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#1459616
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Fan edits of Star Wars novels : 'Labyrinth of Evil' edit released
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Currently on chapter 36. So far the additional editing is very seamless. I have some notes on what I feel can be approved on.

  • I’ve noticed that Maul is still considered to be dead. Unsure if this was intentional or forgotten to be changed in the edit.

  • I think it would be helpful to have a chapter heading between the chapters before and after the events of the ‘Battle of Nelvaan’ for the reader to know when to stop and continue.

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#1454060
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The Clone Wars: Refocused [up to s01e05 upgraded to v2.0]
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EddieDean said:

Excellent, thanks Paja! I haven’t changed much of the original order at all, but have some questions!

  • The Maul content works very well standalone, with including these episodes between one another I feel boosts a fiercer danger in the background.
  • The Mortis arc being situated here I believe strengthens Yoda’s arc by perhaps having the viewer wonder later if the vast majority of the events in that arc were just a vision or not.
  • Scipio felt like a nice and slow interval, especially after the events of Ahsoka’s fall.
  • I feel the first Yoda episode would be better off merged with the later three.
  • Not much to say on Son of Dathomir. I thought was a great and small inclusion.
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#1450054
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Ranking the Star Wars films
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The Clone Wars Series
The Original Trilogy is tied
The Last Jedi (The majority of the comedy wasn’t that consistent with the rest of films but other than that it was really fantastic to me)
Clone Wars Micro Series
The Force Awakens

Unsure:

Solo (I’ve eventually got to rewatch this again)
Rogue One (Same with Solo)
The Prequel Trilogy (I really love the what spawned from them (novels, cw, lore, etc) though otherwise not for me)
I haven’t seen The Rise of Skywalker and kinda don’t plan to.

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#1442709
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The Clone Wars: Refocused [up to s01e05 upgraded to v2.0]
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EddieDean said:

Amazing, thanks! I really appreciate it. Here’s a quick screen test. What do you guys think?

A couple of thoughts, if nitpicking is OK Paja:

  • I wonder if we should keep the ‘THE’? Not sure on this one. Technically this whole show will still be ‘The Clone Wars’ (and the ‘Refocused’ of my edit won’t appear in the opening title).
  • The ‘E’ slightly overlaps the rightmost edge of the imaginary box described by the horizontal bars - could the ‘CLONE WARS’ be slightly reduced/shifted so that it fills that box?
  • Perhaps a little more spacing between ‘WARS’ and the lower horizontal bar? The same as the distance between the top horizontal bar and the ‘C’ in ‘CLONE’ feels about right? Or maybe all three gaps (the one above CLONE, the one between CLONE and WARS, and the one below WARS) should be the same as the one between CLONE and WARS?
  • Not sure if this is possible, since I’d guess the way this was done was by tracing over the lettering, but can ‘CLONE WARS’ be sharpened at all? It looks a little blurry to my eyes, though I don’t think that’s a major issue.

Thank you for the feedback Eddie! I’ve came back to the drawing board using higher quality materials and a custom font for the ‘CW’ logo.

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#1442583
Topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [up to s01e05 upgraded to v2.0]
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EddieDean said:

IMAGE HELP REQUEST

Is anyone able to help me produce a high-res (~1080p) version of the Tartakovsky Clone Wars microseries logo (in this font) on black (or transparent)? Either pure yellow (this exact shade) on black, or the ‘fuzzy transmission’ style (like this) on black? Alternatively, putting the Tartakovsky Clone Wars logo inside the ‘Star Wars’ container the same way as the regular Clone Wars does (like this) would be even cooler.

I’d like to use it to replace my current logo for the two made of Tartakovsky content.

Hello there Eddie. I’ve taken the interest of tackling this, here’s my attempt.