krausfadr

@Artisdead I’m not leaving FE. I just don’t have an interest in posting my edits there.

EDIT: Sometimes it helps just to communicate. So I’ve removed my comments here about FE Staff.

CamSMurph I agree you must own the source and follow all the rules designed not to interfere with the studios interests. EDITED

Vilgefortz said:

krausfadr - are you sure you didn’t overreacted a little?

Sure that’s possible. EDIT: issues resolved

Oh that’s great CamSMurph. I would love to see what you come up with.

EDIT: And I agree with FE’s rules and strictness. They need to be. But there’s a limit.

The Cleaner - By Maniac
(an edit of The Professional a.k.a. Leon)

Maniac has definite style. He hits his edits with both a scalpel and a sledgehammer. In this version you will not find much of the chit chat which effectively eliminates the stereotypical racist tropes Luc Besson can’t help but add to his films. While I still prefer the original version, if you want the fast and dirty romp this is the way to go.

Not all the cuts are completely smooth, and the audio sounds a little muddy, like it’s been normalized, squashed and all sorts of processed. The sound is not completely terrible but not as clean as the original. Also gone is the ending music by Sting but in it’s place a kind of similar sounding soft track. Given the other changes made, such as our favorite hitman smiling giddily while watching the bloody shootout in Scarface, I would have bet on more hardcore outgoing music. Alas we got an odd tropical farewell.

Maniac has no time for mickey mouse bullshit, including end credits. 3 out of 5 stars.

bob79519 said:

Fanedit.org sucks because of it’s admins.

Some of them are pretty good. And overall it’s a very good site with a lot of potential. But the tactics of a few admins can certainty make it unpleasant, for sure, when they overstep a reasonable level of authority.

Thanks WXM. OT has always been a great resource and a positive place to visit.

A Dune (2021) film editing project by krausfadr

To inquire about this edit, email krausfadr at gmail dot com and include the word fanedit in the subject line.

Goals:
Improve overall image contrast
Remaster the 5.1 channel surround
Re-score a few scenes, especially the “leaving Caladan” montage
Use material from the soundtrack’s sketchbook but remix and refine some of the chord progression
Be more true to the book
Much less of the blatant expository from various characters
Duke Leto Atreides must be more decisive and commanding
Lady Jessica from the book was more outwardly in control of her emotions
Reduce Liet Kynes dialogue slightly (the Judge of the Change), make her a stronger character
Add blood VFX in multiple scenes
A more serious and dramatic tone for ending part one of this epic story

Change List (CONTAINS SPOILERS):

1. The cinematography and color grading was beautiful but a little low on the contrast. Increased contrast slightly throughout, backing off on the enhancement as needed.
2. Removed the weird, non-book message, “dreams are messages from the deep” from the very beginning, before the movie logos appeared.
3. Added a shortened book quote by the Princess Irulan after the opening title, Dune, appears, to deepen the theme of betrayal.
4. Cut the shot of Chani while Paul listens to the recording about the Fremen. We’ve seen her plenty already— even by this early point.
5. Cut Paul complaining at breakfast that he just woke up, not wanting to use the voice.
6. Reprocessed Leto’s dialogue throughout to make his voice fuller and more commanding.
7. Leto does not fidget nervously as the ceremony begins. He acts like a Duke!
8. Thufir, the mentant’s eyes don’t go white while he’s thinking. Mentats close their eyes when in very deep thought. They don’t roll them back, showing the whites.
9. Removed one of the closeups of Paul during the ceremony; this moment is about Leto.
10. In the bonding moment with his father, Paul doesn’t doubt he is the future of House Atreides.
11. Gurney doesn’t clench his fists and say to Paul, “can you imagine the wealth,” when lecturing Paul about the Harkonnens. It wasn’t the best looking take.
12. Trimmed Gurney’s intense face shaking when he says the Harkonnens are bruuuuutal! It wasn’t the best looking take either.
13. Trimmed Rabban’s over-the-top temper tantrum while speaking to his uncle, the Baron Harkonnen, to make the exchange more believable. Also removed Rabban’s direct reference to the Duke.
14. Cut Jessica’s super scared face as she waits for the Bene Gesserit ship.
15. Removed the stylized camera movement that honed in on the Gom Jabbar.
16. Cut the Reverend Mother’s obvious expository about what the Gom Jabbar does.
17. Replaced the weird, crispy hand vision during the Gom Jabbar test with a burning hand shot from the original 1984 Dune film (with some added grading / VFX / SFX to make it acceptable).
18. Added burning/sizzling SFX during the scene to better demonstrate Paul’s hand burning in the box. It stops when he withdraws his hand.
19. Trimmed Jessica’s hardcore crying outside the door as Paul takes the test.
20. Jessica doesn’t puff out a pathetic breath of relief after seeing Paul alive, having passed the test.
21. Cut Lady Jessica crying yet again when the Reverend Mother says mean stuff and departs.
22. Less wind in Lady Jessica’s face from the departing ship, so she’s not a flailing oaf.
23. Re-scored and remixed the montage of Paul and the Royal family preparing to leave Caladan. Used and tweaked a much better track from the soundtrack sketchbook.
24. After Thufir tells Paul and Lady Jessica, “let’s get you out of the sun” he doesn’t state the obvious that the desert heat can kill.
25. Changed intonation of Paul’s line to Kynes, “thank you for the stillsuits” so he sounds more confident and not asking a question.
26. Trimmed the length of the opening shot of the CG spider pet on Geigi Prime. The CG was adequate but not so realistic that it could hold up under such a prolonged shot.
27. Removed the subtitles as the conspirators speak under the beam of silence. It soon becomes clear what they are talking about.
28. Cut the wide shot of the Baron levitating in his gown, looking like the most horrible mermaid.
29. Changed the intonation of Leto asking Thufir, “it will take time?” after meeting with Stilgar. Leto says it, not asks it, and Thufir doesn’t repeat it. The movie tried to undermine Leto and make him look ineffective. No more!
30. Reprocessed all dialogue of Leit Kynes to make her voice sound stronger.
31. Trimmed conversation between Leto and Kynes after rescuing the crawler operators. Less verbosity make both appear stronger here.
32. Trimmed Dr. Yueh’s extended rubbing on Paul; he doesn’t remark about his spice sensitivity either.
33. Lady Jessica doesn’t explain why Paul can’t know she’s pregnant. No need to drag the scene on further with expository.
34. Slightly changed a few lines of the dialogue between the Sardaukar Bashar (commander) and the Baron’s minion, Piter. The Bashar now says, "If the Emperor commands it” not “the Emperor commands it.” If the Emperor had already commanded it, then they wouldn’t be having the conversation. Gurney and Duncan are no longer name dropped here either.
35. Lady Jessica isn’t crying while walking toward Leto’s room. Cheer up lady, you gave birth to the Kwizatz Haderach.
36. Added blood VFX during the battle with soldiers attacking the Atreides troops.
37. Added camera shake during the Sarduakar onslaught and reverse a shot to reduce the effect of a jarring jump cut.
38. Darkened the establishing shot of the transport flying in the desert, taking Paul and Lady Jessica to be executed.
39. Tweaked sound of the voice used by Paul and Lady Jessica on the transport. A little more affected voice.
40. Added some camera shake on the transport for several very still shots.
41. Added blood VFX when the deaf would-be rapist gets the short goodbye.
42. Trimmed Paul tripping his captor. The original looks so ineffective and laughable.
43. When Duncan confronts Kynes, cut the line, “the Emperor sent us here to die!” Too much expository here and Duncan acting weak.
44. Stylized and re-graded portions of the vision Paul has in the desert so it looks like a vision, not sneak peak clips of Dune Part 2, and so the entire vision has a more consistent look to it.
45. Trimmed some of the opening vision battle to lessen the painfully slow, one-take acrobatics of future Paul cartwheeling around on the battlefield, like he’s auditioning for Dancing With The Stars.
46. Paul doesn’t say help me during the vision. Less cutting back to his crying face as well.
47. Trimmed some of Paul squirming and kicking during the vision so he’s not acting like a baby. He also doesn’t yell at his mother in the voice. No in book and gives scene better impact.
48. Removed a weird foley sound effect after Paul yells at his mother, “Get off me!” It was supposed to sound like Lady Jessica recoiling, but it sounded more like foley from a 70’s kung fu movie.
49. Trimmed Lady Jessica’s crying… again.
50. In the morning, Paul doesn’t tell his mother she needs to drink. He just hands her the water, and she doesn’t act like it tastes bad.
51. Paul doesn’t explain to his mother they are drinking recycled water and that it’s from sweat and tears.
52. Re-scored and remixed the arrival at the Fremen base (Kynes’ water facility) with a stronger theme.
53. Kynes doesn’t explain about the water facility or how they had planned to turn Arrakis into an oasis. While this concept is in the book, the scene is not. And with the skill of the actor playing Kynes, less is more. Duncan still finds the plants growing, which is enough.
54. Added title explaining the facility where Kynes takes them.
55. Kynes doesnn’t ask for coffee service. Dialogue was trying too hard to immediately establish her as a leader, undermining her strength.
56. Paul doesn’t suggest he marries into the Emperor’s family, only then to be lectured by Kynes.
57. Paul doesn’t tell Kynes what he could do with Arrakis as Emperor.
58. Kynes doesn’t say, “he locked the door.” We clearly see that Duncan locked the door.
59. Paul pounds on the door where Duncan fights to the death, but he doesn’t pause his futile effort while his mother says unnecessary stuff.
60. Shoveled away Kynes expository dump as she sends Paul and Lady Jessica down the escape tunnel.
61. Trimmed and retimed some dialogue when shai-hulud comes to take Kynes, and rescored for better atmosphere.
62. Cut Chani explaining where the tooth of shai-hulud comes from. If by now you don’t know this, you were sleeping during the movie.
63. Moved the vision Paul has in the desert on his way to the Fremen sietch to happen right before he makes the killing blow to Jamis. Moving the vision here makes the killing of Jamis actually dramatic.
64. Reworked the vision so we see the desert mouse and Jamis. Chani removed. Re-graded to warm up the colors and keep it’s look consistent.
65. Restored book storyline where it is clear Paul cries after killing Jamis, and the Fremen remark that he “gives water to the dead.” Used audio from a deleted scene of the original Dune film.
66. Cut Chani’s extra cheerful exposition, “this is only the beginning,” reassuring us in the most annoying way possible there is a part 2.
67. Cut all the happy ending smiles and the ridiculous sandworm surfer.
68. In the future merge part 1 and 2 together, probably.

hedgesmfg said:

Those force skypes with Anakin must be pretty awkward…

Hahahahaha… omg

PM sent

New update is made to v2.0 (I didn’t do a v1.1 because this was a pretty good overhaul).

Thank you Colin Robinson.

CamSMurph the plan is the same as the last time I answered this same question from you.

Hal 9000 said:

I had not been in this thread for quite a while, and I am sorry to hear about any health issues and would like to wish you the best.

Hal thank you! Luckily I’m slowly bouncing back from severe pneumonia (and pulmonary embolism) and tests came back negative for cancer. So I’m doing much better.

PM’s sent

That was quite the impressive 30 second rotoscope to get everyone’s favorite giant lobster in there.

The 4K render of Dinner with Hannibal is now released.

Edit: current release is v1.0… and a v1.1 is in process as well, making the final interaction between H and his favorite FBI Agent a little creepier, tweaking the grading of deleted scenes, and a few other final fixes.

v3.0 is released:

Audio transition corrections, volume levels, center channel fill, and SFX work for seamless, professional level sound.
Improved night Ach-to regrade again.
Removed Luke’s V.O. during Rey’s vision with the cave serpent and replaced it with Kylo Ren‘s voice.
Added shot of dark side Rey to the vision with the cave serpent.
Added Vader’s castle into the Mustafar sequence from the Ascendant project. I fiddled around with the existing audio so it’s passable for now.
Changed and simplified the new Ren dialogue for the big reveal scene to remove the wonky, robotic dialogue!
Zoomed in a bit on old-school Obi-Wan so that his shot is similar to the other force ghosts.

Looking at how nicely Ascendant is coming along, I found my Resurgence project files (thought they were gone!) and am in the process of a major update to release version 3.0 by the end of 2021. This will make Resurgence a seamless professional level edit; changes include:

Audio transition corrections, volume levels, center channel fill, and SFX work for seamless, professional level sound.
Improved night Ach-to regrade again.
Removed Luke’s V.O. during Rey’s vision with the cave serpent and replaced it with Kylo Ren‘s voice.
Added shot of dark side Rey to the vision with the cave serpent.
Changed and simplified the new Ren dialogue for the big reveal scene to remove the wonky, robotic dialogue!
Zoomed in a bit on old-school Obi-Wan so that his shot is similar to the other force ghosts.

Sorry about all that bullshit that’s going on over there, MR. You being in the service industry, it’s such a hard hit with the pandemic. I hope things turn around for better soon.

I plan on probably doing a VERY LIGHT edit of the new 4K release of The Silence of the Lambs. But this would be a very light fix as this is a near perfect film as is. This would fix some things like Buffalo Bill using his night vision outdoors when it was not very dark and Jack realizing Clarice was in danger at the end when he had no reason to.

it should be ready in less than a week. I had to do redo with some slight DnR due to 50gb filesize of the encode

edit: ridley scott loves his grain with extra grain

Nibcrom said:

You wouldn’t happen to have this version without the narration, would you? 😃

Yes, there are two audio tracks included in my edit. One with edited narration and one with no narration.

Again thanks for reviewing, Vultural. I need to post some reviews of edits I’ve watched on your thread as well.

Vultural said:

Blade Runner - The Nexus-7 Cut - Krausfadr

Narrative - This is fix and not a mix, so nothing is changed. The ending is somewhat unresolved, and the unicorn abides. Unless you are deeply into Blade Runner, the unicorn is an enigma.

This ain’t at FE! What the hell?

It’s awesome when I see something of mine reviewed. Thanks for watching.

The main narrative change of N-7 is completely removing Zhora’s dossier so a first time viewer would be unsure if Deckard retired a human, that is, until Bryant comes along and calls her a skin job.

As far as FE goes, I’d love to have some of my edits approved over there, but FE does not seem to have the resources to incorporate new faneditors into their “approved” ranks, at least not within what most people would consider a reasonable amount of time. An edit of mine was in the FE queue for four months pending review, then unfortunately after that wait I got very sick and had to remove it from consideration. It would be nice if they made the process a bit easier (and thus faster) for new editors.

EDIT: I have learned FE will still look at an approved editor’s new release if any errors/glitches/glaring problems are pointed out by the viewers. They should be brought to attention in the user reviews section. People may be apprehensive to give critical reviews but this is important.