Grand Admiral Thrawn

Please tell me his line is: “Mistress Rey, he’s too powerful… what are you going to do?” 😂😂😂

Release a new special edition of The Phantom Menace, downgrading all the other effects but updating Jar Jar to the best of current gen graphics

TestingOutTheTest said:

My suggestions generally improve Terrio’s dialogue in the opening scene with Kylo and Palps so it’d be less clunky.

That is fully YOUR opinion, and using that as an argument for a change won’t get you there in any fanedit. Actually explaining how the change betters fits or improves the character arcs will make your suggestions better received.

Please consider making your own thread for these or post in the Rise of Skywalker Fanedit Ideas thread and stop bloating this one with changes that are backed solely with “because I think it’s better that way” or changes that would be practically impossible to do.

TestingOutTheTest said:

There’s those Tarkin and Leia deepfakes for Rogue One.

@TestingOutMyPatience, these were included in Hal’s edit of Rogue One as someone did them on YouTube and was nice enough to share their work. I’m sure if you made something passable that looked like it could be in the original film, it would probably be considered for this edit. Some of these suggestions would be better received in this thread.

Jar Jar Bricks said:

With the latest Bad Batch episode (light spoiler) it seems like it’s canon that those experimental cloning tubes are filled with green liquid. Are we going to stick with the red or is green a possibility? I seem to remember Poppa making two different versions.

I believe this is the version

What if a line was added?

Palpatine: “The Jedi are dead! I am all the Sith! A scavenger girl is no match for the power in me, you are nothing.”

Rey: “No… I’m a Jedi.”

Or:

Palpatine: “Laughing… I am all the Sith! A scavenger girl is no match for the power in me, you are nothing.”

Rey: “No… I’m a Jedi.”

Neerb said:

Haha, I thought someone must have suggested it earlier. I do think it’s the best option if it’s doable. I guess it was shot down almost immediately when you first brought it up, but I don’t think the demo did the idea justice, so I’m still curious if it’s really possible.

To me, having it that way is the only way the “I am a Jedi” pays off well in Rey’s arc. Hopefully the new demo sways some opinions on how doable it may be.

DZ-330 said:

The only way I can see the dialogue working with Rey saying “No” is as follows:

Palpatine: “I am all the Sith! A scavenger girl is no match for the power in me. You are nothing.”

Rey: “No… I’m a Jedi.”

Bump 😉

Building on what @sherlockpotter had:

Episode IX
THE RISE OF SKYWALKER

Flames of rebellion burn across the galaxy! Inspired by Luke Skywalker’s heroic act, countless worlds have taken a stand in the name of Resistance. As Rey, sole heir to the Jedi, continues her training.

Hoping to quell this growing uprising, the tyrannical First Order has begun silencing any planetary system that supports their enemy.

Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren, having sensed a new power rising in the shadows, has traveled to Mustafar, determined to destroy any threats to his rule…

TestingOutTheTest said:

I’m giving out suggestions and contributing to the edit.

I can send you a link if you want. So can Hal. That way you can actually watch the edit to help improve the suggestions you’re making. Just PM me and I’ll be glad to share!

TestingOutTheTest said:

Apologies. I didn’t actually watch Ascendant, I just judged based on the movie’s plot and the list of changes.

Then why are you posting in this thread?! This deal keeps getting worse all the time.

Episode IX
THE RISE OF SKYWALKER

Flames of rebellion burn across the
galaxy. The tyrannical First Order has
retaliated by silencing any planetary
system that supports their enemy.

As Rey, sole heir to the Jedi,
continues her training, General Leia
Organa sends her brave agents across the
stars to unite the disparate worlds in
the name of Resistance.

Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren,
determined to destroy any threat to
his power, has traveled to Mustafar,
where an ancient artifact of the SITH
has been discovered…

TestingOutTheTest said:

“Mysterious origins of Snoke”? Come on, his backstory can already be inferred from TFA.

Do you ever stop? If you have nothing of substance to add then get the hell off this thread. Everything in your article is solely opinions and things inferred by you alone. At this point I’d be glad to watch a TotT edit of TROS. Oh wait, that’s the original movie.

I feel like this edit has come to far to rely on what is in the crawl now. If something is better for the sake of the story and character motivations then maybe the crawl could be changed to help those adjustments.

Episode IX
THE RISE OF SKYWALKER

Flames of rebellion burn across the
galaxy. The tyrannical First Order has
retaliated by silencing any planetary
system that supports their enemy.

As Rey, sole heir to the Jedi,
continues her training, General Leia
Organa sends her brave agents across the
stars to unite the disparate worlds in
the name of Resistance.

Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren has
traveled to Mustafar, chasing whispers of
an ancient artifact that could explain the
mysterious origins of his former master…

TestingOutTheTest said:

I feel like Palps’ reveal should remain in the crawl, this time putting a halt to TLJ’s theme of hope in the beginning of the movie.

The whole reason the crawl was changed was to remove the cheapening effect of having a major character return be announced via an opening crawl, and in terms of this edit it does not make sense to have it there.

Jar Jar Bricks said:

I like this one. Only two modifications I’d make are removing the bold font of First Order and Resistance. Also, I feel like the last paragraph of the one we currently have is better. Although perhaps we could bold HIDDEN POWER in that one.

Here is the crawl with your suggestions:

Flames of rebellion burn across
the galaxy. Inspired by Luke Skywalker’s
heroic sacrifice, countless systems have
taken a stand in the name of resistance.

To suffocate this growing uprising,
the tyrannical First Order has silenced
all communication between neighboring
systems. Fear is everywhere.

Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren
has traveled to Mustafar, chasing
whispers of a HIDDEN POWER that
would allow him to destroy any
threat to his rule…

If we’re opening up the crawl debate again…

Flames of rebellion burn across
the galaxy. Inspired by Luke Skywalker’s
heroic sacrifice, countless systems have
taken a stand in the name of RESISTANCE.

To suffocate this growing uprising,
the tyrannical FIRST ORDER has
silenced all communication between
neighboring systems.

Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren
has traveled to Mustafar, chasing
whispers of an ancient artifact,
that would allow him to destroy any
threat to his rule…

Boy that original red looks so ugly

Hal 9000 said:

sherlockpotter said:

Or scream “NOOOOOOOO” as he falls into the Infinity Pit.

Now we’re talkin’.

Reuse Palpatine’s scream like they did in Empire '97
“yeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh”

Jar Jar Bricks said:

The novelization had his last line be in Rey’s head after he dies: “Noones ever really gone.” Not only is it a nice callback to Luke, but it also explains why Rey suddenly looks happy as she’s flying away in her X-wing.

Too bad he never said that anywhere.

It would be pretty easy to include “Rey, you’re not alone. You’ve become what you were meant to be.” using quotes from the hand touch and throne room scenes in TLJ.

Edit: Although that quote may be better to include in the Jedi voices section.

TestingOutTheTest said:

What’s wrong with Ben’s “ow” being his final line?

This is a fanedit, we can suggest changing his last line to be something more meaningful than a summary of this trilogy of films.

Anyways… since Dat_SW_Guy appeared to drop his project of extending the ending of the film due to either personal/technical reasons on his end, is this still being considered and/or has someone decided to try working on this?

The scene being the Falcon going into space above Tatooine so the end song can end a little more triumphantly before it cuts to the credits.

TestingOutTheTest said:

So… refuting criticisms of a movie you guys don’t like is trolling or bullshitting?

wonders if the mods are watching so he can be blocked from this thread

I don’t think subtitles are needed since they aren’t talking with the main characters.

TestingOutTheTest said:

Hal, maybe you’re right. But I feel like I recommend against making the mention of “Skywalker” be the thing that causes Rey to look at the kids - she looks at the kids in the first place because they are what she and the Resistance are fighting for.

The movie is called The Rise of Skywalker…

The scene immediately afterwards she is asked for her “family name”.

The whole puppet show and surrounding scene is used to help reinforce the ending of the film and actually make Rey’s name change feel earned.

Rey reacting to “Skywalker” helps to show that the spark that will ignite the fire that will burn down the First Order because of Luke’s sacrifice is still alive and it is worth it for her to continue fighting and accept being a Jedi. Because THAT’S what she and the Resistance are fighting for.