matters. I don't really care what colors they are in the PT, to be honest. The only one that bugs me is the purple one because Samuel Jackson got special treatment)

 

 To be honest ive spoken before regarding lightsaber colour, the purple lightsaber never really bothered too me. If anything though sam shud of had blue. Blue lightsabers throughout 5 films would be just horrible for one reason, blue everywhere. Clones have blue laser bolts i believe? droidekas have blue shields, there blue shields on ships, then blue lightsabers everywhere. God it would be too much, lucas keepin with just blue and green was gd move. My opinion blue and green for all jedi including Mace. Luke having a green lightsaber in ROTJ was enough to show look!!! luke has new saber!!

Lightsaber colour reflects the jedi personality and choice. So blue and green people, blue and green. No yellow, orange, magenta, violet, pink etc etc etc

Molly said:

There's boards for fandubbers.  I want to say Voice Acting Alliance?

 Hahaha im lovin it, the VAA. the voice acting alliance has a nice ring to it lol.

mrbenja0618 said:

Ok guys... Don't let this thread die... If we could pull this off, imagine what could happen in SW fan editing!

Yay! Keep my thread alive mrbenja0618!!!!

Guys we need voice artists to create some demos. in the form of youtube videos. mp3s etc.

EyeShotFirst said:

That is pretty good. Grevious sounds less cartoony.

 Haha thanx, was gonna do some mores voices tonite but my throat killin me along with me droppin to sleep as i type this. Seriously startin to consider swine flu, started last few days and ive been feeling worse

Josh said:

DuTwan said:Hey guys just uploaded video, hope you all enjoy, these are just voices that i can do. I can create my own voices and nationalities and accents. These is just for fun :D http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bfOCJ1MfIFs

 

 Those were good! But for some reason your Grevious sounded like G1 megatron. lol

 Haha sorry if i sounded different, it was my interpretation of Grievous. I would redub my voice to footage too but i dont know how to convert dvd files to use in windows media player etc. Deadlock did well with my voice, heres he link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t4ZIcFOcKAA&feature=channel_page

Will redub some lines, upload em on youtube. please subscribe to www.youtube.com/dutwan so you can have updates but i will anouce it on here too

Though it would be nice to see some screenshots, I am more excitin about watch behind the scenes.

The star destroyer thing would be great to see on the screen but as someone said it would just be eye candy at the end of the day. Just think you need a quick clip of maybe a couple of stormtroopers raising there guns in bespin of see a couple of tie fighters flying through that clip of the people around bespin just without laser bolts hittin things, isnt needed i think. Need something subtle really. To be honest I dont mind if nothing is really changed in that scene purely because we know whats going on, we just dont see it on a big scale.

So guys what left on the list that Adywan hasnt changed yet that we can discuss?

EyeShotFirst said:

I don't mind doing voice acting. I was in theater in high school.

 Well this is a perfect place to keep lookin for jobs then lol. Hopefully this thread will get a bit more busy soon, im sure there a few editors out there that are desperate to replace some voices.

Hey everyone, just opened this thread just to kind of build a groundworks for voice actors would would like to help in re-dubs for fan films and also for people also looking for voices. I have done a few things with my voice but would now like to make a 30 second youtube video showing my talents and hopefully get on board with a fanedit/redub. In my video I do my version of Grievous too.

Many Thanx

Du Twan

Just coz Ady aint on doesnt mean we cant keep on topic, we can discuss other things. Isnt there a list of things that need improving and cant we discuss those?

Davnes007 said:

What I think of the whole "Anakin's Hair" idea.

Don't hate me...

Haha dont worry i dont hate you at all. Was just an idea i had and did it, ppl found it funny whereas i didnt mean it in a humorous way just kinda get hayden/sebastian mix lol

right guys, ive darkened the hair on my mock up off sebastian. Will give you the images from original seb, first edit and new seb.

Darth Chronus said:

brash_stryker said:

DuTwan said:

 

 

 

Hey guys, since ppl hated the hayden insert into ROTJ i thought what could i do to try and bring hayden to sebastian shaw. So after a couple of quick ideas i thought this is the most simple. I have made the hair slightly longer but not as long as hayden's. So half way between old anakin and new. Added scar the the left eye too, not too noticable but not distracting either lol. Hope u guys enjoy!

 

Cant help but see the Doc Brown when i look at sebastian shaw lmao. No! Marty! Gotta go to light speedlight but we need a current of 10 gigawatts!!!

I think this is a VERY good idea. It immediately makes him more recognisable as the guy in the prequels, rather than a whole different person.

Also, WHAT THE HELL IS A GIGAWATT?! :P

I like that concept :) He needed longer hair and that's perfect tbh

 

1.21 GIGAWATTS! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iGlrobvb-ao

 

 haha thats wot i thought of wen i first said it. For some reason i think of him being in the cockpit of the millenium falcon! glad you guys like, might give it another go, maybe try and make things bit more natural.

Hey guys, since ppl hated the hayden insert into ROTJ i thought what could i do to try and bring hayden to sebastian shaw. So after a couple of quick ideas i thought this is the most simple. I have made the hair slightly longer but not as long as hayden's. So half way between old anakin and new. Added scar the the left eye too, not too noticable but not distracting either lol. Hope u guys enjoy!

Cant help but see the Doc Brown when i look at sebastian shaw lmao. No! Marty! Gotta go to light speedlight but we need a current of 10 gigawatts!!!

Im gonna suggest something now thats gonna blow ppl away i think, its either gonna be a good discussion or completely shot down lmao. How about we reedit anakins lightsaber to green for all of AOTC, that way luke and his father both changed colour at the end of the trilogy, luke on tatooine, anakin on grievous' ship lol gonna try and edit a pic from somewhere

Right then here we go lol. As i said no insignia on jedi ships but a range of colours which doesnt look much different than we have seen before. Here we go anyways...

tehwallaby said:

Absolutely brilliant. I commend your work, and hope that I'll be able to borrow your designs in my edit (provided I don't switch over to Headhunters). I'd love to see what you'd do with Jedi Starfighters.

 Just giving it a go atm. Findin it hard to think of colours for Jedi too. Because their crafts were theirs, theirs crafts were for the and doesnt belong to a squadron. Best i can do at the minute is bring the colour down again but other markings and stuff wouldnt make much sense. Will be giving it ago but can only give you guys a range of colours on the whole of the ship.

Hope you guys like, thought i would show you what these things could look like if the yellow colour was dulled down and if we added coloured squadrons.

Right from Original (Top Left), Red (Top Right), My first edit (Middle left), Green (Middle Right), Gold (Bottom Left) and Black (Bottom Right)

tehwallaby said:

That's amazing, well done. If that could be put over N-1 starfighters I'd have no problem with them. Presumably the red could be blue, green, etc. to allow for different squadrons.

 All ready doing that! lol. Making a collage :)

right i gave it a quick go, tryin to put the colours and stripes etc with the design of the starfighter to avoid it lookin too much in your face and that was the point of takin the colour down.

EyeShotFirst said:

now that looks pretty cool. Add some decals/stripes and it will be even more OT esque.

 givin it a go atm, tryin to go for a x-wing kinda look.....kinda :S lmao