Collipso

Would it work if the crawl doesn’t talk about the Starkiller Base? Then you’d be able to explain how the First Order got to where it’s at without cramming too much information into the crawl. Maybe instead of talking about Leia being haunted by her visions of Starkiller, and that being what prompted her into action, just talk about how she thinks the First Order is a threat more so than anyone else, a threat that needs some sort of resistance to fight against it. And the version of the last paragraph I liked the most was the one that started with “While on a daring mission…”

Sorry if I made some terrible mistake grammar-wise, English is not my first language. :S

Looking forward to your edit NeverarGreat!

PS: loved the little clips you have already, especially the hyperspace one Adywan commented about. 😉

doubleofive said:

Collipso said:

Adywan, do you plan on changing the font used on “RETURN OF THE JEDI” in the title crawl to the font used for The Empire a Strikes Back and A New Hope’s crawls? Sorry for asking again if you have already answered this.

He already fixed the crawls!

https://youtu.be/F51kdD6raUc

I knew I was missing out on something. Thank you!

Adywan, do you plan on changing the font used on “RETURN OF THE JEDI” in the title crawl to the font used for The Empire a Strikes Back and A New Hope’s crawls? Sorry for asking again if you have already answered this.

HerekittykittyX said:

Please Tell me you took out Vader screaming noooooooooooooooo

Yes he did, don’t worry. It’s all based on the theatrical version except for the very ending.

Hello friend. Please help me with something, how can I get this edit? I don’t know how to or where to look for it. Thank you.