+1 for the droid factory
I think I have a good idea for the Anakin/Padme scene in the garage that you should give a second chance.
Padme: "you’re not all powerful
Anakin: “well I should be!”
Cut to Padme saying “Anakin!”
Cut to angry Anakin calming and sitting down and saying he should be better that this even though you can tell he is questioning it
Padme just sees it as him lashing out after his mom died and comforts him but what the scene really shows is the conflict building in Anakin that he wants to be more powerful and that as a jedi he shouldn’t think that way. It plays well into your version in LOE and starts to hint at Anakin’s turn to be more powerful.
Just a thought!