Something like this?
I also agree with the slight reordering of the opening scenes to break up the Ajan Kloss material! It improves the pacing greatly by making it feel like time is passing, and flows more naturally from the dialogue.
I’m slowly getting convinced that you aren’t human with how quick you pump out new effects lol. Plus the restructure is something I was a strong advisor for.
Kylo: “Who is she?”
Cuts to Rey scene
Allows time to pass
“Still no word from the Falcon”
Cuts to Falcon scene
Falcon gets message from Bolio and we cut to new establishing shot of Ajan Kloss and Rey reading the texts with “Rey, the Falcon’s back!”
I’ll mock something up later for this. I think I have a good idea for fixing the abruptness of the ending of the ice wall scene