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#1302761
Topic
The Last Jedi: Legendary (SPOILERS)
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I know this might not be a popular idea, but for the final version of V3 I really think Yoda’s “Ahh, read them have you? Page turners they not!” joke should get cut out. By having Luke basically confirm that he didn’t even read any of the texts makes him seem childish in his behavior and hurts his change of heart. Why would Luke be so concerned about the text and protecting the legacy of the Jedi if he didn’t even bother to read the ancient texts? I think the scene would work and flow much better without the MCU-style humor.

Basically the dialogue would pace out as follow:

Luke: “The sacred Jedi texts!”

cut out joke and Luke’s reaction shot

Yoda: “Yes, yes, yes. Wisdom they held, but that library contains nothing that the girl Rey does not already possess.”

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#1300418
Topic
Star Wars Episode III: Labyrinth Of Evil (Finished!)
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Hal 9000 said:

That’s a nice trick about copying to one’s own Google Drive. I added that to the FAQ file listed at the top of the ‘Hal 9000 SW edits’ directory.

Also, please refer to that FAQ file for a tip on another place to find these if the Google Drive is currently stalled out.

Can confirm this works. Have been using it this way since TFA:R V2

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#1290868
Topic
Episode IX: The Rise Of Skywalker - Discussion * <strong><em>SPOILER THREAD</em></strong> *
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Have Snoke be a possessed darkside worshiper that Palpatine’s spirit took over.

If Palps is supposed to be in Episode 9, then that would be the best way to retcon him as the true villain of the sequel trilogy.

Have him take over Kylo Ren and Ben sacrifices himself to save Rey during the final battle. Palps would not have any dark siders to possess and it would be over.

Leia dies from ongoing sickness/injury from her spacewalk in TLJ at the end of the movie and we end with all of the heroes at her funeral and all of the Jedi’s force ghosts show up to honor her and mark the prophecy as fullfilled. Thus, the Skywalker bloodline is over and we end the saga with a group shot of everyone.

Roll credits

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#1283931
Topic
Star Wars Episode II: The Approaching Storm (Finished!)
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+1 for the droid factory

I think I have a good idea for the Anakin/Padme scene in the garage that you should give a second chance.

Scene flow:
Padme: "you’re not all powerful
Anakin: “well I should be!”
Cut to Padme saying “Anakin!”
Cut to angry Anakin calming and sitting down and saying he should be better that this even though you can tell he is questioning it

Padme just sees it as him lashing out after his mom died and comforts him but what the scene really shows is the conflict building in Anakin that he wants to be more powerful and that as a jedi he shouldn’t think that way. It plays well into your version in LOE and starts to hint at Anakin’s turn to be more powerful.

Just a thought!

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#1281291
Topic
Star Wars Episode III: Labyrinth Of Evil (Finished!)
Time

I think the shots should be flipped for dramatic effect if possible.

Yoda
Padme
Troopers
Anakin

It builds up the line from C3P0 telling Padme that Anakin came back to the temple. We think maybe he might have a change of heart only to be reminded of his darkness.

JEDIT: I can’t remember if LOE has the shot of Anakin marching up to the temple.