According to a very recent interview with Colin Trevorrow (May 8th) on AnimalTalking: He wasn’t fired. It was the bad reception of Book of Henry that prompted him to “hand over the ball” and leave
https://youtu.be/-Xl9F8bnJVM (50:00 - 52:00)
Could add a grogorian chant over it. If I remember correctly it was originally a ritualistic ceremony.
Suggestions:
Passana
-The beast of Kashyyyk
-Would make for a fine carpet…
-The mighty Chewbacca…
-I’ll hang his hide on the ship.
-his hide will make a fine addition to my collection.
kijimmi
-Kylo Ren’s pet is here… I can feel her presence.
-Skywalker’s jedi apprentice is close…move out.
-The girl that consumes our Master is here…she will pay the price.
Exogol
-Prince of Darkness!
-Lord Vader’s heir!
-How low have you fallen, and for what? A girl from nowhere?
-Seduced by the light, and we thought you were better than Vader…
-We were one, immune to the light. You’re sentiment for the girl has betrayed you, as it did your grandfather.
(sees lightsaber) So be it, Jedi.
I have a feeling the knights would be better suited with a British accent…
In that context I wonder if his robes could be changed to a brown or navy.
It’s from the TROS documentary.
Hal you’ve given the scene it’s soul.
It’s an idea worth throwing around but you’re right, showing that version of the ST to a young impressionable girl would be quite problematic.
I think that in general their dialogue has to somehow foreshadow their betrayal at the end.
Something like this combined with Poppa’s falcon ending could work for a Ben lives edit.
https://youtu.be/ljsEcVioFQ4
Here’s a new version of the ending. Based on some feedback, I tried to find an effective new arrangement of the Tatooine/Broom Boy clips. I found a moment I thought was interesting. Let me know what you guys think!
https://vimeo.com/418754884
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Hello editors, new to posting here, but have been fan-editing for a few years now on fanedit.org (mostly just workprints for my personal collection.) I am a huge fan of the Hal9000 Star Wars edits, they are definitive for me!
I have been watching this thread and just finished my own full trilogy edit. I am sure this is not the place to post but this is the thread I have been reading so I thought it was right to share here.
One thing that I haven’t noticed anyone mention but seems ok with the amount of changes being discussed:
I moved the moment of Ben reviving Rey to BEFORE she beats Palps. I am sure everyone here can take this idea and make it better, if it works at all.Again, I have nothing but admiration for what everyone is contributing! I know when this is all done, the result of the group effort will be amazing.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1i0kIgScAV_kSXZQuqXoO5d4-vH_Fvf-C/view?usp=sharing
Palpatine just watching there with his popcorn: “how cute”
Otherwise really well done!
Edit: Maybe you can add some background laughter from Palpatine, showing his amusement.
The idea originally came from one of Movies Remastered’s videos, I did a quick mockup of it here:
https://vimeo.com/413363922
I think Anthem of Evil was used too sparingly in the film. I only really noticed it after a few watches, definitely needs to be emphasised throughout.
Super underrated:
https://youtu.be/PmgJSpHCGiI
Fabulous work on the sound!
Looking forward to playing this level on the new lego star wars game!
“not fighting what you hate, but saving what you love”
I collected all the extended shots from the documentary. You’ll find it here in 1080p.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=12g6bRhWCga4VHEPc_1TZkenQAVXzxsyR
If you’re to use visions during the helmet scene, I would go for visions of Luke, Han, Leia and Rey showing Ben compassion, it demonstrates that deep down all he wants is to be loved, setting up his convo with Han.
As for the Deathstar scene I think the establishing shots are fine, the shots are a little stuttery though but as you said it’s a rough mockup. I would however shy away from using anything from the Vader Fan-film as it brakes the flow and tone of the scene, I’d cut from the inner establishing shots to Ben standing on the edge right before the Han convo.
I really dig everything on Tatooine. The ending is gold.
You’re on the right track with the establishing shots, they just need a little smoothing out.
Personally I would refrain for using any visions or flashbacks, it kinda feels like a greatest hits sequence, but that’s just me.
As the boy pulls the broom to him and begins sweeping, a voice crackles into a distant speaker. It is Poe, saying ‘We are not alone. What our mothers and fathers have fought for we will not let die. Today we make our last stand…for the galaxy!’ Many ships jump into hyperspace here, not just one.
Goosebumps.
Edit: Since Crait is now the opening of the film do you plan on including palpatines broadcast in there in some capacity? After the galaxie’s decline to help, hearing the broadcast could be what sets up the rallying of the people’s Fleet at the end of the film.
Yeah it’s a fascinating idea. It also goes back to how many Christian churches and cathedrals were built upon Pagan shrines and temples.
I see you’re putting your writing skills into use, Nev!
TLJ was already too long a film so moving the battle of crait into the opening might be just the right idea. It also allows the film to breathe and enjoy a fleshed out opening with dramatic action and character building. I wonder if some of the Cultists from Exogol could be added to the background in Snoke’s thrown room, Snoke’s allegiance to the Sith Eternal cult would need to be emphasised. Subtle things like playing around with the colour of his robes (purple, black, red) would really give him that “sith” aesthetic. Could even overlay subtle hints of Palpatine’s voice as he utters certain words like “a new Vader…”.
I’m really intrigued by how you’re approaching Kylo Ren in this. Is it meant to be implyed that he has become possessed by the spirit of Palpatine after striking down Snoke? It’s very reminiscent of the very early TROS leaks by MSW. I really like it.
I agree, I think his angle was “let’s stop pretending it’s not rebels v empire 2.0 and just say it how it is” which I disagree with.
TLJ was their chance at world building the state of the galaxy after ROTJ and unfortunately they did nothing with it .
Would have been sick to have Palpatine hiding in the sith shrine deep below the temple instead of Exogol, right under the noses of the New Republic and The First Order. Imagine the surprise of the destroyers emerging from deep below the surface of the industrial regions of the capital. A true power play.
Judging from this concept art this may have been the case in an early draft.
https://mobile.twitter.com/CultureCrave/status/1218324295765512192/photo/1
Absolutely. Recently watched the director’s cut of Ridley Scott’s Kingdom of Heaven, a phenomenal film that really highlights that idea.